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The Via Mortus
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manfred's comment on 2006-06-08 02:59 PM
There are a few typos here and there. I only mention it because it doesn't fit with the historical text. Excellent work.

As for the "Rose by any other name" plot hook, maybe the follower is trying to gently convert the group, or at least bring them closer to the side of the faith. A plot hook that leads to other plot hooks. Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-06-12 03:24 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-09 08:20 AM
Updated: Spell-checked. One of these days I am going to do that before I post a submission instead of two days later. Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-08 01:45 PM
5/5 for this great submission. Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-06-10 08:49 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-06-08 11:14 PM
Can you bring the Council of Bone to life by turning it into its own sub? Im intrigued. Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
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Murometz's comment on 2006-06-08 07:21 PM
I think this is your Falhathian Masterpiece! Great job! Via Mortus is something that caught my attention in previous posts so its great to see it as its own entry. History, religion, human nature, it has everything. Nice multi-layered structure. Love the Ossuary Towers and the Cathedral! Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
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valadaar's comment on 2010-02-10 01:49 PM
Excellent and well detailed!

Lots of treasure here folks! Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
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manfred's comment on 2006-06-04 02:36 PM
Really good. I especially like the moment of creation, a contract which is not much for an ice spirit, but a lot for the sorceress. One hundred years, and one day, a good duration that. Also find the insta-cult that appered and vanished again amusing.

Excellent work. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-07 11:17 AM
Okay. I love this one. It has a poetic element to it that works well.

Well presented, very complete, lots of dramatic hooks, and well docutments, what is not to love? Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-04 04:28 PM
Heart's Scorn is correct, thanks for the point-out Dozus, fixed!!! Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-04 01:36 PM
I liked this item a lot. Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
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Dozus's comment on 2006-06-04 02:06 PM
Really like it... But is it Heart's Scorn or Scorn's Heart? The post gives the former, the title the latter. Good job, either way. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-06-04 07:39 PM
Many beautifully phrased passages. A pleasure to read! Like Manfred, I enjoyed the temporary cult. I also like that the duke didnt kick her out cartoon-style, the bastard at least had the royal decency to give her a good severance. I like that she chose to keep the sapphire and spill her bitterness into it, rather than setting herself up for a middle age of comfortable living. Love the "wear the pillow" line. I'm stealing the melting ice saint/goddess/frozen sorceress thingy anon for my home campaign! Naturally I'd like to see a Zehini post soon! It says Govine instead of Givone in Winter's Night plot hook. Sorry, I ramble for I shouldnt be handling heavy machinery right now. I just remembered, there could be an alternate bizarro-world plot-line, where despite the fact that it was forbidden for those of Zehini blood to receive the church's "blessings", Givone had an old friend inside the faiths priesthood. An old kind gentle man that watched her grow up and thought of her as a grandaughter. He was tormented. Obey the faith? or allow this poor barren woman, a chance at the joys of motherhood. In the end he chose his friendship with Givone. He treated her privately for some time and the duchess was aglow with seed! Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
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valadaar's comment on 2014-02-11 08:19 AM
This is very good!
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Renlim's comment on 2013-10-10 04:48 PM
So did anything interesting happen with the elderly foster aunt, there might be some promise there. I really liked this sub; that's one cold hard chick. Go to Comment
Tincture of Ergot
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-07 11:09 AM
Since Ergot is a real plant, with these real properties, there is no reason why this shouldn't have a straight forward presentation.
Abby Hofman studied Ergot before he developed LSD. It is actually not derived from Ergot, it is a stepping stone to get there.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ergot

This write up is excellent though. It is a gret way to add a real substance in a fantasy way. Go to Comment
Tincture of Ergot
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-08 10:00 AM
I sit corrected. I mistyped. Go to Comment
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Dragon Lord's comment on 2006-06-05 09:21 AM
Now this is alchemy as it should be – 4½ / 5 Go to Comment
Tincture of Ergot
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Murometz's comment on 2006-06-03 06:38 PM
Excellent!

1-The Tincture of Ergot might be one of the greatest names for a substance I've ever encountered.
2-The piece has a pseudo-scientific, national geographic vibe to it, and flows well.
3-Jerry Garcia is a nice touch :D
3-Brings back memories

And it is an instant top-contender for MJS's Tobbacos, Ingredients, and Mind-Altering Substances! Go to Comment
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