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Shek-Ta
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Murometz's comment on 2008-06-20 07:16 PM
The Quest winner requires an automatic BUMP

Congrats, Sil. Go to Comment
Shek-Ta
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Drackler's comment on 2008-05-21 05:40 PM
I agree with Echo in saying that you brought across the nature of the Kumbra well. I noticed a few points where you mixed your pronouns, at one point referring to Shek-Ta as "her, at another as "it". You also made a grammatical mistake, the possessive it "its", "it's" means "it is". A nice well rounded sub,Silv. Go to Comment
Shek-Ta
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valadaar's comment on 2008-05-22 08:30 PM
Wow, really good Silveressa! This is the best in my opinion of the quest entries!

Found one typo of note:

bandits hastily converting on the fearsome

Assuming you mean converging :) Go to Comment
Shek-Ta
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Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-21 11:05 PM
Updated: fixed the punctuation and word errors. Go to Comment
Shek-Ta
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Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-23 12:51 AM
Updated: converting changed to converging. Go to Comment
Darkest of Winters
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-05-19 03:21 PM
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Darkest of Winters
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-26 10:44 PM
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Darkest of Winters
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-05-03 01:17 PM
Actually, I think I have a few more chapters of this kicking around on one of my back up drives somewhere, if I can find them I'll toss them later on this month, thanks for the reminder! Go to Comment
Darkest of Winters
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Kassy's comment on 2012-06-17 09:43 AM
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Darkest of Winters
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klauston's comment on 2012-12-20 10:09 PM
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Darkest of Winters
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-05-03 12:29 PM


Some good old school post-nuclear-apocalypse with cool mutants. :)



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Another ghost in the graveyard?!
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manfred's comment on 2008-05-18 05:20 PM
Heh, not all magic academy dropouts make it to adventurers. :)

If you have those magic users, you can occasionally employ them for a purpose like this... few will expect it. Nice one. Go to Comment
Another ghost in the graveyard?!
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-05-16 04:15 PM
That would be a good game to GM. Go to Comment
Another ghost in the graveyard?!
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-08-18 10:58 AM
Good solid idea. Go to Comment
Another ghost in the graveyard?!
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2008-05-20 12:39 PM
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Another ghost in the graveyard?!
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
valadaar's comment on 2008-05-17 08:30 PM
This is a solid mini-adventure! Though I am expecting to see the mystery machine make an appearance :)

That said - you have a few missing capitalizations at the start of sentances, and a few spacing issues. There is also still a bit of overlong sentances. Read them aloud to yourself, and if you find yourself running out of breath, rebuild your sentences. Go to Comment
Another ghost in the graveyard?!
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Silveressa's comment on 2008-05-16 05:52 PM
Updated: Fixed a few small spelling errors Go to Comment
Another ghost in the graveyard?!
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DrTurtlesse's comment on 2015-02-28 02:15 PM
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Another ghost in the graveyard?!
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-04-19 11:37 PM


A good mystery to throw at the players and watch them try to figure out what's happening.


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Bai Yu (White Death Rain)
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Cheka Man's comment on 2008-05-15 01:33 PM
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