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Vartanadel Royalty and Nobles
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valadaar's comment on 2013-08-02 09:24 AM
Such a nice game to distract the nobles from something else...
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Vartanadel Royalty and Nobles
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caesar193's comment on 2013-08-04 05:49 PM
Maybe being a simple, law-abiding peasant isn't such a bad thing in Vartanadel. Go to Comment
Vartanadel Royalty and Nobles
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-07-27 08:04 AM
Drow-like and chaotic. There's an added bonus in that any history records are expected to be flawed, so if you make a mistake, you can just play it off.

This part though;

Lorintand’s Guarshan posed no threat, they were above the petty disputes of the Noble Houses so their allegiance and honor remained intact as long as they served faithfully till the end. This was the end of the Noble House Lorintand and their oath would move to the best offer.

I don't get it, how are they supposed to serve faithfully till the end if they don't lift a finger to protect her? Serve the city then? Go to Comment
A Traveler’s Guide to Vartanadel
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Strolen's comment on 2013-07-06 11:41 AM
Should have seen it before the last proofread. :)

I will go over it again. Just ran out of time and if I kept delaying it would never make it to the site. And, yes, thank you for not correcting me. Go to Comment
A Traveler’s Guide to Vartanadel
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Strolen's comment on 2013-07-07 01:53 AM
Update: Did a reread and edit. Not sure if I made it better or worse though. :) Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2013-07-07 08:26 AM
Sounds like an outstanding idea for a huge line of plots. All leading up to the ghosting of another noble house. I am having some fun thinking about this place and you idea is brilliant! Go to Comment
A Traveler’s Guide to Vartanadel
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Strolen's comment on 2013-07-07 08:28 AM
I wouldn't disagree. I have done some briefings on it and the country and their history have fascinated me. Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-07-06 06:00 PM
Good to see some Decathros lovage! I love how this place is a political minefield and the wrong social step can mean the destruction of centuries worth of aristocracy. I can imagine pc's coming into Vartanadel under the authority of one of the lords, but if they act the wrong way it can mean the ruin of that lord; this would give plenty of opportunity to show off your roleplaying skills.

I had big plans for the mines in my Decathros game :D Go to Comment
A Traveler’s Guide to Vartanadel
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Cheka Man's comment on 2013-07-06 09:55 PM
A bit North Koreaish as a place. It must have a very strong King to rule it. Go to Comment
A Traveler’s Guide to Vartanadel
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2013-07-07 08:07 AM
I was reading this enjoying it as an afterthought until I began reading about the political influence the mines hold. I actually found myself getting angry at how the mines work and regardless of their actual profit or work load it is up to the whim of a sycophant that decides how the "money" flows.

I began having ideas of a arrogant, thoughtless, young, hotheaded (you know the type that bucks authority) coming into power of his house from some fateful reason and going to his families mine and overseeing its production first hand and bringing full proof to the masses about the truth of how the "Money" flows.

Assassination attempts, toppled houses, and riots could ensue if well planned and thought out. Interesting plot idea especially if the players are thrown into it to protect the noble family or to kill said family. Or both. Go to Comment
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-08-09 12:19 PM
This fantastic, I am so glad you wrote you and I am very pleased that I read it. I have to critique to offer this excellent write up, so I will just offer pointed praise. First I really appreciate and respect that you chose to present this an in world perspective. I think this is bit of departure for you, things aren't written in "crayon" here, we trust this information as much as we trust our narrator, and our narrator obviously has some hard feeling. But I think this slanted view also provides us with more information that a list of facts. It give us This is also so much better than an arrogant write up that comes out in an omnipotent third person voice and says something along the lines of "the king is kind and dull witted". We get experience this culture as we might experience any foreign land: with a mix prejudice, confusion, emotion and wonder. No culture in the real world can be seen without perspective and shouldn't we respect our game worlds just as much if we are aiming for verisimilitude?

I love this location so much I wrote up an entire location dedicated Vartanadel exiles.
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valadaar's comment on 2013-07-29 11:11 AM
Great location! I think cheka was in the right direction with the NK angle, it feels like a very stalinist society, with ghosting sorta replacing liquidation. Go to Comment
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-07-06 06:32 AM
I like it, reminds me of Menzoberranzan and Orlais from Dragon Age. I know you are one of those people who gets defensive over spelling, so I won't bother with typos. ;) Go to Comment
Vartanadel
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Strolen's comment on 2013-06-15 05:15 AM
This was my new test edit post. If everything in the citadel was going to be written over, I wanted it to be better than the graphic upload test. So those ddd were leftover from my test editing phase.

And I do want to spend more time on this. I needed a quick sub to test the submission scripts so used this. There are at least two more subs coming associated with this. When I bring those out, I will update this to give it a little more flavor. Go to Comment
Vartanadel
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Cheka Man's comment on 2013-06-14 08:21 PM
Very new and interesting. Go to Comment
Vartanadel
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-06-14 05:12 PM
I am a big fan of Vartanadel, perhaps its biggest fan. Indeed the Spiked sea is just Vartanadel fan fiction. So know there is much to this and a lot more to the society in your mind. Perhaps you might consider several small write ups. This could be a write up on the Naming. I also realize that this was submitted in a time of transition at the citadel, and perhaps you are not able to give all of your love. I enjoyed what was here, am glad you submitted it, and thinks the culture outlined provides lot of avenues for plot development and allegory. Go to Comment
Vartanadel
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-06-14 06:34 PM
the double d is a constant theme on this site Go to Comment
Vartanadel
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-14 06:08 PM
Solid idea and write-up. I can see the set-up of this society (with the Naming and all) will lead to a lot of intrigues and plots although I must say I personally never like pieces with so much political 'fickleness' implied. I was going to vote for a 3 but then decided against voting at all in case my personal bias will lead me to vote less objectively than I otherwise would.

Also, for some reason, you've got ddd attached in 2 places at the end of your words, once in the summary and once in the first heading 
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Sealed City of Roastone
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Strolen's comment on 2012-11-08 11:23 PM
I said dwarf a bunch of times, lots...and they live in a cave with a big door. What more could you possibly need?! What, do you think Hobbits could be substituted? Blasphemy.

Also, according to the Babel Fish in my ear, reading Troachoar means "This is Dwarven so don't knock it that it can be used for other things too even if seems like it can it really can't and is really for Dwarves and concentrated on Dwarves, Dwarves, Dwarves and it says Dwarves a lot."

The actual translation says Dwarves a lot more but I paraphrased.

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Sealed City of Roastone
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CrimsonShadow's comment on 2013-04-22 01:31 PM
This fit perfectly with an adventure I was working on. I anticipated a demon or something hiding in the city, but a creature without an agenda other than to exist is brilliant. Go to Comment
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