Oh, i dont think this needs much advice at all. I really like this. Flavorful, bucolic, rife with verisimilitude. The activities and traditions are quite enjoyable, cant decide whether i like the handfasting or rememberance more!
welcome Stephie! Great first post. I think its ready for the masses! Unless of course, you want to add even more wonderful detail.
A people who believe it is incredibly impolite to speak to anybody they meet for the first time. They believe their actions should speak for them until they are comfortable in each others presence and can then trust each other. Only then would converstation be appropriate.