Great atmosphere came through in the post with enough about the town and the inn to make it stand very solidly on its own. Not sure if I have read a better inn description! The plot was a small added bonus that was slightly unexpected. If the town found out there would probably be a riot and may the gods save the ones that took it. Go to Comment
An excellent establishment with a wealth of detail and history, and a solid plot-hook. Like it.
(You could also write a City Image of the whole city, or even a Plot about the Golden Frog - what happened to it anyway? What if it wasn't stolen for the gold, and wasn't just a piece of art before... and is actually a key to something else?) Go to Comment
You buy death, but one would think that here are people that even Jack wouldn't touch. Those so powerful that their death would bring about the end of the corruption that allows him to stay in power. Anyway, do they sell good wings? Go to Comment
The villages around the capital have a strange new disease cropping up. Spread by a fungus (much like ergot poisoning), it causes its victims to be very sensitive to sunlight. Hundreds of peasants are hiding from the sun, only coming out in the darkness to labor in the fields. Unfortunately, rumor makes their behavior sound more sinister and secretive than it really is.