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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-04-14 06:09 PM
One can always rely on Scras to make his city fill with life... I want to see more of the Sangreal-Dreifach-Trinitine world.

4.5/5 Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-04-22 02:46 AM
Ugh... I think knowing that these people are just jack-Germans kind of takes a lot of the magic out of it for me. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-04-15 12:06 AM
Most Excellent. Versimiltude, history, details, and a nice package. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-04-21 07:25 PM
Busted. Ignoring Cooke's Law...

Tausend, which hasnt been posted yet, was basically named after the fact that the military grounds comprised of one thousand acres. One name stuck, the other didnt. There is a place in my town called Depot Hill, even though the Depot is thirty years gone.

Dreifach, yes three-fold, because Three-Layer (Dreischicht) and Three-tier (Dreireihe) lacked that certain sound that I was looking for.

In the naming process I due use several language translation books. I think it adds a sense of foreign-ness to the setting without digressing into the hodge-podge of silly names that often plagues Fantasy. (Drizzt, Arrkrash, Vexenxar, etc) Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-04-22 08:44 AM
Now, I am rather offended, and I know I shouldn't make a comment but dammit I'm going to. I have spent a good deal of time coming up with the Falhathian setting, and I will be damned if I see this idea get shot down because I used a German Dictionary to name some cities in it. And as a side note, all of the German named cities date back to the Imperial Era, I was going with a theme there. Aside from the use the name, there is nothing German in Falhath, there are no beer drinkers, no lieterhosen, and I am really mad that Echo pointing out that the name is German has turned my work into Jack-German. Go to Comment
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EchoMirage's comment on 2006-04-21 03:09 AM
An interesting and realistic city with much history. I like it :)

just: for us germanophiles, 'Dreifach' as name just doesn't fit. Threefold? Likewise, the 'Tausend'... Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-14 03:55 PM
One of the greater imaginary cities that I have read about. Go to Comment
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TheSnakeRoselynAlexandra's comment on 2006-04-22 03:59 PM
As always I love you work hun. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 05:48 PM
I cant find fault with it. It reeks of reality! And as usual I love the structure of the sub. A tidy but RICH history and vibe. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-22 11:26 AM
For whats its worth, I think Dreifach is a great name, and I think Threefold is a pretty cool name for a city as well, even if the translation was the same in Falhath. It fits.

This opens up a whole can of worms. Does this mean I cant name an island "Paa'lua'a'pa'o" because it means "Scratch my left nut" in Polynesian?

on a side note: no beer drinkers? I might have to deduct a full sword! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2014-10-10 03:32 PM
A great city - I can see it in my minds eye. Good stuff! Go to Comment
Black Oleander
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-04-13 11:09 AM
Good detail, nice cultural intergration, well executed, and good plot leads. Two paws up. Go to Comment
Black Oleander
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-12 04:57 PM
Another wonderful submission from you. Go to Comment
Black Oleander
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-12 05:11 PM
Four plot hooks for a flower. Very nice :)

As usual its the details that do it!

I just read about Yellow Oleanders, and how they are the leading tool for suicide in some country or other, literally seconds before seeing this sub, so that was pretty cool! Go to Comment
Black Oleander
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punkcasher's comment on 2009-03-13 10:06 AM
Cool. I read the stuff about yellow oleanders too.

:) Go to Comment
The Bosques
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-04-11 04:53 PM
Moved from NPCs/Extra-Horde as suggested by Moonhunter Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-13 01:06 PM
Nice-a low/no magic people. Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-01-31 11:10 AM


A solid portrayal. 


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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-04-12 05:02 PM
Normally I would have given such a sub 3.5, but I found the little references in this tale exciting. Although it was a very short post, the constant references to places and events lent it a richness I found fitting. A good achievement for a short cultural post. Go to Comment
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Roack's comment on 2006-04-12 09:59 PM
Strong post, great name, unique... but short. I'd love it if you either fleshed it out more or posted the numerous references and linked them. Go to Comment
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