Despite the magical properties missing, I loved the twist that the anvil wasn't an anvil at all. No apparent typos/grammatical errors, highly creative, I would have given a 5, if it wasn't for the missing section, but for now you get a 4.5. Think of it as an incentive to finishing it. Go to Comment
Yep, what the captain said. Really nothing to add. It has the usual good quality of your work, yet it does not touch me in any other way than a normal professional addition to any setting atlas would. It is professional and good, but not outstanding. Go to Comment
Actually, those apprentices are essential in allowing the wizard to interact with his surroundings... or, he could get so cautious that visitors would just talk to a 'hologram' .. eh, illusion, while he'd be eavesdropping. Perhaps numerous constructs do his dealing with the outside: a golem might go shopping ("Give ten nice apples! Here mon-ney. I smash you if master not content.") Go to Comment
Well done. Tho, I'm having a hard time determining what his alignment would be. Is he actually good, or more, chaotic neutral? Or does it depend on what day you catch him? Anyhow, very well written, and I really like all the directions one could go with this. Bravo. Go to Comment
Scras,is it all right with you if I link Rachet with this NPC that I am planning to create? I assure you that it won't interfere with Rachet's story line anymore than Alia did with Voonasi's. Go to Comment
Feel free to link Maggot. I have found that posting characters from my own games generally generates a mediocre, or very little responce, so most of the NPCs I post are pretty much free to use, so long as they are not out right 'stolen'
Echo, so long as they are unique and worthy individuals, there is no reason to shy away from creating a batch of Half-demons. I was inspired by sTYKe's Kairos demon, or by what it could have been, especially the part about moonlight.
A note on Rachat's race, if I list him as Half-Devil, it conjures the idea of some sort of bizarre horned and fork-tongued monstrosity. Rachat appears, and acts human, and other than a few oddities, such as a taste for undercooked meat and his eyes, passes for human very easily. Go to Comment