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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-22 03:38 PM
I think this should technically be a lifeform post, since they are self replicating and intelligent.. but I can work with it.

Overall a nice post, good details, and mostly a backgroudn piece unless someone else works on them to make them dramatic. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-07-16 06:27 PM
Updated: One for the Sci-Fi section Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-01-20 02:26 PM
Yes, there will be more. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-01-20 01:12 AM
Star Control is an old video game, and these guys were spawned from that game. To give you an idea of time scale, the original could fit on a single 3.5 in floppy disc and the console version was ported to the Sega Genesis Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-17 09:01 AM
I like the starship that can go faster then any starship with organic lifeforms on it. 5/5 Go to Comment
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Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Trans World)
Murometz's comment on 2006-07-17 09:52 AM
A very fun read! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-08-01 10:11 AM
Cool! I like these. Though the visual description puts me in mind of Daleks. Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-15 04:05 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-15 10:49 AM
This could also be a Castle Falkenstein item as well. I like the period and the period plus magic and or steam punk elements is quite fun.

I like the basic item and its conception. The lovely detail added by some of the example items were a nice touch. The piece is well written, with nice details, and minor dramatic hooks. The NPC almost deserves to be written up. Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-15 09:45 AM
I like the idea too-one could get some strange creatures from it. Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-07-15 08:07 AM
A decent idea that got me back into that Victorian English magic setting of "Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norell" once more. Have you been reading Susanna Clarke recently?

The idea itself is alright and cute. Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
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Pariah's comment on 2006-07-15 07:25 PM
I love this line. "the dog was made much quieter and no longer relieved itself on the rug" Sheer excellance. Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
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Murometz's comment on 2006-07-15 11:04 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Pembrokes Portmanteau
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Appaloosa's comment on 2006-07-15 03:11 PM
You could put in a footstool and a puppy and come out with a corgi. That expanes where those little dogs came from. Go to Comment
Outsiders Inn
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
manfred's comment on 2006-07-08 03:20 PM
There have to be places like this. Good work. Go to Comment
Outsiders Inn
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-07-08 04:35 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Outsiders Inn
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-07-09 02:08 PM
Nicely done and executed. Nice dramatic points. The details are prevolent... and a little work needs to be done to adapt it... as you have to find a local equivalent in your world. Still a great idea. Paws Up! Go to Comment
Outsiders Inn
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-07-08 12:19 PM
5/5 for this delightful place. Go to Comment
Outsiders Inn
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-01-31 11:12 AM


Splendid piece filled with all those juicy minutae details we need as GMs when breathing life into locations.


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Outsiders Inn
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-07-13 09:27 AM
It is unique enough to label a great write up. I like it. Hell the name does it for me in and of itself. Go to Comment
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