manfred is quite right of course – this is a fairly standard Sci-Fi theme – I’ve never seen it done so well for a fantasy setting though – much kudos for that Scras
A well developed character with a logical background and a believable motivation
Definitely up to your normal standard – 4½ / 5
Another Plot Hook
Revenge of the Thieves Guild – One of the Kerke-Mages, deeply in debt to a “syndicated” gambling hall, has paid off his dues by revealing the details of both the Reduction spell and the revival spells to a local crime boss. The thieves guild now start locking up guardsmen in their own Kerke’s Keep, along with members of rival “families”, and anybody else who gets in his way. – Can the PCs find out where all the missing people are going. And more importantly, can they bring the criminal mages responsible to justice. Go to Comment
I enjoyed everything about this sub. The mage, the prison, and all the wonderful details! Kudos! My favorite bit being the Reduction spell reducing prisoners to their salty essence. I will immediately be creating a gaming session around that idea!
since "5" means..."awesome one! I'll find a way to use it" its a 5! Go to Comment
Sarcasm Ax can do no wrong! Another brilliant submission, and a memorable NPC that I will eagerly steal and insert into my urban setting. I may alter the "essential salts" a bit to suit my low-magic theme, but everything else shapes quite nicely. Go to Comment
Interesting and well developed. Good dramatic points. The city has to be a stable one, where nobody is worrying about war or other crisis, so they can fret (sorry not intended pun) about music. Go to Comment
Lil' Bilge Rat, Flange, and Piety Snood...Priceless! I love Donque's posse. Like Nap, I probably wont be inserting the gnome rappers into my campaign, but it makes for a hysterically funny read. Love the details in this one!...Donque's emblem, his zither, his posse..you know what, maybe I will insert him after all. :D Go to Comment
This really comes from an ancient Chinese novel. Imagine during the PCs' travels, they come to a place where the gender roles are completely reversed. What adventures will the PCs encounter in such a place?