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Dungeon National Park
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Murometz's comment on 2006-06-22 08:20 PM
I'm partial to the Viceroy! more Viceroy posts! Go to Comment
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Appaloosa's comment on 2006-06-28 08:25 PM
Perhaps it's that i don't take stuff seriously enough (imagine that) But I liked this. It may never find it's way into a game setting but it made me smile and if you can't smile you might as well be dead. So bring on the funny!!! it keeps life interesting and wards off boredom. Oh and please don't feed the spiders or pick the plants. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2012-12-05 03:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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klauston's comment on 2009-04-12 06:11 PM
Funny yet usable for a twist Go to Comment
The Noil Ruins
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2006-08-01 08:24 AM
A true GM entertain his players without resorting to combat every 5 seconds. Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2006-11-12 02:24 PM
This submission won second place in the Into the Dungeon Quest and 50XP!

Congratulations Scrasamax


(sorry for forgetting to add this announcement earlier) Go to Comment
The Noil Ruins
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Strolen's comment on 2012-09-23 04:28 AM
Another two years later and another bump that is well deserved. Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2006-06-22 03:09 PM
Interesting. What begins as a 'typical' dungeon well-described, ends as a trip into the belief world of a people long gone... along with something of their past being released.

There is also another ending: the queen charms/kicks/impresses the group enough to make them her new subjects, the first servants on the way to her new empire. The obvious plot-hook: get rid of your master!

Good work. Go to Comment
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Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-06-28 07:05 PM
Nice idea. I like the description and the ancient religion that this dungeon embodies. The purposes for the corridors are nice too, and make a lot of sense. Good job. Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-06-23 12:42 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-08-01 01:30 PM
I see we're all firing shots right across *my* bow lately. Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-23 10:37 AM
I like it, and that is saying something since I normally despise dungeons (though I am pretty good at making them and have a ton of dungeon posts... go figure). Good execution; I like the formatting of the little "extras" in the quotes. Nice flow of the process and plot, the build up is subtle and strong. Take some xp from petty cash. Go to Comment
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Iain's comment on 2006-06-23 11:32 AM
Superb - an awesome dungeon post that just got better and better. It has everything: an atmospheric, interesting dungeon, a novel setting (I have never played in or run a "caveman" dungeon), some real history and culture behind it and a good finale. To cap it all off it is liftable into almost any setting with almost no work and would be great either in a campaign or as a one-off adventure. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-22 05:24 PM
5/5 for the amount of detail and time put into this. Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2008-08-19 03:12 PM
Random tables are nice in random rooms, if you catch my drift. They add atmosphere, and if they in addition say something about the place and who lived there they can be great. All in all I enjoyed this sub. I have a weak spot for the old-school dungeon. I also echo what AG said. Here, have a Scras;) Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-10-10 10:16 PM


Two years later: Shameless BUMP and HoH.


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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-07-27 03:36 AM
Very good Scrasamax. The write up is clean and simple, with lots of details and history. I like that. Only thing I did not like was the jump from the beautiful woman awakening and then all of a sudden it is obvious she is an evil vampire. Let us hope it is not Juliet in a feigned death. ;)

All in all it is a well written old school dungeon. I present you with a scras! Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-08-01 07:05 PM
That was me commenting. Was too lazy to log on. I know I am getting old when I am complaining about hack and slash... Y'all just seem so hackandslashy :p

*Turns on a Woody Allen film* :p Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2006-08-01 08:19 AM
Excellent. It has a very subtle, creepy feel to it. Great details, good variety. Could have possibly used more combat, but I'll excuse that in favor of the amount of details and uniqueness. Job well done. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-06-22 02:20 PM
I love the way this is presented. Nice structure. Way to lead off the Dungeon challenge! Chock-full of juicy minutae as usual! Go to Comment
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