Purty. Well described and i have to second Dossta on the girl who died w/o wishing for revenge idea being a refreshing one.
I'm glad you like it, feel free to use the entire town built around it as well. http://strolen.com/viewing/Silver_Oak
Tragic.
Choosing her music above vengeance is also a nice addition.
Inspirational too, thank you Silveressa!
Overall, a solid piece. Like Dossta, I like the tragic yet positive ending to the bard's story that gives rise to the tree.
Beautiful tree with evocative imagery. I will definitely rip this out and put it into my own world, one day. I like that the girl died *without* wishing for revenge -- how novel!
I'm using this, and the town of Silver Oak, with some modifications, in my campaign. Thanks, Silv!
The science needed to make this work aside, I am by far an idiot when it comes to the true mechanics of it all, I think this is a wonderful sci-fi sub. I have read plenty of strange ideas in novels that while scientifically sound just seem to odd.
Agreed it would be easier to do it toward a singular planet to keep the system intact for future resource use or teraforming, but it is definately a "Mess with us and we take out your entire existance." Very brutal and cruel and typical of what a more brutal race of star faring egomaniacs would toss around.
Lifeforms (Flora) (City/ Ruin)