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Scable
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-11-24 08:45 AM
I like the functionality of Scable's borderline Life condition, how his skin feels like clothing and how by being such an abomination that common folk will go out of their way to avoid him. I do have a few questions:

You have stated that Scable is both alive and undead, can he be killed by mundane means? If so, it would seem to make him a fairly weak sort of undead (which I am fine with, just want to clarify)

What about clerics, holy places, clerical turning abilities, and other banes of the undead? Will be a holy priest or an evil priest be affected the same way by his natural obfuscation? Does Scable avoid churches and graveyards?

Dietary concerns: how often does Scable have to eat to maintain himself? Does he have to follow his danse macabre for each victim or can on occasion can he say screw it, knock someone out with a rock and start eating them unconscious? Go to Comment
Scable
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-11-26 09:29 AM
He has seen the Underverse, he is a Holy Half-Dead Go to Comment
Scable
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2012-11-26 08:43 AM
An interesting being - I could see him being used as an NPC in an appropriately dark settings, perhaps as a rather odd 'fixer'. His 'diet' being simply a vice one would need to be aware of when dealing with him.

He could be sought by necromancers if they were made aware of his existence - his natural 'cloaking' power being something they would seek to emulate for their own undead assassins.
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Scable
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
Forganthus's comment on 2012-11-22 05:14 PM
I would never use this guy as a session's focus, but he makes an appropriately creepy thing to have lurking in the dark corners of a city. Things that go bump in the night should NOT be things you expect. He fits the bill, is what I'm saying. He's the boogeyman, director's cut.

Also, eww. Zombie-abortion rapist man. Go to Comment
Ilken Lillett
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Strolen's comment on 2012-11-22 06:05 PM
I don't think she is a very nice person. I would unfriend her for sure.

Crazy story that drug me right in. Hard to comprehend the ruthlessness! Welcome back SE!! Go to Comment
Ilken Lillett
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-11-24 08:36 AM
I approve, and found this an enjoyable macabre tail Go to Comment
Ilken Lillett
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Cheka Man's comment on 2012-11-21 10:52 PM
So she birthed an undead? Go to Comment
Ilken Lillett
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-23 11:30 AM
The tale does draw you in, well written, making her quite memorable. Zombirth, as Forganthus calls it....this is a new concept for me as far as undead begetting, and I Iove it. Deliciously gruesome! Go to Comment
Ilken Lillett
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Forganthus's comment on 2012-11-22 05:22 PM
Zombirth! Why not?

I see two main ideas here--a woman with wild necromantic talent who can take life from many to give undeath to a singular thing, and necroparturition (which is awesome). I think this makes a better story than something to inject into an tabletop game. I know that's not the only standard to judge a sub, but it's mine. Players would only learn this stuff through exposition and monologue, which is fine, but there's no quick hook. This is an decent NPC with a great backstory. Go to Comment
Ilken Lillett
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
caesar193's comment on 2012-11-21 08:18 PM
This sub is awesome. I love it. I don't know why I love it, but I do. Ilken bears the caesar193 seal of approval. I will HoH this when I can. Go to Comment
Legend of the Opal Revenant
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
MoonHunter's comment on 2008-05-29 01:33 PM
Really, he is not a lifeform, so to speak. This is an NPC. I guess the unofficial difference being sentience and that he started as a person.

You are a bit rusty. It is a bit hard to read in spots and could use some spacing and formatting. (And yes, the linking would be nice.) Edit it through and it should be fine.

Other than that, classic you. Lots of story, interesting idea, and generally interesting. Go to Comment
Legend of the Opal Revenant
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2008-05-26 11:26 AM
Noted and changed. Ta! =)
Forgot you could even do that! Go to Comment
Legend of the Opal Revenant
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-10-10 10:33 PM
I would guess it wouldn't. I dont know how i overlooked this, but it is very nice. I like the entire vibe of Axtrami, and the Ouzquin Dremorix are captivating desert folk. Nice touch with the first hemisa. Go to Comment
Legend of the Opal Revenant
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Cheka Man's comment on 2008-10-10 05:31 PM
Can water hurt him? Go to Comment
Legend of the Opal Revenant
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Cheka Man's comment on 2008-05-26 11:08 AM
Yet another great submission. 5/5 Go to Comment
Legend of the Opal Revenant
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2008-05-26 10:55 AM
Well, welcome back indeed Mr. Shadoweagle! Nicely done! I love the whole glass-oriented culture you have built!

The only thing I can suggest is to convert the html links to the more direct links using square brackets - these are more subtle. Go to Comment
Legend of the Opal Revenant
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2008-05-26 07:01 PM
Even better if you do {link number | flavour text } (replace with square brackets to work)

Bandage Beasts

:) Go to Comment
Legend of the Opal Revenant
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-31 05:11 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Bandage Beasts
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
manfred's comment on 2007-01-07 05:14 AM
Whoa. You have made each of them unique, and most probably insane beyond recovery. Their real substance, and the powers are also cool (a neat touch of them being not vulnerable to fire).

What should I say? You have turned the mindless shambler into something different all along. Great work! Go to Comment
Bandage Beasts
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
Ria Hawk's comment on 2007-01-06 05:14 PM
Oooh... I like these things. I'm sure I'll find a suitably diabolical use for them, somewhere. *evil plotting* And I really like the description and intro story, it really sets these things up for me, makes them more than just monsters to be killed or avoided. I actually feel kinda sorry for these buggers... Go to Comment
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