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Ouranga, the Tempest-Lord
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Pariah's comment on 2006-04-11 08:58 PM
WOW. He's interesting. You got my vote. Go to Comment
Ouranga, the Tempest-Lord
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-03 10:17 PM
He does have trouble wielding a sword as his ring finger has been severed at the base, his last words as a duke and hopeful for the throne were 'you will have to cut the ring off of my finger.' They did.

Thats the line that did it!!

This should be a template on how to make an ordinary bad-tempered "fighter" , COME ALIVE!!

he needs 10-15 squires? thats a lotta squire baby! does #15 carry his chamberpot?

and finally, is it Ouranga or Ourange? I prefer former. Go to Comment
Ouranga, the Tempest-Lord
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Drackler's comment on 2006-04-04 04:21 PM
I am in awe of your wonderful Warlord. Go to Comment
Ouranga, the Tempest-Lord
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valadaar's comment on 2013-03-21 10:27 AM
Game of thrones indeed :) He reminds me of the Lannister patriarch Tywin, though even more martial. Obviously his career path has been quite different.

Commented on for Comment Challenge!

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The Chalice Bearers
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2009-03-05 08:49 AM
a good article, thank you man. Sohbet Go to Comment
The Chalice Bearers
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manfred's comment on 2006-04-01 05:01 AM
Instant chrome and history to add to a city (or a country - they are likely to spread to other cities, too).


Plot hook: somebody started stealing the Chalices used in numerous processions. There are hints that an evil sorcerer wants to try a new ritual, 'that will make all people weep' or something like that. The basically worthless cups gain suddenly epic importance. Go to Comment
The Chalice Bearers
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-31 11:19 PM
Epically good. Innovative and well presented. You get some usable history, and the group is practically plug and play. Two paws up Go to Comment
The Chalice Bearers
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EchoMirage's comment on 2006-04-02 02:24 PM
Me likes.
Imagine the rivalry amongst the mourners: "I look more innocent!" calls one. "My tears are honest!" cries the other... Go to Comment
The Chalice Bearers
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-04-01 08:19 AM
This is another wonderful post from you. Go to Comment
The Chalice Bearers
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Pariah's comment on 2006-03-31 10:32 PM
Cry me a river, for one gold a day! Go to Comment
The Chalice Bearers
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Murometz's comment on 2006-03-31 10:24 PM
I love the idea of professional mourners! Prince Golta's dad is a fathers' father, if you know what I mean! very nice story.


Isn't a GP/per mourner a bit steep? Silver would do them good :) Go to Comment
The Chalice Bearers
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valadaar's comment on 2012-06-10 06:49 AM
A great piece of local culture to add depth. I can feel a few ideas forming..
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The Chalice Bearers
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-12 12:24 AM
A nice piece for adding colour to a world
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Knights of the Gray Banner
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manfred's comment on 2006-04-01 04:38 AM
I especially like their way of dealing with a high-magic enviroment. Where everyone left and right uses scrying spells and other nonsense, the good old tools are still usable even if magic fails.

Nice touch. Go to Comment
Knights of the Gray Banner
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-31 11:30 AM
Well thought out, well executed, embedded in the setting, and has all those little details that bring the group to life. Two paws and a tail. Go to Comment
Knights of the Gray Banner
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-03-31 10:39 AM
I like this-spying knights.Better then scrying spells. Go to Comment
Knights of the Gray Banner
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-09-13 03:33 PM
Because they seemingly don't spy, this kingdom might have good relations with other kingdoms. Go to Comment
Knights of the Gray Banner
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Stephie's comment on 2008-06-15 11:32 AM
Great work on this. Not your traditional knight. Go to Comment
Knights of the Gray Banner
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Dossta's comment on 2010-11-10 12:56 PM


Very, very nice.  Another one of those submissions that I read before joining the Citadel and so never had a chance to vote on.  Having an entire order of spies hidden in plain sight is brilliant -- this is how I would run my kingdom.


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Knights of the Gray Banner
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Kinnyth's comment on 2010-09-13 08:11 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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