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The Old World
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-03 09:03 AM
Ive been going back to my favourite posts on the site lately, just to show appreciation to the people who have inspired me the most. This is one of them. I like a good solid backstory for both PC´s, NPC´s and the entire setting. This is a good example of that, a well explored history that includes the chaotic touch so common in our own world´s history. Great job!

/David Go to Comment
The Old World
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - In General)
klauston's comment on 2009-01-25 04:43 AM
This article has given me some great ideas to incorporate in my own world. I haven't worked up a full 'Old World' history, just bits and pieces. Time to put the pieces together with a cohesive and unified history. Great article 5/5. Go to Comment
History of the Trinitine Faith
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-04-16 08:31 PM
I like. I like the way it's written as a historical text that has been "edited." It leaves one to wonder if the author was biased against the Trinitine Faith, or if the work was deemed semi-heretical and "corrected." Go to Comment
History of the Trinitine Faith
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-04-16 09:03 PM
Agreed!
Good stuff.
The only issue I see is that I'm no closer to understanding the actual theology of the Church... I have only vague hints of a triple god and comparisons to other religions.
But as a historical and cultural piece, it is perfect.

4.5/5. Go to Comment
History of the Trinitine Faith
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-04-16 11:07 PM
This is terribly mislabled, unless there is going to be a The Trinitine Faith II and The Trinitine Faith III post to tell me what is going on. Perhaps this should be retitled The Origins of the The Trinitine Faith

It is beautifully written, artistically executed, has a bunch of great details. But in the end, it really does not tell much of anything about this religion. Perhaps a "Dummy's Guide to the The Trinitine Faith is in order. Go to Comment
History of the Trinitine Faith
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-17 03:16 PM
This is really good and I thank you for taking so much time over it. Go to Comment
History of the Trinitine Faith
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-16 09:14 PM
This goes down as one of my favorite posts of yours all-time! The scope and verisimilitude is amazing. A subtle yet powerful treatise on history and religion par excellence! And it doesnt pound you over the head with a hammer. It flows smoothly.

More to come? Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-31 07:27 PM
We need more ocean related posts.

The Captain here is a rich creation. He has depth and odd elements. His write up is well executed. In some ways, I see James T Kirk, which in turn is Horatio Hornblower. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-31 07:39 PM
Right as usual Moon, Wandern here was inspired by Shatner, and the quote in the summary is slightly modified from something Shatner said, regarding technology, rather than magic, and the driving force behind Trek. Horatio hornblower, the eight-part series (8 hours?) was also great! Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-03-31 08:01 PM
5/5 for this very well created carecter. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 01:40 PM
Oh Captain My Captain! dont hog all the ladies!

love his ring! Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-13 11:52 AM
This was a quick toss off, well written and cute, and I was drawn into the character immediately. But then he never showed up.

It is okay for a minor character,
but most GMs already have shatner in their pockets. A few magic items and a barebone catalog of military service are not very enlightening points nor are they great launch pads for in character roleplaying. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-04 05:30 PM
A good adaptation of the character. I like!

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The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-19 02:53 PM
TY. I know all about tempermental children. I have a number of those. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-18 11:57 PM
I like this place. It has history and depth. The write up is well executed and nicely done. There is not a lot you can do with it, but use it as the background element for an area (either physically or as part of the history of the world). Bonus points for making manifest history (i.e. some thing real that expresses the history of the place if someone bothered to check into it). Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-18 11:57 PM
PS: Write up the Trinitine Church :) More churches for us to check out. :) Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-19 11:46 AM
The Trinitine church is in the process of being written up, it's been a tempermental child and has demanded a supporting article on general theology, which too, is in the works. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-03-18 09:13 PM
This is one of the better posts here. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Pariah's comment on 2006-03-19 08:24 PM
Wow, you two are making a whole world here. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-22 10:41 AM
I love the concept of 'Cathedral Village'! A community built around the massive structure makes perfect sense, and gives it such a realistic vibe. Go to Comment
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