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7 Things Wrong with Godzilla 2014
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - Genre)
axlerowes's comment on 2015-08-18 01:40 PM

Whoa, let us not get all butt hurt* here Getting up set about this is beneath all of us. There is nothing wrong with pedantic fan boy rants about the minutia of geek culture as long we keep a sense of levity to it. I enjoyed scras’s get off my lawn rant here and I replied with my own absurd rant ( just with more typos). I said it was fun to write and read...don't confuse the message. I want Scras to write more such movie critiques. I will agree with them or disagree with them as I see fit, but I promise I will enjoy them. Plus dissecting other mediums and story telling helps us refine our own craft (as it is).

Scras is also right to point out these movie take massive resources to produce and as a result we should be harsh of them because they should be worth it. As members of the community that pays for these movies we have a duty to tell the world when they suck. (that is right, by refusing to watch J.J. Abrams material I am saving humanity) I get it. Scras wants a better Godzilla movie. Scras cares about Godzilla. It is part of his identity. But so is the citadel.

He also right, we can’t respond to citadel content the same way we respond to movie. But we can care about it as much if not more. That is all I am saying.

If I had to choose between a world without Godzilla or a world without the Citadel I would take the world without Godzilla.

In summary, Scras you are creative, smart and insightful.


*butt hurt is a Scras, used when people are taken aback by his ruthless flogging of their preferred media or by the amount of knowledge about "stuff" he can drop on them

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7 Things Wrong with Godzilla 2014
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-08-18 01:42 PM
:Respect: Go to Comment
7 Things Wrong with Godzilla 2014
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valadaar's comment on 2015-08-17 02:18 PM
Speak for yourself!

Actually, mine aren't either... :P
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7 Things Wrong with Godzilla 2014
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valadaar's comment on 2015-08-18 12:25 PM
"Nor am I suggesting that we have these types of pedantic fan boy rants, that while fun to write and read, are not necessary for most content here."

I.e This sub is a pedantic fan boy rant.

Is this really the message you wish to convey?
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Cosmic Era: Predator Tech
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axlerowes's comment on 2015-07-19 09:51 PM

The term Yuatja is that something you made up or is that from some other source material?

I am of several minds about how to comment on this one.

First thought is whether to critique comment or vote at all. If one comments on something and the recipients gets upset then there is no point. This website is all about personal enjoyment and if you strip them of that than you shouldn’t be here. People often say critiquing is okay and necessary as long as done nicely. But isn’t it nicer not to critique at all and just offer blanket praise? Light hearted criticism is often worse cause people might take it personally. This particular case is rough because it is always rough to make negative comments about the big guys on the website. In the internet world those guys have the power to be bullys and push you around or keep you from participating. Indeed the first time I ever offered Scras and Muro serious criticism I was so worried about doing it I sent it to them as a PM. They were cool about though and I later posted and voted. Critiquing and voting is the game of the citadel. But if push comes to shove if somebody asked me to give them a higher vote, or change my comment I would and I have.

Additionally, in the case of Scras, he always makes a point to say that he writes most of this for himself out of some compulsion. I get that. If there are four winds of the citadel than self-indulgent post has to be one of them. If somebody is posting just for them then maybe should you get off their lawn? But if one posts it up here and not in the forums than it must be because one wanted that piece to be evaluated.

Finally, I am also worried that on this website that I am the guy playing too hard. I am that guy playing full court D in pick up basketball, stealing bases in softball or blocking on the run in flag football. It is always a debate whether to try and be brief and light-hearted, but that can be ambiguous. And perhaps Scras and the cosmic era are special and deserve more attention.

One of the risks I have seen when you write for the cosmic era is that you spit out banal regurgitations of the inspirational material. In this particular post you simply describe the items from Predator movie. You mention a few things about the cosmic era (it could drive you insane or what have you) but you don’t integrate it. You already have arcano tech as a concept that give you carte blanche for most sci-fi stuff. Above, just like in your recent Cosmic Era Avenger’s post, all you do is describe the characters from the movies with new techno babble rationales for their powers and abilities (though I did think /Hulk, equipment: pants/ was funny). Contrast this to what you have done with G.I. Joe. You have taken the material and visual minutia of the Cobra faction from tv show and turned into a subversive and sympathetic terrorist group in the cosmic era. None of the story points are the same, but just a few details are kept, the window dressing is kept. I make have the logo of Cobra but it is really Amerika Command. It is a truly re-imagining. You failed to do that with the Predator tech stuff and the Avengers and thus you waste our time and yours. People like to read articles about stuff they already know, it makes them feel connected and comfortable. It sometimes fun to see lists of your favorite movie villains or the coolest movie guns. Your stuff on the Avengers and the Predator tech is fun in that regard, but not as cosmic era a post. I feel this whole discussion, your brain storming of with regard to how to integrate the tech, would be better suited for the forums.

