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Council of Bone
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Country/ State)
Priv8eye's comment on 2006-06-13 04:23 AM
I enjoyed this. Nice background and details, good reasons for the stuff happening. Go to Comment
Council of Bone
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Country/ State)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-12 04:13 PM
I have always been fascinated with bones, skulls, and ossuaries. Enjoyed everything about this!

The ashes of criminals mixed in with the mortar is intriguing. This may be used to explain haunted houses in general!

Spirit-bone fetishes and Sarcomancy are nice touches too! Go to Comment
St. Gray of Galen
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-16 09:12 AM
Yes, it has already been done, and this, as well as a good number of other saints on the site, though not so many as I expected, were added to Ancient Gamer's Of Saints Codex.

Of Saints Go to Comment
St. Gray of Galen
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-10 09:34 PM
5/5 for your hard work. Go to Comment
St. Gray of Galen
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2006-06-16 07:29 AM
Is not that allready done? Go to Comment
St. Gray of Galen
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-10 05:47 PM
Though not as intense as the Vocran Palimpset, its still sublime! The Humoural Lectures have a Paracelsus kind of feel to them. Very nice! Good Clean Living is a fantastic plot hook!

Yet another great Saint! We should group all of the sites' saints together into the "Sainthood Codex" (or "Strolen's Saints")! Go to Comment
St. Gray of Galen
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Knowledge/Lore)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 09:05 AM
A great Saint. Now I need to check out that codex :) Go to Comment
King Thyr
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-11 12:34 PM
How can you not just love this flawed king of the Arthurian mode? He adds a face to the history that one needs to truly understand it. Good job and nicely done.

There are some little capitalization and grammar errors, but they only slightly detract. Go to Comment
King Thyr
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-10 09:37 PM
5/5 and an HOH for this wonderful submission. Go to Comment
King Thyr
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2006-06-16 07:04 AM
The only thing I would like more of is a more indepht description of his last battle. The introduction sort of promised me that his own confidence was his ban of sorts. Other than that this is a great historical figure that could function as a major plot hook or a red herring. Great work.

I will provide this post with a Scras;) Go to Comment
King Thyr
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-10 07:26 PM
"Clad in burnished steel armor, wielding a lance, he became almost the iconic image of the Old World, mightly, lofty, and entirely too confident." Love that line! He single-handedly evokes his age and times, but is no Don Quixote!

An overall engrossing tale! All the links are apt.

Golden Halls of Nahal. In Russian, 'Nahal' (h prounounced) means a shameless, selfish, free-loafer. Fitting perhaps for an emperor :D Go to Comment
King Thyr
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Combative)
Ouroboros's comment on 2009-02-06 05:29 AM
Gosh darn it.. Why have I missed this? Its great, no more to be said. Simply great, in every aspect!

/D Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-06-11 12:30 PM
Nicely done. It places well in almost any world. It gives us a bit of history, some dramatic hooks, and a number of "things man should no know". Good job. Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-06-10 09:41 PM
This would be a great addition to any world. Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2006-06-10 05:50 PM
A delicious canvas! I liked the descriptive detail of the swamp. Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-18 02:31 PM
Excellent Locale. Go to Comment
Great Woses
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-15 06:19 AM
ThereĀ“s something with me and swamps...No idea why, but there it is... So, this piece makes me drool. Scenery is good, history is good and the name is excellent. Kudos! /David Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
manfred's comment on 2006-06-08 02:59 PM
There are a few typos here and there. I only mention it because it doesn't fit with the historical text. Excellent work.

As for the "Rose by any other name" plot hook, maybe the follower is trying to gently convert the group, or at least bring them closer to the side of the faith. A plot hook that leads to other plot hooks. Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-06-12 03:24 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Via Mortus
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-06-09 08:20 AM
Updated: Spell-checked. One of these days I am going to do that before I post a submission instead of two days later. Go to Comment
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