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Swamps 101
Articles  (Regional)   (Swamp)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-11-25 10:59 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Swamps 101
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Cheka Man's comment on 2014-11-25 10:07 PM
Very useful. Go to Comment
Swamps 101
Articles  (Regional)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2014-11-25 11:29 AM


I love swamps! I think this is a perfect "old school" entry actually! Excellent primer, hitting most of the pertinent points! I cant help but add...since its a 101 on swamps and all...it would have been great if you included a little extra toward the beginning with a little info on the slight differences between...swamp, bog, marsh, and fen, with maybe an image of each. But that's just nitpicking. Great sub!

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Swamps 101
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Murometz's comment on 2014-11-25 11:34 AM
And when you're ready for some more bizarre swampy madness... 3664 Go to Comment
Swamps 101
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axlerowes's comment on 2014-11-24 02:04 PM
My first two research positions ever were as field workers doing surveys and experiments in swamps (wet lands...cause swamp sounds dirty). Some of my co-workers were also in my RPG group and we found great inspiration in our swamp land work place. I haven't read your post yet put was so enthused by the title that I wanted to gush. It is a challenge for the GM to make the geography of wilderness expand to something more than a grid and applaud efforts to help that. Go to Comment
Swamps 101
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Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-25 03:07 AM
Which is the category it was supposed to be under, thanks for pointing it out. Go to Comment
Swamps 101
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Moonlake's comment on 2014-11-24 11:25 PM
A very useful resource in general, so much that I actually thought it fitted better under the category of Articles. Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Pariah's comment on 2014-11-07 07:35 PM
Ah, the irrational phobia of dismembered bodies... Anyway, I want to apologize for taking so long to read this. Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Murometz's comment on 2014-11-07 08:14 PM


Well that's one way to tackle the Old School Quest. Write an actual "module" which is not so easy to do by the way. Kudos



It's a little clinical and dry in places I won't lie, but it seems a solid adventure with several points of interest. It could use some jazzing up, but I know, "Old School" :)



Blobs, altars, sacrifice, flesh golems and a great Maggot Mother. All seems in order there.



I think it would look pretty cool if you formatted this with some box-texts and stuff for "gm info" vs "read this to players" texts and such to make it visually resemble an actual module read-through.

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A Summers Freeze
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Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-07 10:06 PM
Update: Added in some formatting changes as per Muro's suggestion. Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-07 10:13 PM
excellent idea, and formatted thusly Now all the read to player text is boxed, should make it easier if someone actually wanted to run this adventure. Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Silveressa's comment on 2014-11-19 08:30 PM
Thanks,

I appreciate you breaking down how you determined the over all rating, it's neat to see the thought process behind it. :) Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Aramax's comment on 2014-11-21 08:08 AM
5/5 Old School perfection! Go to Comment
A Summers Freeze
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-11-19 06:50 PM
It's hard to rate subs in this Old School contest. My personal dislike of Old School tells me to rate everything low, but my rational side tells me to reward people who embrace the concepts. Let's see how I did...

Art - Full point - A good idea here, nicely presented.
Craft - Half Point - Needs some editing, but overall well-written & clear. Verbose in places, but that feels in line with my memory of modules from the old school era.
Style - Full Point - I'd ordinarily ding you here, but you're trying to be true to the old school feel. I don't like that feel, but I do appreciate how well you've hit the mark.
Substance - Full Point - Plenty here, even if I don't want to use the entire plot. I could use this is a game easily.
Extra Mile - Full Point - I thought a lot of work went into this, and you've made great efforts to color within the lines for a true old school feel. Excellent work.

While this sub doesn't hit all my buttons, I do think it's hit all the right buttons to make a great old school piece. Nice.

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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-13 11:12 AM
The best part of Evie's story yet! Could the Nano-machine 'infection' be part of some anti-delta "vaccine"? Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-02 07:33 AM
5.0/5 + fav'd

I love the way the story is progressing, in a good way if you know what I mean.

Can't wait to see Evie figure out Jennifer's Delta ability, as she seems rather reluctant to reveal it herself. Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-05-02 01:03 PM
I also can't wait to see Evie figure out Jennifer's abilities. :P Go to Comment
Silveressa's comment on 2014-04-28 06:32 PM
Aye, that it tis. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 06:20 AM
4.5/5 + fav'd (to the now set up list)

Whilst I don't find it depressing like Longspeak, it does have a much darker note to it. It's interesting to see her transformation from Human into animal, and how that affects her, you really bring that across to the reader.

Well done. I really enjoy your writing. Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-28 12:07 PM
Still depressing. Well done. But depressing.

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