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The Town Eater
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-10-26 12:46 PM
Just my two cents; and only because I have been pondering the definition of a dungeon adventure, this sub has many of the basic requirements for being a dungeon. I must list first that I do not consider subterranean as a prerequisite. First of all, it is dark and builds a atmosphere of isolation and claustrophobia. The sun isn't going to come out. Secondly the PCs become isolated from the outside world, and while there can certainly be locales in the town they can uses, such as arsenals, castles, and the like, I would guess that the Town Eater is intelligent/aware enough to not go after towns laced with magical weapons, potent mages and the like, not unless it is really really sure of itself. It is technically survival-horror in the vein of games like Resident Evil and Silent Hill, which are virtual dungeons in and of themselves.

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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-10-27 10:26 AM
This sort of thing might put people off living in towns. Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-09-28 08:19 PM
Gonna read this!

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Chaosmark's comment on 2006-10-26 06:18 PM
This vaguely reminds me of a dungeon done by AG a while back...I think it was a house actually. Caused a big issue. *shrug* Good job with it. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-10-26 05:22 PM
Great Work, SE! (again)

Great concept! A town swallowed by a cloud, and I love the "Scenes". Great format and fun to read!

Oh and way to work in the Mogrolyth!

I wont join the 'dungeon or not a dungeon' debate, because its just not that important to me. Its a great idea, full of plot hooks and possible spin-offs. I dont even look to see what category a post is under. I just read them. :D Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2012-06-27 10:55 AM
This is an excellent adventure idea that can be readily changed to fit almost any setting. I think there has even been Dr. Who episodes that have a similar theme - i'm talking old, single-digit Doctors.




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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-08-22 11:25 PM


FLAWLESS VICTORY



I love it. I don't know why there is any discussion of whether it is a dungeon or not, it doesn't really matter as far as I am concerned. All a dungeon consists of is a series of encounters based on a premise in a semi-enclosed area. Check check check. The scenes are fabulous, the creature is awesome and this is definately a fantastic game-ender with some unique aspects.


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manfred's comment on 2006-10-20 06:35 AM
What they said; interesting prose as the idea itself.

Actually, he (it?) could actually create several religions to support him. What are his goals besides survival? Seems he likes to be worshipped, though he is in no hurry and bides his time. Does he want to be corporeal permanently, or merely now and then? Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-10-25 02:09 PM
Nicely written and intriguing idea.

Centuries from now, this creature, who knows what is in the mind of people, could be in the "perfect place" to truly change the world.

Perhaps it will instrument the demise of other deities.

Perhaps it will decide that it will run society.

Perhaps someone will get a clue and lock it in a box, only to be opened centuries, if not millienia later, a modern world to play with... one not used to magic. Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-10-20 07:59 AM
Sensible questions, Manfred: Though it's free for the GM's interpretation for any plot they may want to make, I always imagined that what Axtrami wishes to do is to test mortals - push their limits and see how far they can go. I thought of it as him experimenting with the world, and the mortals are the lab rats.

The only reason he strives to get 'worshippers' is that is strengthens him; increases his hold in existence. His main goal isn't to become permanently corporeal, and he's just as content to remain within dreams and thoughts. The only thing his appearance in the physical world would mean is that there is a lot of devotion or belief around, and it's just a gauge of his hold on reality. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-10-19 12:14 PM
Splendid. i love the story of Xartina, and her vengeance. It seems natural that Axtrami is this sort of being/entity rather than the classical God on High surrounded by lesser gods and servants. Top marks! Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-10-19 01:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2006-10-19 06:29 PM
I can definitely appreciate it and the effort put into it. Very nicely incorporated into the current knowledge base. Go to Comment
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Pariah's comment on 2006-10-21 07:26 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-10-19 07:35 PM
What impresses me most, is the consistently beautiful prose which permeates this entire codex!

(Also what Scras said).

I've been awaiting Axtrami's Emergence in order to get the overall divine perspective on the Ouzquin Dremorix. I wasnt dissapointed.

What a haunting, intense, and richly developed race and society!

I said it before and I'll say it again. The Children of Glass should be packaged and marketed ASAP! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-19 06:58 PM
Awesome! Go to Comment
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Demagogue's comment on 2006-10-20 11:21 PM
I enjoyed the Glass shifting crazies from the beginning, and this tops off a great creation. It meshes very well with the tone and the style of the other pieces, and actually makes a lot of sense. It seems that someone like Axtrami might change his name so that he could be worshipped by multiple organizations, but that's just an opinion. Go to Comment
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MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-01 08:26 AM
More excellent work, SE. Keep 'em comin'! Go to Comment
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caesar193's comment on 2013-08-16 07:59 PM
Did the Vantin live on the planet where the Ouzquin Demorix would eventually appear, or do they live elsewhere? That was the one thing I was unsure of as I read your sub. Other than that, marvelous work. It seems entirely consistent with what I know so far of the Ouzquin Demorix. Great job SE. Anything else I'd say would be repeating the above. Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2013-04-13 06:14 AM
HOLY SMOKES. This is like a tenfold sub. An awesome religion with a great back story to the weapon it cherishes (or derivitives therein) and how it became...and then you go on and add a ton more weapon variations with the tale of each of their creations. I would have been happy with coming up with one of these and I would be done.

Outstanding! Go to Comment
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