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King Thyr
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-10 07:26 PM
"Clad in burnished steel armor, wielding a lance, he became almost the iconic image of the Old World, mightly, lofty, and entirely too confident." Love that line! He single-handedly evokes his age and times, but is no Don Quixote!

An overall engrossing tale! All the links are apt.

Golden Halls of Nahal. In Russian, 'Nahal' (h prounounced) means a shameless, selfish, free-loafer. Fitting perhaps for an emperor :D Go to Comment
King Thyr
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Ouroboros's comment on 2009-02-06 05:29 AM
Gosh darn it.. Why have I missed this? Its great, no more to be said. Simply great, in every aspect!

/D Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-11 12:30 PM
Nicely done. It places well in almost any world. It gives us a bit of history, some dramatic hooks, and a number of "things man should no know". Good job. Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-10 09:41 PM
This would be a great addition to any world. Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-10 05:50 PM
A delicious canvas! I liked the descriptive detail of the swamp. Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 02:31 PM
Excellent Locale. Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-15 06:19 AM
ThereĀ“s something with me and swamps...No idea why, but there it is... So, this piece makes me drool. Scenery is good, history is good and the name is excellent. Kudos! /David Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
manfred's comment on 2006-06-08 02:59 PM
There are a few typos here and there. I only mention it because it doesn't fit with the historical text. Excellent work.

As for the "Rose by any other name" plot hook, maybe the follower is trying to gently convert the group, or at least bring them closer to the side of the faith. A plot hook that leads to other plot hooks. Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-06-12 03:24 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-09 08:20 AM
Updated: Spell-checked. One of these days I am going to do that before I post a submission instead of two days later. Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-08 01:45 PM
5/5 for this great submission. Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-06-10 08:49 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-06-08 11:14 PM
Can you bring the Council of Bone to life by turning it into its own sub? Im intrigued. Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-08 07:21 PM
I think this is your Falhathian Masterpiece! Great job! Via Mortus is something that caught my attention in previous posts so its great to see it as its own entry. History, religion, human nature, it has everything. Nice multi-layered structure. Love the Ossuary Towers and the Cathedral! Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
valadaar's comment on 2010-02-10 01:49 PM
Excellent and well detailed!

Lots of treasure here folks! Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
manfred's comment on 2006-06-04 02:36 PM
Really good. I especially like the moment of creation, a contract which is not much for an ice spirit, but a lot for the sorceress. One hundred years, and one day, a good duration that. Also find the insta-cult that appered and vanished again amusing.

Excellent work. Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-07 11:17 AM
Okay. I love this one. It has a poetic element to it that works well.

Well presented, very complete, lots of dramatic hooks, and well docutments, what is not to love? Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-04 04:28 PM
Heart's Scorn is correct, thanks for the point-out Dozus, fixed!!! Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-04 01:36 PM
I liked this item a lot. Go to Comment
Heart's Scorn
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-06-04 02:06 PM
Really like it... But is it Heart's Scorn or Scorn's Heart? The post gives the former, the title the latter. Good job, either way. Go to Comment
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