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Mateljan, Kerke-Mage
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Dragon Lord's comment on 2006-06-02 09:38 AM
manfred is quite right of course – this is a fairly standard Sci-Fi theme – I’ve never seen it done so well for a fantasy setting though – much kudos for that Scras

A well developed character with a logical background and a believable motivation

Definitely up to your normal standard – 4½ / 5

Another Plot Hook
Revenge of the Thieves Guild – One of the Kerke-Mages, deeply in debt to a “syndicated” gambling hall, has paid off his dues by revealing the details of both the Reduction spell and the revival spells to a local crime boss. The thieves guild now start locking up guardsmen in their own Kerke’s Keep, along with members of rival “families”, and anybody else who gets in his way. – Can the PCs find out where all the missing people are going. And more importantly, can they bring the criminal mages responsible to justice. Go to Comment
Mateljan, Kerke-Mage
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-01 07:54 PM
I enjoyed everything about this sub. The mage, the prison, and all the wonderful details! Kudos! My favorite bit being the Reduction spell reducing prisoners to their salty essence. I will immediately be creating a gaming session around that idea!

since "5" means..."awesome one! I'll find a way to use it" its a 5! Go to Comment
Mateljan, Kerke-Mage
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Nap's comment on 2006-06-01 11:49 PM
Sarcasm Ax can do no wrong! Another brilliant submission, and a memorable NPC that I will eagerly steal and insert into my urban setting. I may alter the "essential salts" a bit to suit my low-magic theme, but everything else shapes quite nicely. Go to Comment
Mateljan, Kerke-Mage
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2007-07-31 02:32 PM
Mmm. Freeze dried criminals. Pass the salt-shaker :)

This is actually less severe then being incarcerated - seems like you would not age so imprisoned.

Imagine some prisoner's 'lost' for decades and then restored. Go to Comment
Mateljan, Kerke-Mage
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
dark_dragon's comment on 2007-04-02 07:55 PM
Really good idea! The exact kind of hook, details and background needed. 5/5 Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-05-31 02:02 PM
Interesting and well developed. Good dramatic points. The city has to be a stable one, where nobody is worrying about war or other crisis, so they can fret (sorry not intended pun) about music. Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-05-30 05:39 PM
I like this a lot-5/5. This is my favourite gnome carecter. Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-05-31 03:44 PM
Desiring to vote low on this on pure principle of the rap influence it is none-the-less funny to me. Tee hee. Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Psalmanazar's comment on 2006-05-30 09:01 PM
Tee Hee. Gnomish Gangsta Rappers- brilliant. 5/5. Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Murometz's comment on 2006-05-31 09:17 AM
Lil' Bilge Rat, Flange, and Piety Snood...Priceless! I love Donque's posse. Like Nap, I probably wont be inserting the gnome rappers into my campaign, but it makes for a hysterically funny read. Love the details in this one!...Donque's emblem, his zither, his posse..you know what, maybe I will insert him after all. :D Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Murometz's comment on 2007-11-30 08:16 PM
I'm gonna bust a cap up in this mofo. Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Appaloosa's comment on 2006-05-31 05:17 PM
This could have only fallen out of Scras' head.
"Oh no you didn't" ;) Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Nap's comment on 2006-05-31 01:31 AM
Very humorous read, although I probably won't be using P. Donkey Donque in my campaign (a clean shaven gnome? Fo' shizzle!). Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
valadaar's comment on 2007-12-01 07:12 AM
Pretty darn funny Scras! Go to Comment
P. Donkey Donque
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-30 08:34 PM
This had me on my back laughing my ass off - seriously! I like these humorous ones. Good work! Go to Comment
Dracorex Steel
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-27 04:03 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Dracorex Steel
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-05-26 05:22 PM
Interesting write up for a magic grounding material. Nicely presented, good material, and useful. *golf clap* Go to Comment
Dracorex Steel
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
Iain's comment on 2006-05-27 05:50 AM
Great submission. Go to Comment
Dracorex Steel
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
EchoMirage's comment on 2006-06-01 03:56 AM
Ex-act-ly what I needed. Thanks :) Go to Comment
Dracorex Steel
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-05-26 12:22 PM
Plot Hook- a traitor plans to give the Dracorex steel secret to another guild and the PCs are sent after him/her to assassinate the traitor (or bring the traitor back for trial.) 5/5 Go to Comment
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A nation of crossdressers

       By: Moonlake

This really comes from an ancient Chinese novel. Imagine during the PCs' travels, they come to a place where the gender roles are completely reversed. What adventures will the PCs encounter in such a place?

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