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Intersectionality and Protoculture
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Murometz's comment on 2017-02-08 02:46 PM
I loved every word of this. This is pretty special Scras! Go to Comment
Intersectionality and Protoculture
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Aramax's comment on 2017-01-29 10:18 AM
OK, I think Ive read this enough to comment, Youve got a decision to make with this. There is a aweful lot to take in here: Do you leave it as is or break into component parts? My vote is to leave it as is, as difficult as it was for me to read and as much as this will impact how many people will actually go to the trouble of digesting it. and giving it a fair shot. I think if you break this up people will have a greater problem understanding the whole. I was unsure after my fiirst read, but now I am sure.
1)Leave as is
2) this is ready to launch Go to Comment
Intersectionality and Protoculture
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Aramax's comment on 2017-01-30 10:14 AM
5/5 Ok it's a long difficult read but it's SO worth reading a couple of times to truely follow!
My guess is there is about a 30% chance some of this isnt fiction, just enough of a possibility to make me nervious. If this isn't Golden, Nothing is.(don't think you could do anything to make it an easier read and def feel it should NOT be broken up. Go to Comment
Intersectionality and Protoculture
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Longspeak's comment on 2017-02-03 12:30 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Butcher Boys
NPCs  (Extras)   (Domestic/ Craft)
EchoMirage's comment on 2017-01-27 07:52 AM
I feel honoured :D
If I were to suggest, it needs more hot sauce and poison! Go to Comment
The Butcher Boys
NPCs  (Extras)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Cheka Man's comment on 2017-01-25 09:07 PM
A nice submission and they can help or hinder the PCs or just be there as a background detail serving food until a fight breaks out when they join in. Go to Comment
The Butcher Boys
NPCs  (Extras)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Murometz's comment on 2017-01-31 03:12 PM
Setting the scene...

John Wick enters restaurant..."Table for one, please." Go to Comment
The Butcher Boys
NPCs  (Extras)   (Domestic/ Craft)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-26 02:24 PM
The Butcher Boys
NPCs  (Extras)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Aramax's comment on 2017-01-26 02:03 PM
4/5 Ok Cheka,yea I'll give him a 4 for whipping this out in 15 Min. Go to Comment
The Butcher Boys
NPCs  (Extras)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Longspeak's comment on 2017-02-03 12:37 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cykranosh Ader-Wissenschaft
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Cheka Man's comment on 2017-01-21 08:23 PM
Cykranosh Ader-Wissenschaft
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
axlerowes's comment on 2017-01-25 10:49 PM
A Solid footnote, the little speech at the start helps set the tone. Go to Comment
Cykranosh Ader-Wissenschaft
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Aramax's comment on 2017-01-25 03:03 PM
3.5/5 Not your best work here Scras. Kinda boring. Needs examples of tech being worked on BADLY!!!!! Go to Comment
Bastian
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-20 09:05 AM
Val is correct, I intended to make a fast and dirty 30 Lovecraftian fellows sub, the Bastians got too long and demanded its own sub. Need to trim the 30 references out. Go to Comment
Bastian
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
Scrasamax's comment on 2017-01-20 09:06 AM
Also went with the slightly more awkward Bastians instead of the easier Bastet because I want to keep the two separate. Bastians are lovecraftian aliens, bastet are werecats Go to Comment
Bastian
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
Cheka Man's comment on 2017-01-19 08:31 PM
Fun but unfinished. 4/5 Go to Comment
Bastian
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-20 07:18 AM
Cheka - I don't think _this_ submission is the 30 itself, only an entry in a bigger one, perhaps a codex.
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Bastian
NPCs  (Extras)   (Travelers)
Aramax's comment on 2017-01-19 04:25 PM
THANX SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5 HOH IN YOUR FUTURE!!!!!!!!!!! Go to Comment
The Spitzkoppe Excavation
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
Cheka Man's comment on 2017-01-16 07:17 AM
Very interesting.No wonder they covered it up. Go to Comment
The Spitzkoppe Excavation
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2017-01-17 11:37 AM
This definately raises more questions then it answers, for sure. Mystery on top of Mystery.

Also "Armed with this knowledge, they took one of the larger codices, and successfully hooked a computer network to it, and promptly melted down the network. "

What kind of morons did they have for sysadmins? :) "You're going to hook _what_ up to my network? I don't think so."

Hooking it up to a single isolated computer as the first step would have been much more likely.

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When The Wind Blows

       By: Murometz

One day a a wind begins to blow out of the West. The next day it gets stronger. And stronger still the next few days. Eventually (and fortunately), the speed of the wind tops out at a steady fifty miles an hour, but continues to blow. Soon an entire kingdom is wondering why it's not abating. The weather mages deem it unnatural but can't seem to banish or control it. The priests of various faiths claim it's divine. The End-Of-Days crowd is having a field day with their predictions of doom. No one knows why the gale persists. When inquiring with neighboring kingdoms, it seems they too suffer from a persistent western mistral. Eventually the populace begins to adapt to living with a twenty four hour a day wind. Always from the West, and perpetual. What could be causing this? A raging Elemental king? a curse from the gods? an unearthed artifact? Or has Nature itself gone haywire?

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