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Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
EchoMirage's comment on 2014-10-12 06:02 AM
I like the concept a lot, and think this is an excellent piece.
It's just, I sense that the creative force behind it made it stumble over itself in the effort to get written, and it feels hurried in places, and I'd welcome more detail in others.
(I'll change my vote to a higher one then)

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Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
Dozus's comment on 2014-09-08 09:10 AM
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Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-08 11:23 AM
A very good writeup - lots of details and the tendency for these people to store stuff extradimensionally helps tie up the loose ends of where the heck are all the artifacts.

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Glassenheim Foundation
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2015-01-19 10:26 AM


Quite the society, seeming to be unassailable. A virtual Death Star for your hero's.



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Death in the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
MCoorlim's comment on 2014-08-26 10:17 PM
I'm a sucker for well thought out science fiction essays. Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-08-21 11:58 PM
I'm glad, and thank you for the solid comment Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-08-22 11:16 PM
Handy, and describe most Shadowrun or Leverage groups quite well, (and supers teams to a certain extent) and can be a handy article to present to players when writing up characters to give everyone an idea of what role in the team they wish to fulfill and manage expectations. Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2014-08-30 06:40 AM
Adding this to my Handy/Tools list. Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
Stork's comment on 2014-08-21 11:26 PM
This is a great summery for the writer to get there characters in order before the real writing begins. With this kind of well rounded group, it provides a way to get whatever needs doing done. It always seems it is easer to find a reason to NOT be able to do something (you cant make it too easy for our heroes) than it is to INVENT a way to do it. The Tank is much better choice than the Brain to threaten a person for information. However, the Brain might be able to give the Tank information to make the job easer.

This is also a great guide for a Game Master to guide their players into certain rolls for great gameplay. Imagine a party coming into town and none of them wanted to talk to the local people (the Face) to get information, rumors, bargain for prices, lie there way into the Dukes party, exc.

This will help me greatly! Thank you very much for this information. Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
custos's comment on 2014-08-22 03:38 AM
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7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
MCoorlim's comment on 2014-08-21 09:59 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
MCoorlim's comment on 2014-08-21 10:01 PM
I like it. Good, if not revolutionary, information presented in an easily digestible format. Useful to writers, useful to gamers. Go to Comment
Federation Ship Types
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2015-04-09 03:14 PM
A nice set of ships. Very detailed. Love this kind of stuff. Go to Comment
Federation Ship Types
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Kassy's comment on 2014-08-18 11:11 AM
I wish that I hadn't read this sub now! It's good, really good, but I just want to grab a couple of the ideas and work them into the 30 Starships sub that's been in my to-do folder the last 3 months. Guess I'll come back to that one once this has left my grey cells.

More good stuff from you Scrasamax :) Go to Comment
Necrotrons
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
axlerowes's comment on 2015-02-06 06:53 AM
There is a lot here and it is a fun idea: robot zombies or possessed supernatural robots. I like the idea of these cult members that corrupt machines. If I was going to roll up Cosmic era character, I might to for a parapsychic that focuses on exploiting arcanotech in machines....kind of like evil technomancer. Though I like the ideas alot this does have the cult of done feel to it. But you did get it out there.

But at a more thematic level I am starting to feel that all roads in the cosmic era lead to arcanotech, which i am worried might give the cosmic era a center or source of corruption, I always liked the idea of the cosmic era being a hollow vapid culture that was corrupt and awful in its very nature. But not because there was single force behind it, but because taken as whole all the petty feuds, egos, delusions, and self-indulgent conceits of individuals synergized to rot society. I like the idea that society had become corrupt just because it indulged its own group think, and decadent corruption of the cosmic era was the end result of this herd movement. I think the cosmic era value set could still exists without arcanotech, but theme wise arcanotech seems to be the root of many problems. However if all roads lead to or out of hell (river of souls) and that is your theme, ain't nothing wrong with it. I had just been getting a slightly different vibe.

Thought:
I know I rallied against it, but perhaps this centering, that the arcanotech is providing, could be defused by bringing up some of the other forces of destruction, and divorcing them from arcanotech. Namely the alien invasion and super computer cabal that is running society. If you take arcanotech away from those two forces, but keep them powerful than when you lift up the metaphorical rock in the cosmic era you will find several disgusting horrors lurking beneath the surface, not just one lynch pin of awfulness. Furthermore, if the aliens and the supercomputers don't have arcanotech than arcanotech maybe humanities trump card or nuclear option. Humanity may be forced to embrace (sell their souls to ) arcanotech in order to resist the rise of the machines or the alien invasion.

How does a necrotizing freeze gun differ from a normal one? Go to Comment
Necrotrons
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-14 12:38 PM
I like these - brings back visions of Starcraft with infested units, but its still very cool.

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Necrotrons
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Kassy's comment on 2014-08-18 11:03 AM
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Teratology
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-08-12 10:36 AM
I'm sure you are aware of pink slime and mechanically separated meat, I had the same food horror vibe in mind with the noxious flesh of the kaiju being rendered and chemically treated to render it safe for human consumption. Add in the whole process of the Japanese whaling with with harvesting and processing ship, or the other ships that catch and tin fish while at sea, and it all just came together.

Once properly treated with a bleach wash (which creates its own toxic fumes combining with chemical agents in the kaiju flesh) the meat is then heat sterilized and given a second treatment of gassing to kill any thermophilic bacteria still in the product. Large grinders and chippers then reduce the muscle fibers into smaller pieces where it is treated to a 24 stint in a MRSA fermenter where flesh eating bacteria break down the tough tissue. A blast of radiation to kill the microbes, then another trip through the grinders and it is ready to be tinned and distributed to the food manufacturers who use the lowest grade meat products, ala fast food joints, cafeterias in poor slums, and emergency food rations. Go to Comment
Teratology
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
valadaar's comment on 2014-08-12 09:57 AM
This is an excellent treatment of the Giant Monster vibe, apart from the creatures as deadly contaminates being as strongly put as they being a source of food/fertilizer. Though, given the low value of the individual in the Cosmic Era I guess they are not necessarily at odds.
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Teratology
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Kassy's comment on 2014-08-18 10:57 AM
A cool submission integrating the quest into your setting. I love your Cosmic Era subs Scras! Go to Comment
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