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The Nexus
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Dionysus's comment on 2012-06-10 03:15 PM
This is an exceptional piece for sure. It's long, well written and it really takes the reader there. Go to Comment
The Nexus
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caesar193's comment on 2012-09-27 11:14 AM
Great sub. Take a gold and hoh. By the by, which part of America is the nexus? Go to Comment
The Nexus
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caesar193's comment on 2012-09-27 11:15 AM
Or maybe not a gold. I'll gold it ASAP. Go to Comment
The Nexus
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RHHale's comment on 2012-12-05 08:14 PM
This is an awesome sort of Hitchhikers Guide to the Universe cross with the Fog vibe to it!!! Comical macabre and over the top film noir to it...LOVE IT!!! Go to Comment
The Cane of Abdication
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Strolen's comment on 2012-05-13 09:28 AM
I like this one a lot! Fun and entertaining to think about how it can be used. I would be tempted to go with Mourn's comment as well so the players could use it. Hate to see them die "by accident." Go to Comment
The Cane of Abdication
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Scrasamax's comment on 2012-05-01 11:23 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Cane of Abdication
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Cheka Man's comment on 2012-05-01 11:30 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Cane of Abdication
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-05-02 04:37 PM

This bespeaks a bit of Final Destination where death itself causes random almost innocent events of chance that cause the most horrific ends. Wonderful item. A tad bit interesting and flavorful. To bad it usually ends up in death, I would make it not so detrimental unless kept for a very long time. Perhaps the random accidents get increasingly worse the longer the item is used. All in all though I liked it.

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The Cane of Abdication
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valadaar's comment on 2012-05-08 11:00 AM

I agree with Mourngrymn.


As for its detrimental effect for PCs, I have a couple suggestions directly tied to the blade:


1.The blade simply refuses to be unsheathed at a rather inopportune time.  


2. If the PC is falling or tumbling, the blade unsheaths with obvious effects.


3. If the PC is sneaking successfully, the cane gets dropped - loudly.


I don't think a misfortune field about the wielder fits with the idea of the item.

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The Cane of Abdication
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Silveressa's comment on 2012-05-03 04:57 AM

An interesting change perhaps the magic of the cane faded over time and now the accidents are not always fatal; making this an interesting acquisition for a PC to get their hands on, especially if they're recovering from an injury or want a sword cane to slip past the guards into the palace or thieves guild.

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The Cane of Abdication
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Kassy's comment on 2012-05-01 08:38 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Janice Spencer
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2012-04-22 08:00 AM


 A very well written npc and great playing notes.



 


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Janice Spencer
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Silveressa's comment on 2012-04-22 04:06 PM
I'll be looking forward to the CRTF summary, it's always nice to see ideas put to use and get the details on how well they worked in someones game. Go to Comment
Janice Spencer
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Ted's comment on 2012-04-22 05:56 AM


Not as chilling as Romero Coultier was, but more thought was given to how to implement her in a game.



 



Well done. Don't be too surprised if a CRTF Summary includes her eventually.


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Janice Spencer
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Kassy's comment on 2012-04-22 09:39 AM


valadaar has pretty much hit the nail right through the leaf. (The Goon Show anyone?)



Very well written, versatile NPC for the DM to make use of.



5/5



Well done!


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Janice Spencer
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Dossta's comment on 2012-04-25 10:54 AM


This would fit so well into a Dresden Files game -- modern, yet mystical with more than a little tragedy to spice things up.  She's a beautifully designed NPC, well worthy of the 5/5.


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Janice Spencer
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Dossta's comment on 2012-06-20 01:32 PM
You know what? Janice deserves my patented Smashing Sub of the Day award. Have an HoH! Go to Comment
Davy Jones Lockdown
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Strolen's comment on 2012-04-22 12:27 PM
Submission has to be 10 days old to get a HoH. Added a little disclaimer in the button area. :) Go to Comment
Davy Jones Lockdown
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Strolen's comment on 2012-06-16 02:41 AM
Has just about everything you need. Awesome back story that fits in well with the plots given. My favorite being the finding of the old uniforms. Thinking Resident Evil style mayhem! Not much to add as it is stand alone greatness. Go to Comment
Davy Jones Lockdown
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Strolen's comment on 2012-06-21 01:50 PM
Congrats to Silveressa and this submission being the first place submission in the quest 20,000 Feet Under the Sea!! Go to Comment
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