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Masgolth's Fire
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2014-01-08 04:15 PM
The benefactor is Vauraki, the Ouzquin Dremorix devil-wolf, directed by Axtrami. The purpose of this intervention was to set in motion the events that caused the dwarves to lose their faith in Rivval, leaving then open for belief in one of Axtrami's aspects: Sirael. It's a whole background plot mechanism that is not fully a part of this story, but basically, Axtrami is twisting events in the world subtly to have more people believe in him, thus increasing his own influence.

it's a whole other story and i haven't decided how im going to approach it yet, so i haven't expanded on it in this sub. Go to Comment
Masgolth's Fire
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Murometz's comment on 2013-12-25 01:48 PM


The weapon reads like an artefact from Norse Mythology. Gloriously powerful yet dangerous to a fault. The tale behind it feels dwarven indeed.



Can't help but be reminded of Thor's hammer...as in, no one can lift it, etc...



A truly epic weapon for PCs to harness. Can imagine various scenarios of course...jumping into the sea to do battle, as waters boil and steam all around, melting a snow-drowned mountain, as a PC scales it, to do battle with the mountain's demon, a fire-cult stealing the hammer and erecting it in their volcanic temple, melting the landscape as the PCs traverse a harsh wintery terrain, etc, etc etc...

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Masgolth's Fire
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valadaar's comment on 2014-01-08 10:48 AM
This is awesome! I like powerful, simple items like this and the origin is good apart from the lack of details on the benefactor.


Eventually, someone is going to try and drop it into a boiler and build a steam-driven mobile city :)
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Masgolth's Fire
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Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-01 07:00 PM
A good epic weapon with an interesting backstory reminiscent of old legends and such, I even get a little vibe of the Lord of the Rings somehow. Maybe it's the timing since I'm going to see the last episode of the Hobbit this coming Tuesday and I'm just re-reading the whole LoR series again. Go to Comment
Masgolth's Fire
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Gossamer's comment on 2014-01-07 09:33 AM
I like the logistics of this weapon. Nothing you would want to lug around with a whole campaign, but it would work to pick it up and bring it to some epic battle where it is needed. Go to Comment
Masgolth's Fire
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Wizard of Justice's comment on 2014-08-02 09:34 PM
Fantastic, epic weapon that brings danger with it. Love it! Go to Comment
CatBee
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-11-07 07:16 PM
Once again, I'll tidy up that bold issue when i get home. My phone does not like posting subs!! Go to Comment
CatBee
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valadaar's comment on 2013-11-12 10:49 AM
Not bad, though it earns its Silly freetext :)

I have to agree with Gossamer - given how witches are generally treated, kids would not need to disappear before the pitchforks came out...

In response, the Japanese Dogwasps were created...

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CatBee
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-07 11:02 PM
Pretty good re-work on the "young children vs old witch" cliche Go to Comment
CatBee
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-11-08 06:33 AM
Nice, though I don't like the cats dying! Even though it is logical for a bee, that's because they have their insides in the stinger, so they're effectively losing their intestines(I think) when they sting. So that's a bit unneccesary when the cat already has a normal body, they don't keep their intestines in their tails after all.

Also, I would say it's just a matter of time before a mob with pitchforks burn this witch for killing the village children. It would make sense as a kind of urban legend origin story though. (Wonder what cat-honey tastes like, eugh). Go to Comment
Altar of Vazzaz
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-11-06 06:43 PM
Editing and writing submissions on a phone is hard! I'll tidy this up when i get home - i know there is a couple dodgy bits in it at the moment :) Go to Comment
Altar of Vazzaz
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Scrasamax's comment on 2013-11-07 09:09 AM
I like the fact that blood is not the correct offering. I can imagine an all female clergy of Vazzaz operating as blood letters or barber surgeons under the guise of the goddess. Go to Comment
Altar of Vazzaz
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Cheka Man's comment on 2013-11-07 12:18 PM
Not an altar to mess with. Go to Comment
Altar of Vazzaz
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Murometz's comment on 2014-02-09 12:04 PM
It's a scenario with a nice twist. Blood is not what she wants! These type of scenarios usually stick with players long after they end. "Remember that time we doused and slathered that mosquito-queen altar with blood? Oh boy!" Go to Comment
Altar of Vazzaz
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valadaar's comment on 2013-11-07 10:20 AM
A neat location, though I'd add addition restrictions on preventing continual use.

Perhaps the liquid she desires is a moving target, based on a schedule known only to her clergy and other devote followers.
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Altar of Vazzaz
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The Bull's comment on 2015-08-27 08:43 AM
Just love it. Go to Comment
Altar of Vazzaz
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Renlim's comment on 2013-11-07 09:59 AM
Lol, blood is wrong! Genius! Go to Comment
Altar of Vazzaz
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-11-07 03:12 PM
A permanent penalty to constitution?! Boy, that's the last time Zelas helps make offerings to weird mosquito goddesses. As for the sub; Obviously it's very short. Dunno if there's much more for you to add though. Will check in later if there's reason to re-evaluate. Go to Comment
Altar of Vazzaz
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Toddy Shelfungus's comment on 2013-11-06 07:26 PM
I like the idea of a mosquito drunk on fermented fruit. I'd suggest that you put the poem in quotes. I almost read the next line into the poem, which was silly of me. Go to Comment
Altar of Vazzaz
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Toddy Shelfungus's comment on 2013-11-06 07:34 PM
Uhm.. I'm not sure if I should have put my other statement there or here, though I stand on expedient fermented fruit. Go to Comment
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