I love this. The writing style was great. It fleshed out this particular tribe of orc well. Everything about it was well written. The one thing that I think would improve it slightly would be orcish combat. After all, you can't have orcs without fighting, and you mention raiding in several places. Do they use ambushes, or just a mass charge? Yes, I understand that you polished off your old notes, but how about adding to them? Go to Comment
Actualy, it doesn't. The orcs could have evolved isolated from the other races, like behind a mountain range or across the ocean. Then their cultures and ethnicity would be wildly different. Go to Comment
A believable and useful NPC, great piece of background.
He might also have some other motives, now that his life is back on its track, like winning the wife back, or organizing clergy, founding graveyards etc. to ensure that there are less restless spirits... Go to Comment
I must say that this NPC is remarkably easy to use in any setting. Apart from that I like him. He is somewhat predictable but in a good way. Because he is logically constructed I guess. Well done. Go to Comment