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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-13 11:12 AM
The best part of Evie's story yet! Could the Nano-machine 'infection' be part of some anti-delta "vaccine"? Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-02 07:33 AM
5.0/5 + fav'd

I love the way the story is progressing, in a good way if you know what I mean.

Can't wait to see Evie figure out Jennifer's Delta ability, as she seems rather reluctant to reveal it herself. Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-05-02 01:03 PM
I also can't wait to see Evie figure out Jennifer's abilities. :P Go to Comment
Silveressa's comment on 2014-04-28 06:32 PM
Aye, that it tis. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 06:20 AM
4.5/5 + fav'd (to the now set up list)

Whilst I don't find it depressing like Longspeak, it does have a much darker note to it. It's interesting to see her transformation from Human into animal, and how that affects her, you really bring that across to the reader.

Well done. I really enjoy your writing. Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-28 12:07 PM
Still depressing. Well done. But depressing.

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Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 06:27 AM
5.0/5

Dark. Connecting. Powerful stuff Sil, you were right to put the R rating in the summary.

It's very good, hooking the reader in with the way they might identify with the character. I look forward to reading more of her story. Go to Comment
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Dakeyras's comment on 2014-04-26 10:18 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Gossamer's comment on 2014-10-23 09:08 AM
I didn't even know we had a fiction sub type. While this was darker than what I usually prefer, it was really gripping and sucked me in, even though it was in a bad way. =P So yeah, a 5 from me too. Go to Comment
Silveressa's comment on 2014-04-24 08:18 PM


Compared to Sarah's background of parental death, nano infusion, being knee capped by a trusted friend, Evie's history is down right cheerful. :P (Okay maybe not the stuff that happens in Russia, but that's full of so much action you don't notice the depressing bits much.)

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Kassy's comment on 2014-04-24 07:22 AM
5.0/5 + fav'd (still need to make that list)

Africa, love it, and that we get to see more of Evie in her animal forms.

I wish I had more to say, but I'm feeling unable to express what it is that I feel and/or want to say.

I love your writing Sil, you're truly amazing! :) Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-24 11:49 AM
This one is all Sil, all heavy background. Depressing as hell. Go to Comment
axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-24 08:30 PM
It is interesting her experiences with animal intellect or so liberating, I am not a behaviorist, but I believe most (most) animal emotions are varying degrees of discomfort. A chapter told entirely from the animal perspective would be interesting, she has written books but only really alluded to the animal experiences. You touched on it a bit with her dog days in the city. But if the animal experiences are what is most important to her why the laundry list of events related to her human acquaintances? Do you intend for us to doubt the narrator's self-knowledge? Go to Comment
Silveressa's comment on 2014-04-24 06:25 AM
Her tale is one of loss, and ultimately solitude, as the title suggests. This is only the first... 10-15% of the story, lots more plot twists and (a few heart wrenching moments) to come. Go to Comment
Silveressa's comment on 2014-04-25 12:12 AM
It's more from Evelyn's perspective her animal life is already pretty clearly defined by her Life As series of books so she covers pieces in her biography her readers wouldn't otherwise know, which in this case is her human experiences.

part 10 covers more of her animal experiences, as will future pieces here and there.

I like the idea of a chapter purely from her animal perspective, I'll have to add that in at a future chapter, thanks for the suggestion! Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-24 06:20 AM
4.5/5 + mandatory fav.

Here, again, I like the way the story has progressed. Though I'm sorry for Ellen's breakup with Evie, and even sorrier to see her decline, if that's the right word. Perhaps let go of herself would be a more appropriate description.

On to No. 10 Go to Comment
Autumn's comment on 2014-04-24 06:25 AM
Her tale is one of loss, and ultimately solitude, as the title suggests. This is only the first... 10-15% of the story, lots more plot twists and (a few heart wrenching moments) to come. Go to Comment
Autumn's comment on 2014-04-24 09:53 PM
It's more from Evelyn's perspective her animal life is already pretty clearly defined by her Life As series of books so she covers pieces in her biography her readers wouldn't otherwise know, which in this case is her human experiences.

part 10 covers more of her animal experiences, as will future pieces here and there.

I like the idea of a chapter purely from her animal perspective, I'll have to add that in at a future chapter, thanks for the suggestion! Go to Comment
axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-24 08:24 PM
I read this one a couple of days ago, it kind of reads like a laundry list of events, but it is missing any real meat to it. Go to Comment
Silveressa's comment on 2014-04-25 12:13 AM
Aye, it's mostly just covering background info, useful stuff for establishing character, but not earth shatteringly exciting to read. Go to Comment
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