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History of the Trinitine Faith
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-16 09:14 PM
This goes down as one of my favorite posts of yours all-time! The scope and verisimilitude is amazing. A subtle yet powerful treatise on history and religion par excellence! And it doesnt pound you over the head with a hammer. It flows smoothly.

More to come? Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-31 07:27 PM
We need more ocean related posts.

The Captain here is a rich creation. He has depth and odd elements. His write up is well executed. In some ways, I see James T Kirk, which in turn is Horatio Hornblower. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-31 07:39 PM
Right as usual Moon, Wandern here was inspired by Shatner, and the quote in the summary is slightly modified from something Shatner said, regarding technology, rather than magic, and the driving force behind Trek. Horatio hornblower, the eight-part series (8 hours?) was also great! Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-03-31 08:01 PM
5/5 for this very well created carecter. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 01:40 PM
Oh Captain My Captain! dont hog all the ladies!

love his ring! Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-13 11:52 AM
This was a quick toss off, well written and cute, and I was drawn into the character immediately. But then he never showed up.

It is okay for a minor character,
but most GMs already have shatner in their pockets. A few magic items and a barebone catalog of military service are not very enlightening points nor are they great launch pads for in character roleplaying. Go to Comment
Captain Wandern
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-04 05:30 PM
A good adaptation of the character. I like!

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The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-19 02:53 PM
TY. I know all about tempermental children. I have a number of those. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-18 11:57 PM
I like this place. It has history and depth. The write up is well executed and nicely done. There is not a lot you can do with it, but use it as the background element for an area (either physically or as part of the history of the world). Bonus points for making manifest history (i.e. some thing real that expresses the history of the place if someone bothered to check into it). Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-18 11:57 PM
PS: Write up the Trinitine Church :) More churches for us to check out. :) Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-03-19 11:46 AM
The Trinitine church is in the process of being written up, it's been a tempermental child and has demanded a supporting article on general theology, which too, is in the works. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-03-18 09:13 PM
This is one of the better posts here. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Pariah's comment on 2006-03-19 08:24 PM
Wow, you two are making a whole world here. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-22 10:41 AM
I love the concept of 'Cathedral Village'! A community built around the massive structure makes perfect sense, and gives it such a realistic vibe. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2010-10-08 01:09 PM


Another gem brought up by the Random page



Nicely done Scras!


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The Cathedral of Haracon
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-04 07:46 PM
The death of Munir was a nice unexpected twist for me. Overall, a solid and well-written sub. Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
punkcasher's comment on 2009-03-16 02:57 PM
Interesting Post. Good Flavor.

:) Go to Comment
The Cathedral of Haracon
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Raspu10's comment on 2013-07-04 11:51 PM
Alternate plot: Whodunnit?

The PC's are present at the fateful sermon. The local lords (responsible for funding) are deeply concerned that someone is using arcane or religious powers to thwart the cathedral. The timing of the wall collapse suggests an unnatural cause, and they hire the PCs to find out what happened.

Munir's ghost can appear, and proclaim his own innocence. Alternately, the Gods could send a message that something is amiss. Go to Comment
The Hollow Mountain
Dungeons  (Mountains)   (Style)
Strolen's comment on 2011-02-26 04:56 AM


Creates a great atmosphere. It would be a long, difficult trek up the mountain. I see Nobody's point. Although on the trek down, carrying all the heavy items, they would have to slowly ditch the treasure as the moved in order to survive. Will give them great grief when their only rope can only hold one person and they have a trench to cross. Each can only keep a handful. It can be worked.


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The Hollow Mountain
Dungeons  (Mountains)   (Style)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-18 11:53 PM
I like this piece. Well executed and well thought out. It has those little details that I enjoy so much. It does not have as much dramatic potential as the other things you have posted recently, but it is interesting. Paws up. Go to Comment
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