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Bir Beshig
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-22 07:08 PM
Just felt the urge to additionally comment in honor of Mourngrymn's "Voting" sub.

Of course this is a metaphor not a place, I thought I covered that with the Rabelais comment. But I guess many people might not be familiar with the ascerbic Francois.

This gets a 5 from me, because I LOVED Gargantua and Pantagruel when I first tackled the book in my teens, and because the absurdity and wit is so refreshing!

Oh and Scras, you may be a cunning linguist, but I am a master de' bater! Go to Comment
Bir Beshig
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Hrofgar's comment on 2008-08-05 03:59 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Bir Beshig
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valadaar's comment on 2014-03-18 01:07 PM
How used? Simple - your party finds the ruins in some out of the way place. Perhaps some spirits or things drawn to chaos and insanity if you need the ruins to be a little less lifeless. I think the odd ruins sitting silently by themselves works.

It brings to mind the speculative cities the Chinese have been building, well before anyone is ready to occupy them, and now sit largely abandoned. Go to Comment
Bir Beshig
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Kassy's comment on 2012-05-06 04:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-04-25 08:57 PM
I love it. The imagery is just awesome, and has a semi-Lovecraftian feel. I really might have to send my players here one day... Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-04-25 11:54 PM
Cheka, it is not that hard. Simply practice. Then read what you write... going through and seeing if there are any questions unanswered about "what things are and what is going on". Then check to see if there are any good plot hooks or little pieces of chrome you can add. Walah! instant better than average post. Then after practicing that for a while, you get to great and awsome posts. Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-04-25 11:55 PM
Two paws and a tail up. Nicely executed. The details are interesting and logically conneted. It is well written and the various pieces flow nicely together. Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-25 01:43 PM
I really liked this entry-I wish I could write this well. Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2006-04-26 01:01 PM
Lord Ahab, nice one Scras. Nothing less than a clear five for this one. Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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Dozus's comment on 2006-07-23 05:20 PM
Why hasn't this gotten an HoH yet? Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-26 03:05 PM
WOW! I certainly wasnt expecting this take on it! Fabulous! The journal entries and the creatures are fantastic! Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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Murometz's comment on 2006-06-22 04:46 PM
a well-deserved BUMP! Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-23 05:28 PM
I HoH'd this originally! It doesnt show...huh? Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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The Whalebone Forest
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Murometz's comment on 2013-03-19 12:57 PM
The Whalebone Forest
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axlerowes's comment on 2014-03-20 02:21 PM
I love this. I love every choice you made when writing this. This perfect. Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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valadaar's comment on 2007-11-05 12:01 PM
Wow!

These are a cool set of interrelated subs! Good job guys! Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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Kassy's comment on 2012-06-10 03:44 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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Forganthus's comment on 2012-06-10 07:16 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Whalebone Forest
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olontur's comment on 2012-06-11 02:53 AM
Only voted. Go to Comment
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       By: Cheka Man

You've probebly heard of the real Thomas Hopkins, Witchfinder-General, who hunted down and hanged suspected "witches". What if there was a world/realm where magic was normal, and it was the non-witches and non-wizards who were hunted down and hanged as inferior beings?

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