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Skittering Steel
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
Murometz's comment on 2013-05-27 10:24 AM
Quite flavorful, and I would also like to see the expansion. Just wondering aloud, but wouldn't iron be more appropriate as opposed to "worked" steel? Anyhoo, these critters capture the imagination! Go to Comment
Skittering Steel
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valadaar's comment on 2014-06-25 12:05 PM
This is quite interesting - I like the picture speed-painted with the words here. Go to Comment
Skittering Steel
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Elbin's comment on 2013-05-27 12:02 PM
The most colourful 100-word I have read so far! Go to Comment
Skittering Steel
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-27 06:44 AM
What the score says. However, I really wish you would de-100 this sub. Seems like their creation story would be an interesting one. Go to Comment
Skittering Steel
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-27 05:49 PM
Ah, good to hear your plans for this sub. Personally, I always use the 100 word format for "abandoned ideas" or sth that came to me on-the-fly and didn't fit into the more serious stream of pieces that I write. But I know what you mean by getting sth out first. Go to Comment
Skittering Steel
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Dossta's comment on 2013-05-28 01:28 PM
Fantastic seed idea! I really want to see more about these guys. They remind me of the Silverfish you find in Minecraft -- terrifying little creatures that live in stone and swarm out in packs once you break the rock open. I can imagine a party of adventurers, desperate to escape an underground cave system, being entirely too unwary of where they try to dig their way out . . . Go to Comment
Skittering Steel
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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2013-05-28 05:13 PM
It's a 100 word challenge, which I assume means 100 words or less to fully develop an idea. Go to Comment
Skittering Steel
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2013-05-28 05:15 PM
I like that they inject mercury, a very flavorful idea. I think this makes a good 100 word sub because I don't really need more explanation - they're spiders made of metal. Pretty sweet. Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-08-30 08:29 PM
I plan on writing up a small sub to tackle this dilemma soonish! Go to Comment
Bareka
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Cheka Man's comment on 2013-05-14 11:03 AM
I want to go there and buy stuff, but my money would be useless to them. Go to Comment
Bareka
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Murometz's comment on 2014-01-19 11:49 AM


Great one indeed! At last, the fabled City of Glass reveals its many secrets! Forganthus' question is an interesting one. Was that addressed in another sub?



(id vote--high!--but woke up with 0 votes for some reason today)

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Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-26 12:45 PM
Missed this one first time through. Great job and love the use of the artwork!
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Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-18 07:20 AM
5.0/5

Great read. Top marks from me for this one. Go to Comment
Bareka
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-18 01:03 AM
Just so complete a sub. Also, I find the whole Ouzquin Dremorix setting fascinating. Go to Comment
Bareka
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Forganthus's comment on 2013-06-12 11:55 AM
What do they burn to melt the glass? Go to Comment
Bareka
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MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-31 09:14 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Bareka
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Gossamer's comment on 2013-09-20 09:05 AM
What can I say, another great one. Full score. Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-04-12 04:07 PM
Thanks val. It isnt evil, per se. Like Axtrami it is defined by how the ouzquin dremorix believe in it. As they say; good and evil are man-made ideals :)

while it represents all the 'evil' ideas n the world, Vauraki itself is true neutrality - it is only doing what it was born to do. Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-05-13 09:36 AM
Those 'upstart' Quinnish folk are all deluded into believing that they are 'special', or that they have made the right precautions, or that they are powerful enough to overcome Vauraki, or that they can convince Vauraki to conform to them. They are all wrong. Their own hightened sense of self-worth is their own undoing. Vauraki is unbiased when it comes to it's slaughter of such people.

Although it's not something that Axtrami tries to hide, the average Ouzquin Dremorix does not know or realize that Axtrami's (and Vauraki's) power is based on their belief. They just believe him to be a god, always there regardless. Some OD are more enlightened to the fact though.

It is possible that one of these enlightened people try to summon Vauraki with this thought in mind, but the overall belief and fear of the Ouzquin Dremorix society as a whole will far override one person's attempt at believing they can control him.

Bareka, The OD home city will come soon! Go to Comment
Vauraki
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Desert)
Cheka Man's comment on 2013-04-12 07:43 PM
I like this submission but can't find the vote button on IE or Firefox. Go to Comment
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