I think the sixth paragraph would answer several of these questions, as it shows that the Druid served as an arbitrator to the locals, as well as keeping his valley safe. As for details such as his favorite animal, or his preference for sunrise or sunset, I try to pass along a feel for a character rather than setting out something set in stone. If I list Sitri's favorite animal is a blue-scaled Masuchi Dragon-lizard, what good does that do someone if they dont know what that critter is. His favorite animal can be whatever you want it to be, or need it to be. Go to Comment
I really like it when people have plots hooks, and I like a good back story. You've given a very good description of this character here, but my complaint is that the character is similar to many many woodland druids with very little to set him apart. I don't feel like I understand this character on a personal level. I don't know what animals he treasures, and whether he likes sunrise or sunset better. How does he feel about civilization? Go to Comment
This is really an archtype - I kind of agree with Zylithan in that it feels a little generic, and more like a role as opposed to person. I don't' need to know his favourite animal, but I would like a little more.
As such, the plot ideas that build off this are the best part. Go to Comment
These are items most excellent. The sort of thing you could see a person of the craft do. They are totally believable in their story, as each elements proceeds perfectly. Now these items, created for one purpose are to impact the world for the rest of time.
Props to harmony for being the first to say it, also cliche on the voluptuous beauty getting everything she wans cause shes sexy, also very cliche on the woman being able to fight better then her male counterparts, just alittle cliche in my opinion, short story, and it seems everyone who likes her just because they wanna see her cleavage in game Go to Comment
...except for the villains we happen to like in some way, those that can be understood (not necessarily excused). Malhonne is not a villain, she tries to have a good life, ignoring the customs and morals of humans.
We may argue on the morals of this woman, or other women... but just see how many comments this character has generated. ;) Go to Comment
I, myself, am a big fan of cleavage. It's fun for everyone!
But seriously, folks... Harmony, you must be 13 years old or something. Look realistically- she's using her advantages.
And as for the Horde... # 1, Beautiful women do get what they want. It's been proven by studies. Sorry we aren't all equal, but it's true. # 2, AG's right, where are you pulling that from? I see no mention of fighting at all.
Let's get realistic, girls. Not every woman is an incorruptible goddess, and some are more beautiful than others. Go to Comment