This could also be a Castle Falkenstein item as well. I like the period and the period plus magic and or steam punk elements is quite fun.
I like the basic item and its conception. The lovely detail added by some of the example items were a nice touch. The piece is well written, with nice details, and minor dramatic hooks. The NPC almost deserves to be written up. Go to Comment
Nicely done and executed. Nice dramatic points. The details are prevolent... and a little work needs to be done to adapt it... as you have to find a local equivalent in your world. Still a great idea. Paws Up! Go to Comment