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Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-06-01 05:07 PM
Aumabsotanomistioustically instupitreous and thrupetralistic!

5/5! Go to Comment
Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-06-01 08:56 PM
Oh, by the way-
I would like to point out that when I was reading the story, I didn't take any points off for it, but as I read it, it seemed like something was missing, like a paragraph got deleted and you didn't notice, or something.
Might want to check on that. Go to Comment
Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-06-01 04:23 PM
I love pieces that are myth and history: Two thumbs and a tail. Go to Comment
Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-06-01 06:45 PM
Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
Dragon Lord's comment on 2005-06-02 09:26 AM
I too like ancient myths or half-forgotten histories to explain things, both as a GM (allows for plenty of false leads and red herrings) and as a player (much more interesting than the bash-the-monster-and-pinch-the-gold cliche)

The idea that the treasure is ancient knowledge rather than anything physically (like gold or weapons) might not be particularly original (I've used it myself before now as, I would guess, most Strolenites have) but I'm not going to mark you down for that - such treasure can lead to further scenarios

I also like that the treasure has actually been found but nobody knows it - great twist with all sorts of possibilities

4/5 Go to Comment
Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-21 12:08 PM
This one is very good - an excellent little secret and treasure.
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Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2013-03-21 11:11 PM
I like the twist on the column and the last plot. The detail about the indecipherable shorthand is also good. One of the interesting things about the scroll is that if it's not enchanted it could deteriorate very quickly to the elements. On the whole though if you don't have an artificer in the party it's just another MacGuffin. Go to Comment
Anvil of Davyd
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
Gossamer's comment on 2013-05-21 12:22 PM
Despite the magical properties missing, I loved the twist that the anvil wasn't an anvil at all. No apparent typos/grammatical errors, highly creative, I would have given a 5, if it wasn't for the missing section, but for now you get a 4.5. Think of it as an incentive to finishing it. Go to Comment
Glasyabolas
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-05-30 12:38 AM
Good!

4/5 Go to Comment
Glasyabolas
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Cheka Man's comment on 2005-05-25 06:10 PM
It's very good how you can take an 0/5 setting and turn it into something. 5/5 Go to Comment
Glasyabolas
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2005-05-30 04:28 PM
Yep, what the captain said. Really nothing to add. It has the usual good quality of your work, yet it does not touch me in any other way than a normal professional addition to any setting atlas would. It is professional and good, but not outstanding. Go to Comment
Glasyabolas
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-02-09 04:54 PM
I believed in absolute truth once. This was written back then. But people do not appreciate truth, this I have learnt.

Scrasamax has tried to appreciate it though. He really did.

But in the end, peeps: Do not tell the blunt truth, for people should be spared that.

Wrap it in layers of politeness, and do not spill it like sour milk. Murometz taught me that! Not in those words, but in the essence of the words.

People want feedback, but it is no reason to pry their eyes out. They will need them later! ;) Go to Comment
Glasyabolas
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
valadaar's comment on 2007-02-09 02:43 PM
I don't know, this is really cool!

I love subs which paint a mental pictures of places, and this is one of those. Go to Comment
The Sorcerer's Palace
Locations  (Any)   (Establishment)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-05-13 10:25 AM
The Sorcerer's Palace
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2008-06-03 10:52 PM
How is this only a 4.25? Go to Comment
The Sorcerer's Palace
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EchoMirage's comment on 2005-05-13 02:11 PM
Actually, those apprentices are essential in allowing the wizard to interact with his surroundings... or, he could get so cautious that visitors would just talk to a 'hologram' .. eh, illusion, while he'd be eavesdropping. Perhaps numerous constructs do his dealing with the outside: a golem might go shopping ("Give ten nice apples! Here mon-ney. I smash you if master not content.") Go to Comment
The Sorcerer's Palace
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Cheka Man's comment on 2005-08-19 01:27 PM
I love this palace. Go to Comment
Rachat the Devil
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2005-05-11 08:50 PM
Well done. Tho, I'm having a hard time determining what his alignment would be. Is he actually good, or more, chaotic neutral? Or does it depend on what day you catch him? Anyhow, very well written, and I really like all the directions one could go with this. Bravo. Go to Comment
Rachat the Devil
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2006-08-25 12:09 AM
No, the quote is from Batman (the movie). It's the line the Joker asks all of his "prey", and by which Bruce Wayne recognizes him as the thug who murdered his parents. Go to Comment
Rachat the Devil
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-05-02 08:21 PM
Fantastic-
would make a good patron in a battle against these cults of the Devil, or a helper NPC for the heroes.

Thauglar, Styke, are you reading this? This is how you do half-demons.

4/5. Go to Comment
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