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The Bone Stitcher
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hylandpad's comment on 2011-09-11 08:06 PM


I'm envisioning something almost mechanical, like out of the Matrix. It's awesomely gory, rediculously over the top,and chillingly frightful, but also AWESOME.



5/5


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The Bone Stitcher
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
caesar193's comment on 2012-08-17 10:40 PM
Could it make you beautiful, if you left it instructions of what you wanted to look like? If you could command it, you probably could do something like that. I know you write that it nothing is made beautiful, but with careful instructions, you theoretically could become beautiful. Go to Comment
Larkin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
manfred's comment on 2005-06-21 02:10 PM
Even a character of a reactive sort is fine, with these characteristics.


She has to be a Witch - how long does it take the people to notice she doesn't age, at least not normally?

Not so alone - gold is all fine, but Larkin is missing something: a baby. She might have been an accident... but how can she breed? If she finds out about her true kind, she could try to hire sages for expert advice on dragons. Or find a dragon herself to... try it. Or use somebody (PCs?) to find her a dragon egg. Or whatever. Go to Comment
Larkin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-06-11 04:52 AM
A well-fleshed out character, with lots of possibilities... I wonder about but one thing - what are her goals, and interests, besides sleeping on gold? So far, she seems to be of the reactive sort. Go to Comment
Larkin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-06-21 03:21 PM
Maybe she espies a PC that catches her fancy and tries to copulate. And when the time comes... she knows... it worked.

So then you have the question. What do the PC's do with a half dragon chasing after one of their party and once she lures them into her bed chamber. What happens if she become pregnant? Go to Comment
Larkin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-06-13 08:30 AM
Agree with Echo - nice logical backstory but no long-term motivations - like her though - 4/5 Go to Comment
Larkin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
axlerowes's comment on 2014-03-05 09:24 AM
Well written extra. I think, while her motivations are left open as Echo and Dragon say, they are then discussed in the plot hook area, Go to Comment
Larkin
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-10 11:23 AM
Another great NPC with colour and usability, and with plenty of room for additions.

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Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2008-04-24 10:34 PM
"the demon screaming in angst as he is too puny to lift the handle of the hellish weapon."

Oh lawdy. Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-10 09:53 PM
Fflam prostrates himself upon the cold floor of the citadel, pulling at his ears with the joy he feels at your kindness. Fflam doesnt deserve such kind praise, yes it pleases Fflam that Pariah is pleased with him.

(I forgot about this miserable little fellow. Made me laugh) Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-12-06 02:34 PM
Well, both Dobby and Gollum were referenced when I was writting Fflam, but the real idea is portraying the most pathetic of demons, an underling so low that he is generally only summoned by goblins and their ilk and thus is desperate for attention from a real wizard and a chance to regain power lost so long ago he can barely remember it. Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
EchoMirage's comment on 2005-06-06 01:57 AM
I guess some adventurer group brought him to his fall - what else :D
For a silly campaign, he's excellent, though likely to make the PCs show less respect and caution around the next demon they meet... an effect that might be actually desired by the GM. Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-02-20 07:42 PM
LOL Poor little thing Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2005-06-06 09:59 PM
Makes me think of Gollum, only a little though. Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2006-02-21 06:16 PM
I see now that I commented on this but forgot to vote when you posted it Scras, for that I apologize. I can't remember if I didn't have any votes left when i saw it. But here it comes.
I have to agree with Dream that this, more than many other NPC's could easily be badly acted out by a less jaded GM and become our familiar but already stereotypical Gollum. But this should not (in my eyes) effect my vote since you so splendidly have provided a nice recipe for this NPC.

A neat little creature designed for some nice humour relief. Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2008-04-25 02:51 AM
What the rest of the gang said.

If I use Fflam, he will be somewhat modified:
- He will seem sniveling and pitiful, but it is partially an act. While his physical prowess is laughable, his mental faculties are not. The PCs would become more and more assured he was no threat, then he would lead them to their own demise (or so he hopes). Perhaps he would save the dying mage, if and only if the mage fawned at his feet. The desire for power is central to this character. While Dobby and Gollum references are fine, I'd mix in a little Robert Mugabe too. (The once great individual that pathetically clings to whatever power he can gain/retain). Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-06-06 08:52 AM
Ahh - poor little demon - plenty of room for comic relief here - 4/5 Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
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Dream's comment on 2006-02-20 08:32 PM
I think Fflam would be wonderful in the hands of a DM with a good sense of humor. However, it would be too easy to make him either a Dobby or a Gollum clone, so a special dose of creativity and imagination are needed.

Always a pleasure to read your fine writing, Scras. Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Pariah's comment on 2006-01-10 07:21 PM
Yeah, makes me think of poor Gollum too. It was the 'They Lies Master' that did it for me.

Good Job Go to Comment
Fflam the Puny
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-02-20 06:31 PM
where can one purchase a Wheedling Goad ?! Go to Comment
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