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Cosmic Era: Predator Tech
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Aramax's comment on 2015-05-16 09:29 AM
4.5/5 Ahh good stuf. Great notes for setting. Gotta love anything Preditor! Go to Comment
Skeleton Bow
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Cheka Man's comment on 2015-04-22 12:52 PM
A new original thing. 5/5 Go to Comment
Skeleton Bow
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Dozus's comment on 2015-04-22 02:05 PM
This is handy to have for any army of the undead. I wonder what qualities are to be considered in the strength of the bow. With no string, what's the tension on the bow (or does it not matter, since the dead do not tire)? What range do ethereal arrows have? Go to Comment
Skeleton Bow
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Murometz's comment on 2015-04-22 09:28 PM
Read the title and would have bet money the bows were crafted of Skeleton spinal columns. I stand corrected! Nice amount of detail with few words~ Go to Comment
Skeleton Bow
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Veretrix's comment on 2015-08-04 06:27 PM
I'm really impressed with this concept. I never would have thought that you could take something so simple (a bow) and turn it into something that could cause even an experienced adventurer to second-guess himself the next time he runs into a group of simple level 1 skeletons, or even a type of graveknight that specializes in ranged combat, perhaps? I applaud the creativity and the ability to get the idea of such an unorthodox weapon into so few words. I look forward to potentially implementing this type of weapon in a future game. Go to Comment
Vingian Array
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
axlerowes's comment on 2015-09-04 01:04 PM
This is fantastic, one of the best CE posts I have ever read. It kind of reminds me of the post-Hue Lore Borg with their emotional collective.

“The data recordings show a brief but violent staff 'correction' as several unpopular members were eliminated from the collective, followed by a moderate amount of procreative activities.”

This is frightening. The hive mind as the ultimate mean girl clique. I wonder what feature made people unpopular.

There is very little surplus verbiage, all the voices are clear and there are several fun vignettes. I do hope Edward Evans is a short story somewhere and I do like the Bond collective idea. Go to Comment
Vingian Array
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-09-11 09:02 AM
This is good - this is real Sci Fi here - pushing the edges of what we expect.

This could easily be the basis for fiction! Go to Comment
Vingian Array
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2015-09-11 09:02 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Vingian Array
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Aramax's comment on 2015-05-16 09:34 AM
5/5 Very Nice. Huge utility and I can think of dozens of permutations. Spectacular....in other words typical Scras. lol Go to Comment
Vingian Array
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Aramax's comment on 2015-05-16 09:43 AM
Green Beret Array- a small team of highly skilled and slotted Special Forces combatanats can turn a large force of "peasants" into a super soldier unit in almost zero time. Go to Comment
Jarnasacksy
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Scrasamax's comment on 2015-04-16 12:45 AM
Update: Rescued from Deletion Go to Comment
Proxy
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Scrasamax's comment on 2015-04-13 08:41 AM
1. OOPS! Addressed the leftover note, and did some spellchecking.

2. Pragmatism is a common element of the Cosmic Era, and rather than accepting handicaps and disabilities, it is more common for them to me addressed with biotech, arcanotech, and other applications of morally questionable science, Blind? No braille, you get cyber eyes. Down Syndrome? Corrected in the womb, or treated with genetic therapy.

3. I've personally had people bring up the 3 Laws and find them more useful as artificial constructs for creating paradoxes and logical problems to vex machine minds. The 3 Laws are familiar, and I could see them being used even if it's just in marketing.

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Proxy
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Kassy's comment on 2015-05-01 09:32 AM
Have a 5 from me also!

Brilliantly written, you had me hooked from the start. It's fascinating in a chilling way. Marvelous! Go to Comment
Proxy
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Gossamer's comment on 2015-04-13 06:32 AM


This is very good, you should be getting paid for this. I love the teaser text, drew me right in. A few things though;



1) Spell Check etc



"more fluff here" (remnant or reminder?)



"experience life through observation. It was initially thought that the machine mines would use the electronic systems of the structures"



"The machine has decided to make them it's next target, but rather than showing itself, it sends more proxies against them"



2)



"At first everyone was pleased, the autistic and the non-functional members of society were able to become healthy and useful members again."



If this was written from a machine's point of view, then alright I guess. But it does come across as quite offensive and cynical.



3)



The 3 Laws of Robotics were pretty much made obsolete not long after they were created, by Asimov himself. As he explored the philosophical quanderies in his books and came to the conclusion that the 3 laws had loopholes and just didn't cut it. While most people still believe in them, people involved with robotics or robots themselves should be aware of this, so to even implement them in the first place would be like building a boat with a hole in the bottom and hoping it won't sink. Maybe just add the word revised to it, keeping it vague.

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Cosmic Era: Vade Mecum
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Scrasamax's comment on 2015-04-08 12:41 AM


NESS Act



The Near Earth Space Supremacy Act is a chartered mutual defense agreement signed between the Atlantic Federation, the Pacific Rim Coalition, the Eurasian Alliance, Free India, and the South African United Republics. The Act sets up protocols for joining forces for the common defense of Earth from an aggressor acting from outside of the planet. The NESS Act was formulated as a defensive stratagem to deter the potential for hostilities should they develop between Earth and the colonies on other planets in the Solar System.

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