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Skittering Steel
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
Dossta's comment on 2013-05-28 01:28 PM
Fantastic seed idea! I really want to see more about these guys. They remind me of the Silverfish you find in Minecraft -- terrifying little creatures that live in stone and swarm out in packs once you break the rock open. I can imagine a party of adventurers, desperate to escape an underground cave system, being entirely too unwary of where they try to dig their way out . . . Go to Comment
Skittering Steel
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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2013-05-28 05:13 PM
It's a 100 word challenge, which I assume means 100 words or less to fully develop an idea. Go to Comment
Skittering Steel
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2013-05-28 05:15 PM
I like that they inject mercury, a very flavorful idea. I think this makes a good 100 word sub because I don't really need more explanation - they're spiders made of metal. Pretty sweet. Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-08-30 08:29 PM
I plan on writing up a small sub to tackle this dilemma soonish! Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Cheka Man's comment on 2013-05-14 11:03 AM
I want to go there and buy stuff, but my money would be useless to them. Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-19 11:49 AM


Great one indeed! At last, the fabled City of Glass reveals its many secrets! Forganthus' question is an interesting one. Was that addressed in another sub?



(id vote--high!--but woke up with 0 votes for some reason today)

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Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-26 12:45 PM
Missed this one first time through. Great job and love the use of the artwork!
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Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-18 07:20 AM
5.0/5

Great read. Top marks from me for this one. Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-18 01:03 AM
Just so complete a sub. Also, I find the whole Ouzquin Dremorix setting fascinating. Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Forganthus's comment on 2013-06-12 11:55 AM
What do they burn to melt the glass? Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-31 09:14 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Gossamer's comment on 2013-09-20 09:05 AM
What can I say, another great one. Full score. Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-04-12 04:07 PM
Thanks val. It isnt evil, per se. Like Axtrami it is defined by how the ouzquin dremorix believe in it. As they say; good and evil are man-made ideals :)

while it represents all the 'evil' ideas n the world, Vauraki itself is true neutrality - it is only doing what it was born to do. Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-05-13 09:36 AM
Those 'upstart' Quinnish folk are all deluded into believing that they are 'special', or that they have made the right precautions, or that they are powerful enough to overcome Vauraki, or that they can convince Vauraki to conform to them. They are all wrong. Their own hightened sense of self-worth is their own undoing. Vauraki is unbiased when it comes to it's slaughter of such people.

Although it's not something that Axtrami tries to hide, the average Ouzquin Dremorix does not know or realize that Axtrami's (and Vauraki's) power is based on their belief. They just believe him to be a god, always there regardless. Some OD are more enlightened to the fact though.

It is possible that one of these enlightened people try to summon Vauraki with this thought in mind, but the overall belief and fear of the Ouzquin Dremorix society as a whole will far override one person's attempt at believing they can control him.

Bareka, The OD home city will come soon! Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Cheka Man's comment on 2013-04-12 07:43 PM
I like this submission but can't find the vote button on IE or Firefox. Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Cheka Man's comment on 2013-04-13 12:33 AM
At last I get to vote. Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Murometz's comment on 2013-05-10 05:15 PM
Some heady myth-making here. Good stuff! Evocative imagery of a crimson-stained obsidian wolf! Some nice prose.

I'm curious regarding the paragraph that begins..."Rather than possessing intelligence and sentience, Vauraki is elemental in nature. It is a primal, bestial force...."

The Ozquin Dremorix gave birth to the Vauraki based on faith-and-belief "projection". If enough believe strongly...it comes to be. So far so good. When the occasional "upstart" Ouzquin Dremorix attempts to summon/control Vauraki, do they understand that it is a "primal, uncaring, elemental entity", or do they have some idea that they themselves created it, and thus *can* potentially worship/control it?

If that question doesn't make sense, fair enough, we'll move on :p

I'll close with...yet another great addition to the world of Ouzquin Dremorix! Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-12 02:44 PM
I really like this sub, Shadoweagle. I share the same thoughts for the origins of divine figures from people's beliefs in game worlds.

The only downside is the dumbing down and removing any real personalty from Vauraki as this limits its use somewhat. Something unintelligent cannot in my opinion, be truly evil. Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-28 07:21 PM
This is an exceptional idea. I love those kinds of primal forces. I also love the the relationship between belief and power. Once again, an excellent addition to the intriguing Ouzquin Dremorix. Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
caesar193's comment on 2013-08-16 07:59 PM
Blood-thirsty obsidian dream wolf things are always brilliant. How could you not, with that many adjectives? Anyways, according to the rules given, it would seem natural for the Storm God' violent side to emerge, and one could argue that a person's violent side is bestial, wolflike, and thus the Vauraki is created. Wicked good work, SE. Go to Comment
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