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Gazzo Sleep-Eye
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-12 08:10 AM
I like the whole Swollen Shadow mythos, but this character is something extra... Go to Comment
Swollen Shadow Plot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-18 12:32 PM
It's really just a framework, and doesn't make any sense until you've read the whole lot... Go to Comment
Swollen Shadow Plot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-19 01:14 PM
Interesting. In some ways, this should be the codex post.

It is a good summary post for all the entries. You should flag it at the begining that people need to read the other points.

In addition, since you have them all linked by a codex, why do you need the free text. Go to Comment
Swollen Shadow Plot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-07-18 01:23 PM
I agree to that. So far it has been mind numbing to catch up with all the different ideas being dropped in at once. I'll wait to vote when I've finished them all. Go to Comment
Swollen Shadow Plot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-07-21 05:11 PM
This does seem like a group of seperate ideas that are linked together by a common though. The individual ideas are cool but I think each idea could be better off detailed more. Go to Comment
Swollen Shadow Plot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-11 11:54 AM
This is good, but I think imbedded links as opposed to the single freetext would be better.  Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
manfred's comment on 2006-07-17 06:50 AM
"Greetings, we are the 0xf02. We come in peace. Do you have any puzzles we could buy?"

Glad you posted them! A fine race for science fiction purposes. Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
manfred's comment on 2007-01-19 07:32 PM
What does "Star Control" mean, btw? Is there more where this came from? Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
manfred's comment on 2007-01-20 04:15 AM
Ahh, the oldies are often the best. Now to reiterate the question: will there be more? Otherwise the freetext is useless. Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-22 03:38 PM
I think this should technically be a lifeform post, since they are self replicating and intelligent.. but I can work with it.

Overall a nice post, good details, and mostly a backgroudn piece unless someone else works on them to make them dramatic. Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-07-16 06:27 PM
Updated: One for the Sci-Fi section Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-01-20 02:26 PM
Yes, there will be more. Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-01-20 01:12 AM
Star Control is an old video game, and these guys were spawned from that game. To give you an idea of time scale, the original could fit on a single 3.5 in floppy disc and the console version was ported to the Sega Genesis Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-17 09:01 AM
I like the starship that can go faster then any starship with organic lifeforms on it. 5/5 Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
Murometz's comment on 2006-07-17 09:52 AM
A very fun read! Go to Comment
0xf02
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2007-08-01 10:11 AM
Cool! I like these. Though the visual description puts me in mind of Daleks. Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-15 04:05 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-15 10:49 AM
This could also be a Castle Falkenstein item as well. I like the period and the period plus magic and or steam punk elements is quite fun.

I like the basic item and its conception. The lovely detail added by some of the example items were a nice touch. The piece is well written, with nice details, and minor dramatic hooks. The NPC almost deserves to be written up. Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-15 09:45 AM
I like the idea too-one could get some strange creatures from it. Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-07-15 08:07 AM
A decent idea that got me back into that Victorian English magic setting of "Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norell" once more. Have you been reading Susanna Clarke recently?

The idea itself is alright and cute. Go to Comment
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