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A Summers Freeze
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Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-19 09:30 PM
Thanks,

I appreciate you breaking down how you determined the over all rating, it's neat to see the thought process behind it. :) Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Silveressa's comment on 2014-12-20 07:28 PM
Aye, writing in the stiff old school style was a pain really, once the contest is over I'll probably post a v 2.0, a copy that's been over hauled for more modern gaming and doesn't feel like such a rigid classic. Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Aramax's comment on 2014-11-21 09:08 AM
5/5 Old School perfection! Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Moonlake's comment on 2014-12-20 07:08 PM
A good piece with solid content and good breaking up of content using blockquotes to aid readability but I personally feel that the write up could be improved upon. Still, a high quality piece. Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-11-19 07:50 PM
It's hard to rate subs in this Old School contest. My personal dislike of Old School tells me to rate everything low, but my rational side tells me to reward people who embrace the concepts. Let's see how I did...

Art - Full point - A good idea here, nicely presented.
Craft - Half Point - Needs some editing, but overall well-written & clear. Verbose in places, but that feels in line with my memory of modules from the old school era.
Style - Full Point - I'd ordinarily ding you here, but you're trying to be true to the old school feel. I don't like that feel, but I do appreciate how well you've hit the mark.
Substance - Full Point - Plenty here, even if I don't want to use the entire plot. I could use this is a game easily.
Extra Mile - Full Point - I thought a lot of work went into this, and you've made great efforts to color within the lines for a true old school feel. Excellent work.

While this sub doesn't hit all my buttons, I do think it's hit all the right buttons to make a great old school piece. Nice.

4.5 out of 5.0 Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-12-04 10:00 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Serena Hendrix's comment on 2014-12-04 11:22 PM
A very intriguing idea, fascinatin Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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custos's comment on 2015-03-07 10:43 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-13 12:12 PM
The best part of Evie's story yet! Could the Nano-machine 'infection' be part of some anti-delta "vaccine"? Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-02 08:33 AM
5.0/5 + fav'd

I love the way the story is progressing, in a good way if you know what I mean.

Can't wait to see Evie figure out Jennifer's Delta ability, as she seems rather reluctant to reveal it herself. Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-05-02 02:03 PM
I also can't wait to see Evie figure out Jennifer's abilities. :P Go to Comment
Silveressa's comment on 2014-04-28 07:32 PM
Aye, that it tis. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 07:20 AM
4.5/5 + fav'd (to the now set up list)

Whilst I don't find it depressing like Longspeak, it does have a much darker note to it. It's interesting to see her transformation from Human into animal, and how that affects her, you really bring that across to the reader.

Well done. I really enjoy your writing. Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-28 01:07 PM
Still depressing. Well done. But depressing.

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Darkness and Shadows, Part 1 of 126
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Murometz's comment on 2014-11-13 10:53 PM
Yeah, wow. That's downright publishable I think. Go to Comment
Darkness and Shadows, Part 1 of 126
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Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 07:27 AM
5.0/5

Dark. Connecting. Powerful stuff Sil, you were right to put the R rating in the summary.

It's very good, hooking the reader in with the way they might identify with the character. I look forward to reading more of her story. Go to Comment
Darkness and Shadows, Part 1 of 126
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Dakeyras's comment on 2014-04-26 11:18 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Darkness and Shadows, Part 1 of 126
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Gossamer's comment on 2014-10-23 10:08 AM
I didn't even know we had a fiction sub type. While this was darker than what I usually prefer, it was really gripping and sucked me in, even though it was in a bad way. =P So yeah, a 5 from me too. Go to Comment
Darkness and Shadows, Part 1 of 126
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Tusserk's comment on 2014-11-18 04:55 AM
Tusserk the Monk likes this... do more, the monks demand it. :D Go to Comment
Silveressa's comment on 2014-04-24 09:18 PM


Compared to Sarah's background of parental death, nano infusion, being knee capped by a trusted friend, Evie's history is down right cheerful. :P (Okay maybe not the stuff that happens in Russia, but that's full of so much action you don't notice the depressing bits much.)

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