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Cyborgula
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2015-08-24 11:33 AM
Heh, love it. This would be an interesting campaign...

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Cyborgula
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
Silveressa's comment on 2011-07-11 12:44 PM


An interesting NPC, although she feels a little Mary-Sue to me. I like the over all story arch and premise, it has a fun appeal for those looking for a "future tech in modern day" game.


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Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Strolen's comment on 2006-07-21 06:14 PM
Programmer error that I don't think I will be able to fix.

To make it work, download the picture and upload it yourself to somewhere. The gallery saves each picture in *your* folder so for me to link it, it has to be your own picture.

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Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-22 05:30 PM
Reminds me of the "monster carpet" thing from the end of "Man of Gold"... Pretty interesting. Go to Comment
Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-21 10:42 AM
Don't feel bad. I can't make it work either. Go to Comment
Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-21 10:50 AM
I could of sworn I had commented upon the critter. My bad.

The write up is interesting, as is the subject matter. It is not your normal slavering critter. I like that about it.

If something happened to the wizard, the critters might respond in odd ways. What happens if he is delerious, do they follow his fevered telepathic orders? If he gets grumpy over some protracted abdominal pain, do their moods sour?

If death happens to the wizards, their race is now in peril. Will they go suicidal and end themselves? Will they keep following their last order blindly? Perhaps some other magichena (like The Stayers - a type of Gargoyle ) might rescue them... teaching there methods of magically reproducing. Go to Comment
Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-07-21 10:21 AM
I had to read that comment several times before it really made any sort of sense. Now my head hurts, but I will persivere to answer. The three sense modes possessed by the Sincewela are not normal senses possessed by humans. Humans cannot percieve electric fields, but I suppose that there could be a spell to grant a person said ability and it would likely function to something like aura perception with an audible function. Not much of a hinderance. The second ability, the motive sense comes from the cilia that makes up roughly 1/2 of their body mass. If a spell replicated this ability, it be akin to having the ability to listen to sound with every hair on your body. Loud noises can startle Sincewela, but are not terribly disorienting. The final sense would give a human a superior sense of smell, letting them smell things and rather than wrinkle a nose at a pile of trash, they would be able to sniff out what was in it. they could track people quite easily, such like that.

Now a thing to mention, a spell that would grant these powers on a human does not automatically imply intuitive use of said powers. A subject would be disoriented until they adjusted to the new sensory input and learned how to sort and handle the new information. Go to Comment
Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-07-21 10:37 AM
Updated: Well, I've attempted to add the lifeform challenge pic and I am now officially stupid. Go to Comment
Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-20 01:39 PM
Nice.Monsters that don't eat humans. 5/5 Go to Comment
Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Pariah's comment on 2006-07-20 09:57 PM
Speaking of the spells don't give normal species these kinda senses sentence. What if they did, that'd totally dissabilitate someone without hurting them at all. Go to Comment
Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2006-07-20 01:37 PM
Since-We-La...hehe :D

Leave it to Scras. Thanks for taking up the challenge. this kinda reminds me of a flumph, but better! I particularly like their shyness and need for moisture.

"What the Heck is that?!" Go to Comment
Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2007-05-14 11:22 PM
wow, thats a bizarre two sentences Pariah :D Go to Comment
Sincewela
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-02 01:14 PM
Weird critter but appealing.


Image still messed.
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The Haint
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-19 04:06 PM
These critters have wonderful elements and a good write up. I find it missing in a couple of areas. The most important one is: what can they do, in general... besides be shadowy... what does that mean in reality. Are they hard to hit, can they go anywhere... can we get guidelines as to what you think it should be. A little bit on how they are organized or communiate with the Shadow would be nice. (are they independent, do they work in teams, are they directed from on high?).

Still very nice all around. and bonus .5x for being part of something greater Go to Comment
The Haint
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Cheka Man's comment on 2007-11-19 08:39 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Haint
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-11-19 04:17 AM
Some questions riddle my head after reading this(What Mourn and Moon said:). I would love to see some more detail added to this. Go to Comment
The Haint
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-07-18 01:34 PM
Ok this is one for the books for me. I was thinking Myrdrrall when you started describing how it looked and BAM! Good deal. I would like information though on "the big list of immunities and kewl shadow powerz". What more can they do?

They seem to be a perfect antagonist even at younger ages, or levels respectively I assume, that can lead up to a pretty big conflict with the bad guys. I read this out of order but I wanted to find out what the Haint were before I finished. I'm glad I did.

How do they convert though? Go to Comment
The Haint
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-11 12:00 PM
A great villain type that fits well within the swollen shadow codex. Go to Comment
The Shadow...Swollen
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-18 02:03 PM
That's it?
This blurb is all we get to describe the great and terrible Swollen Shadow? Go to Comment
The Shadow...Swollen
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-19 04:00 PM
Interesting concept, done reasonably well. In agreement with the others, this is not as "cool" as one would expect given all the build up. Go to Comment
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