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Chimeric Ring
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-04 09:47 PM
hehe...my first ever "BUMP". This means you have to do more rings now Scras! Go to Comment
Chimeric Ring
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axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-22 12:42 PM
Shadoweagle raised some strong points, but what roleplaying opportunities does the use of the item provide a PC.

Example A: A virtuous character gets the ring and now can kick some major ass, and get his bling on at the same time. Sometimes loading up your character with magic is a good way to light a fire under their ass. But this would hold true for all powerful magic items.,

Example B: A good meaning but flawed character gets the ring, and the ring locks the character in a closet with a box of cigars-so to speak. So the character must quest to lift the curse or be stuck an having item rewrite his character. Maybe this good be interesting, (i.e. you could give the Laconic character a chance to chase women) but what roleplayer likes to have their character's persona affected by an item.

Example C: A base character gets the item, and notices when he hads another vice or his vices ridden impulses get stronger. Then the ring kills him. Go to Comment
Chimeric Ring
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-22 10:20 AM
An excellent item, if dangerous.

Great Job! Go to Comment
Prince Graeme
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-09-03 11:32 AM
Didn't even know there was a Yu-Gi-Oh reference in it, but Teen Titans is strangley engaging.
A good characer with well-established drives and a personality, as well as a little wierdness. Good.

4/5. Go to Comment
Prince Graeme
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-10-20 10:29 PM
Prince Graeme
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MoonHunter's comment on 2004-09-02 09:44 AM
While there is no shame or problem by what show you are watching, many of us do not know Yu-gi-oh and the reference it totally lost. Describing the situation completely is always the best bet. Go to Comment
Prince Graeme
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EchoMirage's comment on 2004-09-02 05:50 AM
Interesting. A character with understandable goals ... why let others - fools, gluttons and cretins - run things when he can do much better, furtherin the common good, and as one says, one cannot make an omelette without smashing a few eggs.
Of course, some people may be horrified by his way of seeing peasants as numbers on paper, and rivals just obstacles to be overcome (but I guess he likes it when they put up at least SOME fight)...

A very interesting character, but you COULD have omitted the Yu-gi-oh reference, to be honest :D 4/5 Go to Comment
Prince Graeme
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ScorpionJinx's comment on 2004-09-02 08:05 AM
Impressive. *nods* You should do up a page for Baird like you did here for Graeme.
Well to be honest, I think it was a good idea to give the
Yu-gi-oh reference. It gives a good basis for someone to watch to gain a better understanding of the interaction between the two brothers.
You should never be ashamed of anything you do in your life and no one should judge you by the shows you watch. I think people would be a bit happier if they still watched cartoons even as an adult. And if watching these shows helps keep your imagination well fed and in shape, then who cares. My cartoon guilty-pleasures include Courage the Cowardly Dog and Teen Titans. :)
Keep up the excellent work. Your doing great. Go to Comment
Prince Graeme
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Sentinel's comment on 2004-09-03 05:40 PM
I like it, it has depth to the character and the personality it worked out to perfection, the character has his flaws and that is what makes it perfect

5/5 Go to Comment
Prince Graeme
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-23 02:37 PM
Not a bad NPC, though "Despite the murder of his father, Graeme is not an evil person, merely a pragmatic one." does not fly with me.

He does however fit into my worldview of nobles being closer to Game of Thrones then King Arthur. "Good Kings" merely have good PR folks :)





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Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2008-11-21 04:15 PM
This is brilliant! I've seen goblins used in this fashion in several computer games. And I love it! Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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manfred's comment on 2004-08-16 05:30 AM
I love it. 5/5

But why would goblins move into a city? A _human_ city? Perhaps Knocker worked as a spy for someone a time ago, and could not only easily sneak into, but also survive in the poor quarters (where no one cares about you...). This could be a secret Knocker is smart enough to keep for himself.

(See my "Time to move on", that could be another inspiration for a low goblin to improve his life.)

What if someone starts to sneak into the city in the same way, perhaps using the info Knocker gained as a spy, for some dark purpose? Perhaps the employer was not defeated, and wants his services again? But he is used to this fine life... the goblin has to speak carefully now, while locals have adopted the stupid tendency to grin, if he speaks of something "dirty". Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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manfred's comment on 2004-08-16 07:32 AM
You are changing the quirk of a single city into society-wide phenomenon.

But exactly this development could happen over time. We humans love so much to be seen as tolerant and generous...

I like the post because it is a _beginning_. Many things both good and evil can come from it. Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-15 06:51 PM
"Him reachers inta' pot, getsa cleans! Makers you smell no messy good good!"

5/5! Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2005-11-18 09:01 PM
I forgot how brilliant this is. :) Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2004-08-15 08:01 PM
Grrrrrrrr, that Knocker! He's lucky I don't turn him into a skunk for that! Well... all the same, he deserves a

5/5 Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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Scrasamax's comment on 2004-08-16 06:26 AM
Why would goblins move into a human city? I can think of one very good reason for that, assuming humans can deal with other races living in their cities.

The goblins would be given a status like immigrant workers, they would pick up the lowest jobs. They would haul away waste, dig the graves, and run the hard manual labor jobs. They would also live in the most cramped, and least sanitary portions of the city. Compared to their normal lives (IE in service to evil overlords) this is a huge improvement as no one will be spontaneously killed because the boss had a bad day. Cramped and unsanitary conditions are better than huge communal warrens and holes in the ground. Living in a human city also means that the goblins benefit from shared defence.

Humans relegate the jobs they dont want to the goblins, who are not physically imposing, and easy to accept, especailly in a menail role. The goblins become part of the city, not particulary trusted, and there will certainly be discrimination, and segregation against the goblins. The goblins would still pay taxes, and be held to the same law as everyone else, if a much more strict version.

Every large human city could have a Goblin Quarter where the goblins live and work, and have their own inner community. Goblin markets, goblin restaurants, goblin homes, and merchants who peddle goblin wares.

Depending on the society of the human city, the goblins could be treated like property, or animals, or they could be afforded the full rights and privelages of a full citizen (unlikely in my opinion) Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-09-06 02:37 PM
I remember this idea being spawned in the old chatroom with Shadoweagle and several other Citadellians, hence the strangness of the last paragraph. As for computer games, the last game I bought for my computer was some Command and Conquer multi-game set. I dont play too many games on the computer, and those I do tend to be RTS games.

My thought? Goblins just sorta fit into the cleaners job. Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-09-07 02:22 AM
Woot! I got the dibs on laundry-mat goblins! Go to Comment
Knockers Dirty Clothes Place
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2006-02-05 05:37 PM
Surprise bump!

I have not seen this post before, I have no idea how I missed it all this time.
Splendid work Scrasamax, worthy of a pure 5 and a HoH as well. Go to Comment
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