Hmmm..I actually have mixed feelings on this one. It manages to cover all the Elder Worm cliches. However, its well written as usual, providing all the necessary turns-of-the-phrase and visuals. And I havent seen a monstrous worm on Strolens yet, so...there has to be one! Go to Comment
I can see those long, proud necks adorned with torcs and rings of gold.
Nice little African vibe. Cockaigne plant is nifty too!
I love them!
I hope its not something I missed, but I REALLY can see them as musicians and lovers of music in general, with unique and unmistakable sounds and instruments, echoing through the savanah. Go to Comment
Kada Society/ Organizations (Ethnic/Cultural)
The title and the summary are useless and detract from a very cool list of 30 princess personalities. The use of the birds as a handle for each princess's personality is quite unique. I like it. Fix the summary and a little bit of linking text and this will be a great one. Go to Comment