A nice idea - the sort of background detail that makes a game world "real"
Good backstory - nicely explains why the first dark lantern was created - also provides an interesting myth - could easily become the basis for an investigation
Also the item has some use - would give some interesting tactical options to an intelligent user
Scas is adding more Evil Fantasy Cyberware. The Evil guys can be bigger, stronger, tougher now because they have access to the Evil Stitcher. Go to Comment
I love when one of my older submissions gets dredged up to to the recent comments section. Why Evil? Quite simple actually, and in a single word, Method. The bone stitched is evil because it is a quick and dirty fix. You want massive muscles, you summon it, get chewed up and slapped back together with big bulgy muscles like you wanted.
The 'good' method would be to train, excercise, eat a high protein diet. In short, you earn it, you dont get it for nothing other than a few scars. Go to Comment
5/5 Now that is one horrible demonic beast...but I can imagine why someone might summon it.What if a person was dying of a cancer type disease-could it heal him/her? Go to Comment
Wow...this is something else....I like it alot, and it will be very helpful in my undead campaign. Great description and good plot hooks, but something more about where it comes from would be nice, the "sommoned from the pit of hell" is ok, but could be much better. Like made by such-and-so a necromacer to aid in the creation of an army, or given to such-and-so a person who wished for strength from a genie or somesuch thing Go to Comment
I'm impressed. You always come up with super stuff. This is the kind of concept that I could use, in contrast to some other really difficult-to-administer ideas I find on Strolen here and there.
Anteaus is right; your background is really good, but if there were more it would be even better. But I could create some if I needed it. Thanks. Go to Comment
Wow. Scared the living bejeezus out of me. It'd be great if you could have one to carry around on your back, which can minorly shape a creature in a few minutes. Useful if there's going to be a battle or difficult mission with no time to prepare. Go to Comment
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Good backstory - nicely explains why the first dark lantern was created - also provides an interesting myth - could easily become the basis for an investigation
Also the item has some use - would give some interesting tactical options to an intelligent user
Overall - pretty good - 4/5 Go to Comment