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The Merchant's Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-05-25 08:29 AM
In order to vote... select the drop down menu at the top of the comment box. There you can add your vote as opposed to typing it in. That way the submitter gets a true vote on their submission. Go to Comment
The Merchant's Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2006-05-14 01:12 PM
Intriguing!! Not something I'd ever think of myself, so I love it! Go to Comment
The Merchant's Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Nap's comment on 2006-05-13 12:54 AM
Awesome! Your storytelling is unrivaled, Scrasamax, and this potion has my head swimming with ideas! I particularly like your #2 plot hook. I can easily see an aging poet approaching the PC's and offering them his life savings for the potion. He wants to complete the perfect poem for his dying wife, the love of his life, before it is too late. Once she has passed, he will have no need of his writing skills, and he is more than willing to give up his talent and gold to make her happy one last time, with the greatest love poem he could possibly write. Go to Comment
The Merchant's Potion
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chilled's comment on 2006-05-25 07:34 AM
very nice i like it.
4.5/5.
much better than the ones that i;m planning right now. Go to Comment
The Merchant's Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
valadaar's comment on 2006-11-30 04:02 PM
Another nice Monkey's paw item. Good job! Go to Comment
The Merchant's Potion
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-19 05:34 PM
I wonder how many other ways this potion could express its power. Could it be used to elevate someone of feeble talents into greatness (Or at least mediocrity?) For example, Artus the Lame is challenged to a footrace and hopes to achieve a moderate trot, or Grollgurg the Hunchbacked must seduce a cynical barmaid... After all, Zero x 3 = Zero... Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-05-11 08:16 PM
Love it.
Top notch Scras work, as usual.

4/5. Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-05-11 04:20 PM
My kind of submission. Good job. Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-05-11 02:22 PM
This could be used in many different ways. Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2006-05-11 07:00 PM
Freemasons! Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-05-11 02:17 PM
While only a guild of brick makers, this is well brought to the table.

I was thinking of an instance where the PC's are after someone, or something, and it goes into a building that has recently been done. They try to enter through the door but it is blocked, so seeing that the brick is freshly laid, begin breaking there way through the brick wall. Explain that one to a guild and society that relies so heavily on the brick. Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-05-11 02:18 PM
That would be an uncomfortable situation... Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
Murometz's comment on 2006-05-11 02:10 PM
The whole operation comes together nicely. This is something that I would immediately plop into the next "random" city my PCs visit!

LOVE Plot Hook #2!! (+1/2 sword for that hook alone). So many ways to go with that. Can picture an irreverant group of PCs attempting to take apart entire structures brick by bick :D Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-06 05:41 PM
A nice well thought out idea that I personally liked. (written in GM voice with little narrative style) Go to Comment
Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
valadaar's comment on 2013-10-24 10:47 AM
A great organization that really could be used pretty much anywhere.
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Society of Brick-Brothers
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Country/ State)
tinypoisonousfish's comment on 2010-02-12 04:03 PM
Cool sub. Go to Comment
Lord Aberdovy
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
manfred's comment on 2006-05-09 04:18 PM
Hmmm... I am not really much for the evil for the sake of evil... ok, maybe sometimes.

But this makes the organisation look differently - a group of people, each pursuing their own vendetta, who can't achieve it otherwise - so they mascarade as psychos (OK, they may be quite marked by their past, and there will be real psychos, too). So they would combine their various agendas into what looks like random acts of violence.

Interesting NPC. Go to Comment
Lord Aberdovy
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-05-10 09:48 AM
Everyone is a hero in their own mind. Nobody wakes up and says, "I'm Evil". Everyone has reasons and justifications for their own actions. This is an excellent look into the mind of an "Evil Knight". (Not so simply Evil seeming now that you know the reasons behind it all.) Two paws up. Go to Comment
Lord Aberdovy
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-05-09 04:27 PM
It makes the Knights of the Shroud slightly less evil. Go to Comment
Lord Aberdovy
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Nap's comment on 2006-05-09 02:20 PM
It will be hard for me to use Lord Aberdovy as is, but with a couple of minor alterations he could be a critical NPC in my campaign. I think it will be easier if I reduce his noble stature to that of a baron, or even a manor lord.

Wonderfully detailed, I especially like the description of the shield and his horse's barding. This is good stuff! Nice physical description of his face! Go to Comment
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