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Murometz's comment on 2006-10-19 08:35 PM
What impresses me most, is the consistently beautiful prose which permeates this entire codex!

(Also what Scras said).

I've been awaiting Axtrami's Emergence in order to get the overall divine perspective on the Ouzquin Dremorix. I wasnt dissapointed.

What a haunting, intense, and richly developed race and society!

I said it before and I'll say it again. The Children of Glass should be packaged and marketed ASAP! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-19 07:58 PM
Awesome! Go to Comment
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Demagogue's comment on 2006-10-21 12:21 AM
I enjoyed the Glass shifting crazies from the beginning, and this tops off a great creation. It meshes very well with the tone and the style of the other pieces, and actually makes a lot of sense. It seems that someone like Axtrami might change his name so that he could be worshipped by multiple organizations, but that's just an opinion. Go to Comment
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MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-01 09:26 AM
More excellent work, SE. Keep 'em comin'! Go to Comment
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caesar193's comment on 2013-08-16 08:59 PM
Did the Vantin live on the planet where the Ouzquin Demorix would eventually appear, or do they live elsewhere? That was the one thing I was unsure of as I read your sub. Other than that, marvelous work. It seems entirely consistent with what I know so far of the Ouzquin Demorix. Great job SE. Anything else I'd say would be repeating the above. Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2013-04-13 07:14 AM
HOLY SMOKES. This is like a tenfold sub. An awesome religion with a great back story to the weapon it cherishes (or derivitives therein) and how it became...and then you go on and add a ton more weapon variations with the tale of each of their creations. I would have been happy with coming up with one of these and I would be done.

Outstanding! Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-10-04 09:25 PM
Good stuff. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-10-04 01:13 PM
To quote The One, "Woah". Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-10-02 09:23 AM
For those interested: Lord Scarlin went against Balrin's advice and, with a small army, entered the Karikun desert to forcefully obtain these enchanted weapons.

His sun-bleached bones have since been lost beneath the shifting dunes.


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Credit given to Scrasamax for both his K'tonian Hegemony which inspired Vaxatra's Dreaming, and also for making Vaxatra itself.
http://www.strolen.com/content.php?node=2976 - K'tonian Hegemony
http://www.strolen.com/content.php?node=3090 - Vaxatra

Credit given to Wulfhere for the mention of Axtramiya Zuno - a destroyed city of his creation in the Sending of Axtrami.
http://www.strolen.com/content.php?node=3116 - Sending of Axtrami

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As a side note, the item that Axtrami sends the people to find tends not to be that important: What is important is the rarity and difficulty in finding it, or the difficulty in parting with it - this shows the true devotion of those willing to obtain or part with it. Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-10-04 01:36 PM
To each their own! Take your pick :D I, for one, like Revenant the best, but I also like the glass rain in Lute! Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-10-04 01:03 PM
Wow. This is obviously a labor of love and it was a joy to read. The creation of the first ouzala made this a good post, but the following magic weapons made it great. A few of them I didn't care much for, such as lute and quill but Revenant, Unseen and Faith more than make up for those two. The progression of dream sequences and appearances of Axtrami are very well written.

Two thumbs up! and full honors. This is not only well written, and well presented, but it is also sometihng I would have to say is completely innovative, IE a listing of an entirely new type of weapon. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-10-04 04:18 PM
5/5 for these orginal magical weapons. Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2006-10-14 03:47 PM
Everything I could say, has already been said. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-10-04 01:11 PM
Where to begin?

This whole concept of sacred weapons and sacrifices is so ancient and yet so nuanced. I love that each Ouzala is so different, and only two are combative.

The characters are *brilliant*. So varied, so simple and yet complex. Each has their own quirks, their own calling to Axtrami.

I could go on, but I wouldn't know what else to say. This is an extraordinary post. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2014-01-27 08:56 PM
HoH for my favorite sub in the Citadel. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-10-04 12:42 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2013-10-04 12:59 PM
Yep, brilliant stuff this! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-04 12:49 PM
Yep. 5/5.

Wow. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2014-06-05 01:00 PM
Folks! Browse the subs here. These kind of treasures are here to be had! Go to Comment
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Kassy's comment on 2014-06-06 11:03 AM
5.0/5, HoH and fav'd.

Brilliantly done SE! Go to Comment
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