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The Great Barrow
Dungeons  (Plains)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-06-28 06:07 PM
Nicely described, and not your average dungeon dive. I like the Guardians and the Psychopomp, and the idea of the Shade-touched and the Soul-taken, which fits in nicely with a concept I've been playing with for a bit. Go to Comment
The Great Barrow
Dungeons  (Plains)   (Rooms/ Halls)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-06-27 01:00 AM
Not your usual spelunking for treasure. It's rather more of a vision quest. Go to Comment
The Great Barrow
Dungeons  (Plains)   (Rooms/ Halls)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-26 04:58 PM
Nicely detailed and well presented. It smacks of the secret religious conspiracy idea that is so popular these days; though the building of the new religious site is nearly as old as religion itself. Good dramatic elements on this one too. Go to Comment
The Great Barrow
Dungeons  (Plains)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-07-05 12:58 PM
I guess my only responce would be in a region where barrows are just shy of being common this isn't A Barrow...it is The Barrow, the first that is listed, kind of Like Kufu's Pyramid, or Stone Henge (since there are many stone henges, but only one gets to use the name) Go to Comment
The Great Barrow
Dungeons  (Plains)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-26 03:07 PM
I really like this-barrows seem to be becoming common on Strolen. Go to Comment
The Great Barrow
Dungeons  (Plains)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-27 11:05 PM
Excellent! what Moon and Cap said. Oh and I dont think its all that long, nor do I find it rambling. My favorite barrow has always been the one from the first Conan movie. I think it might be this one now. You achieved the right atmosphere with this as well. The only minor nitpik would be the name "Great Barrow'. It seems a tad bland for such a morbid and exotic location. I give this a Scras! Go to Comment
Quatrebras Harness
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
manfred's comment on 2006-06-27 08:19 AM
Nice one. This is not a generic magical item, but would still be made with some regularity. I can imagine some nutty noble wearing it publicly just for the show. It is useful nonetheless. Go to Comment
Quatrebras Harness
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-06-27 12:58 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Quatrebras Harness
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-26 05:02 PM
Most excellent piece, well executed and developed. Good lead in for other fantasy cyberware. Go to Comment
Quatrebras Harness
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-26 01:35 PM
A very useful item with a good backstory. Go to Comment
Quatrebras Harness
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-27 10:01 PM
What Moon and Manfred said plus this: I love this but cant put my finger on the reason. I think I love it because it reminds me of my campaigns. LoOw, but titillating magic!! Its not uber powerful, its not small or dainty or shiny. Its a cumbersome magical climbing harness! Items like this help shape and define campaigns, kinda like muzzled mice or solomontic rugs. It gives you a sense of the worlds magic. "No no no, we're not flying around today people! We are building climbing harnesses, with a little magic, a lot of elbow grease, and some good old fashioned human ingenuity! Go to Comment
Quatrebras Harness
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2016-05-03 01:35 PM
A good item with lots of potential. I would allow for more powerful variants to require less dexterity from their wearer, perhaps at the cost of them doing undesirable things from time to time. Good for powering up a villain.

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Zehin
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
manfred's comment on 2006-06-27 07:52 AM
Interesting... demons that openly call themselves so. Is there any hint of a 'typical' demonic activity, like human sacrifices, etc? Or is only a public-relations thing, as they want the image of bad guys?

Like it. Go to Comment
Zehin
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-06-27 12:57 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Zehin
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-10-16 03:12 AM
I'd certainly like to find out more about the witches and Warlocks - Certainly the warlocks especially would be a most mysterious one - so rare, too! Go to Comment
Zehin
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-01-06 11:47 PM
They would probably be able to destroy Zehin in short order, as the nation has a small and decentralized population, almost no standing military, and aside from the witches and rare warlocks who would be sniper bait, they are poorly armed. The Ogres of the Woses would give them a nastier guerilla fight in the swamp. Personally I dont care for rifts, plane hopping, or modern/fantasy crossovers, but an answer seemed in order. Go to Comment
Zehin
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-01-10 10:33 AM
Zehin doesnt have a monarchy either, they are a decentralized and rather primitive culture, the shattered remnant of a once greater power. There is no king, no queen who rules, nor is there a capital city. The closest thing to leadership are the witches, who have their own pecking order. Zehin is an almost forgotten backwater that is hard to reach, and it's main defence the physical barrier of the Great Woses swamplands and the ogres that live there. The witches are practitioners of ancient sorceries that flow from a demonic mountain.

So, since the marines, airships, and PMCs have attacked and destroyed the country three times over, what is next? I am just left with the feeling that maybe something is being lost in translation. Go to Comment
Zehin
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Murometz's comment on 2006-06-27 10:13 PM
Procession of Whips is nice and SAINING rocks!! I liked all the details, all the nuanced lore. I kinda feel however that there is something missing, but I cant quite tell what it is. Go to Comment
Zehin
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2014-11-26 12:57 PM
This is a great place! Could be used just about anywhere. Very interesting and useful! Go to Comment
Zehin
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
angryscotsman93's comment on 2009-01-06 08:09 PM
This is a regular habit of mine, but I'd love to see how this nation would fare against a force of US Marines coming in for one reason or another (for example, a rift in space-time opened and a spy-plane crashed in a Zehini city, and the crew was taken hostage. Now, the Marines are launching an invasion to save the crew, who are from the USMC). Just imagine three divisions of Marine infantry and armored divisions entering the country, backed up by highly advanced airpower. How would our boys in green do against an enemy backed by the devil himself- in a sense? Go to Comment
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