really nice, another niche in the cosmic era.
as always the tone is there in the content's example: "...caused a large amount of collateral damage. The raid has been made into 6 feature films and over 30 interactive CogNet games." Little drops of world like this tells us what combat and death means to these people. Nice line that one.
But you are still using your god voice or your haughty academic voice. I still think we (you included) would get more world building out these posts if you forced yourself to write it in the voice of a cosmic era character. Don't think detracts from the idea, I get it super fun fast and deadly pretend space planes.
Three dorky questions:
So did the Corsair's take out the Zonda's on the ground or are we supposed to take away something about the superiority of one craft over another?
How are you explaining anti-gravity?
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The "forced induction plasma induction systems"does that have some kind of ongoing spark plug type power source?