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Gaian Worm
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Strolen's comment on 2006-10-07 05:27 PM
I always enjoy a good earthworm story. :) Go to Comment
Gaian Worm
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manfred's comment on 2006-09-16 02:02 PM
Yes, a nice basic specimen, with the nice feature of being not a blind killer, but rather a 'common' earthworm. Like the cult too, though it reminds me of something. :) Go to Comment
Gaian Worm
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-09-23 02:45 AM
Kinda nifty. You always need at least one giant earthworm... I like the way that the Cult of Gaia is somewhat on the right track, in a lopsided sort of way. It's entirely possible, in fact probable, that some of the microplants and other things that live in symbiosis with the Worm either were shed or evolved to a point where they didn't need the Worm any more... thus giving rise to some types of plants. Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-15 02:40 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-16 11:53 AM
I checked. I can't find one either. It is a wonderfully well written cliche with some nice elements. Again, I either would of made it a scroll so I could add related things (like the Cult which seems to dominate the write up) or made the cult a seperate linked post. Go to Comment
Gaian Worm
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-15 03:43 PM
Golfers would fear it. Go to Comment
Gaian Worm
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Pariah's comment on 2006-09-16 10:33 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-15 02:15 PM
Hmmm..I actually have mixed feelings on this one. It manages to cover all the Elder Worm cliches. However, its well written as usual, providing all the necessary turns-of-the-phrase and visuals. And I havent seen a monstrous worm on Strolens yet, so...there has to be one! Go to Comment
Gaian Worm
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-15 08:55 PM
:D thats funny Cheka! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-16 02:07 PM
Lair of the White Worm! rent it today on DVD. Starring the young and misguided Hugh Grant, and the deliciously evil (and naked) Amanada Donohoe.

A Worm Cult at its finest! :D (though not lacking in cheesiness, unlike this post) Go to Comment
Gaian Worm
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-15 08:14 PM
Not a bad critter! Go to Comment
Gaian Worm
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-15 02:12 PM
Another excellent one! An interesting variation on the Midgardr Serpent! Go to Comment
Kada
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-15 03:17 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Kada
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-16 11:44 AM
Linked to the minor race piece.

I need a bit more description of these folks. I keep thinking they are giraffes, but are they humanoids? I need more visual hooks.

Everything else is the write up makes sense for me. It is a little sparse, but it gives you the general idea.

I might of made The Cockaigne Plant either a scroll post (on this post) or a seperate post. That way it can be referenced in another submission easily. Go to Comment
Kada
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-16 12:20 PM
The Kada are indeed anthromorphic giraffes. Added a paragraph that adds more detail on their appearance to maybe express that better. Go to Comment
Kada
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-15 12:43 PM
Another great post. Go to Comment
Kada
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-15 01:31 PM
I can see those long, proud necks adorned with torcs and rings of gold.

Nice little African vibe. Cockaigne plant is nifty too!

I love them!

I hope its not something I missed, but I REALLY can see them as musicians and lovers of music in general, with unique and unmistakable sounds and instruments, echoing through the savanah. Go to Comment
Kada
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-16 12:25 PM
mmm..bulbous ossicorns Go to Comment
Kada
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Murometz's comment on 2008-05-21 09:45 PM
I have an odd and lingering fascination with these giraffe-peeps. Kudos! Go to Comment
Kada
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valadaar's comment on 2014-01-24 11:26 AM
I agree with Silveressa on this one. There is really very little required to make them an alien race. Go to Comment
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       By: ephemeralstability

THE GNOMES OF UDNALOR: Part I

Upon entering the deep underrealm of Udnalor, one must first pass through the upper halls, which were the residences of the gnomes in days of past glories. Now they have abandoned the fading tapestries to the worms and moles, and an uncanny silence reigns, laid over the oaken tables like the thick layers of dust and humus.

There may be creatures which now inhabit these areas: nests livid with giant maggots, rats and other vermin.

The watchtowers and passageways which lead to the Overground are frequently trodden, however. After all it takes a great many small humanoids to hoist a single giant rabbit corpse back through the fathoms of earth.

The gnomes primarily hunt giant rabbits with bows and arrows tipped with the subterranean poisons concocted by their best alchemists.

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