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Chalice of Remorse
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-01-28 06:35 PM
Added plot-The PCs are sent by an Archmage of a certain country to find the Chalice of Remorse, so he can use it to prevent a royal wedding from happening, and thus prevent two other countries from uniting against his country. Go to Comment
Chalice of Remorse
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-01-30 06:40 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Chalice of Remorse
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2016-03-27 10:00 PM
Somehow I missed this one during the Quest and am now reading it for the first time. I need to hit the random posts more often. I like it, very colorful for me. Go to Comment
Chalice of Remorse
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Pariah's comment on 2006-04-29 09:08 PM
Nice item. I knida wish I'd've thought up this. Go to Comment
Chalice of Remorse
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-29 09:30 PM
Oh wow, I missed this one! Elegant Melancholy! Go to Comment
Chalice of Remorse
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valadaar's comment on 2015-06-11 11:28 AM
This one is great! A great motivator of events, and the plot ideas are excellent.
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Chalice of Remorse
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Moonlake's comment on 2016-01-01 12:49 AM
The introduction of the Shard of Storm backstory elevates this from a conventional cursed item. The physical description of the chalice is evocative too.

Small nitpick: "It had been her constant companion in many things, be it in the casting of spells or in the form of her familiar, a small tawny cat that demanded constant attention." Here, I'm not sure what the 'it' refers to. At first I thought it meant the Chalice but then in this paragraph the Chalice hasn't even been created yet. The other alternative is magic but then it's also weird: of course casting spells involves magic but would someone think of magic being a companion in the casting of spells? Go to Comment
Company of the Broken Oath
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-02-25 12:11 AM
I like groups like this, where the criminals are impressed into duty. One would have to be fairly sure that the Captain was very loyal to the governement, because if the Captain goes rogue, the whole company follows him. Also, it's a fairly good bet that some of the criminals they want to dispose of aren't suited for combat (not really a problem, I know, it just means you need more of them). A possible off-shoot of that is a dedicated spy or covert ops company based on the same principle. Go to Comment
Company of the Broken Oath
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-01-27 03:00 PM
Nice usage of magic. Nice history. Good usage for the material. Well presented. Just missing a touch of magic to make it a 5. However, would add it to an appropriate game in the heart beat. Go to Comment
Company of the Broken Oath
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-02-08 11:50 AM
Very useful to have that kind of unit in one's armed forces. Go to Comment
Company of the Broken Oath
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2006-02-09 09:40 AM
Nicely thought out

I particularly liked the bit about undercutting all the more traditional mercenary companies - Q: Wouldn't this cause a certain amount of resentment amongst professional soldiers? - A scenario waiting to happen if ever I saw one

Overall - pretty good - 4/5 Go to Comment
Company of the Broken Oath
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valadaar's comment on 2013-03-20 03:32 PM
These folks could be used in a lot of places, and it strongly reminds me of the men sent to the Wall in the Game of Thrones.

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Company of the Broken Oath
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dark_dragon's comment on 2009-12-01 09:53 AM
This came up on the frontpage as a random sub. I like it! I'm wondering about the oath they take though. "spell of obedience to the spirit of the Company and to it’s Captain." It seems that the captain holds the company's power in his hands. a corrupted captain could be a serious force to be reckoned with. Nice sub Go to Comment
Company of the Broken Oath
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runedrake's comment on 2012-08-03 08:25 PM
very good I give it a 4.5/5. Go to Comment
Sangreal
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-01-23 10:59 PM
Fantastic. This is just awesome.

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Sangreal
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-01-23 11:43 PM
A good city post that is not in the City Image thread! I jump for you and give you High Paw! Go to Comment
Sangreal
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-23 03:57 PM
Really it was inspired by Sentinel*'s Haven Fortress post in the bad example category. Go to Comment
Sangreal
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-23 10:43 PM
There were some elements of the absurd that I felt I could integrate into a quality post, and some, like the moat full of man-eating eels I couldn't quite swing. Go to Comment
Sangreal
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-04-14 10:39 PM
Updated: Added Reaping the Harvest section to reflect information from Dreifach and Darak subs. Go to Comment
Sangreal
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-01-23 01:42 PM
A fantasy version of Jerusalem. But one where there only seems to be one major religon instead of three. Go to Comment
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