Oh, i dont think this needs much advice at all. I really like this. Flavorful, bucolic, rife with verisimilitude. The activities and traditions are quite enjoyable, cant decide whether i like the handfasting or rememberance more!
welcome Stephie! Great first post. I think its ready for the masses! Unless of course, you want to add even more wonderful detail.
Locations (City) (Forest/ Jungle)