I seriously love this sword. But what is the blades shape? Strait or curved? That is a serious problem for me, strait blades block, curved blades deflect. overall though, I'm lovin the story behind this blade. And original as anything I've ever seen. Love the magic/innate properties too. Go to Comment
Wow. Demon cattle, that's not something you see every day. Really not something you'd think about, either, until it came and ATE you. And tempermental bulls are dangerous enough to begin with, adding demon blood will only make them so much more fun. Go to Comment
I really like the submission, I just think that "Fiendish Cattle" is kind of a tame and uninspired name for it... How about "The Demon-Cattle of Djueria" or the "Black Herd of Tiergart" or something like that? Go to Comment
Love it! I love how these beasts are vicious, demon tainted creatures, and yet are still simply animalseven though they radiate evil there is no intended malevolence to them, and they still have their own instincts ( They're not maliciously destroying the crops with rot - they simply do it for easier digestion!
I can see this being used as a special event at the end of a rodeo! And when the bull kicks you off, run for your life before it decides to eat you! Go to Comment
Added Hazards paragraph and changed the name from Fiendish Cattle to the Demon's Herd. Name was both tame, and lame. Ack!
Had to add the hazard paragraph, really an oversight on my part. The black herd is more dangerous since they have tainted blood, and have qualms about eating horses, cattle, humans, rotten meat, its all pretty much fair game. Go to Comment
I love creatures like this, and I cant even put into words why that is. I like how you broke the critter down into leather, tallow, cheese, etc. I dub you the Cranial Butcher. Nice Scras! Go to Comment