By shear volume and size this is fantastic and can easily be printed out and thrown into my towns/ villages folder for use on a random day.
1) Is there a town watch? Militia? Gaurds of some sort? I see where they are mentioned but a short detail would be nice.
2) This was stated prevously about the "bad". What bad has happened here? A riot perhaps in the Cracked Mug Tavern?
3) A few important or personal nps's would be nice, other than just the owner of this store, etc. A short description of a few of them that any players may come into contact with would be nice.
4) Also a few plot hooks would be well worth the effort.
Just a few basic ideas. I realize this is an older sub, and for a first sub this was grand indeed. Wish I would have caught it back when it was first put up.