Oh, i dont think this needs much advice at all. I really like this. Flavorful, bucolic, rife with verisimilitude. The activities and traditions are quite enjoyable, cant decide whether i like the handfasting or rememberance more!
welcome Stephie! Great first post. I think its ready for the masses! Unless of course, you want to add even more wonderful detail.
A tribe of barbarians appear wearing necklaces of bear claws and great cloaks of brown fur. They are physically much larger than normal humans, much stronger, and shrug of the most vicious of wounds. They call themselves the Aklak after their totem spirit.
- From the Inuit word for Grizzly Bear