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7 Things About Writing for the Cosmic Era
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Ted's comment on 2013-01-29 06:27 AM
I think this helps set the tone that you're working for, although it seems a little thin on actual content. Go to Comment
7 Things About Writing for the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
Forganthus's comment on 2013-02-07 07:18 PM
No, this is perfect. This SHOULD be thin on content. It's a well-written description of the themes. Every setting should have one these.

Also, I have heard every single one of these songs, and maybe I'm biased.

5/5 Go to Comment
7 Things About Writing for the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
Dossta's comment on 2013-03-08 01:23 PM
Well deserving of a 5. It provides the detail needed to explore each of the setting's major themes, yet doesn't overstay its welcome. What a splendidly horrible world you have built, Scras. I wish more settings had a guide like this. Go to Comment
Environmental Parapsychic Powers
Systems  (Mystical)   (Specific)
Scrasamax's comment on 2013-01-30 08:28 AM
They are channeling energy from the River of Sorrow which manifests as flames in the case of pyros and the other direct energy parapsychics. Go to Comment
Environmental Parapsychic Powers
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Scrasamax's comment on 2013-01-30 10:36 AM
Pyrokinesis is the manifestation of light and heat that appears as flame, but lacks fuel. It is not consuming either solid fuel or oxygen from the atmosphere. So, yes, it could be manifested in a vacuum.

These parapsychic abilities within the setting of the Cosmic Era are a function of arcanotech which in and of itself is neither technology nor magic but something unwholesomely between the two. Go to Comment
Environmental Parapsychic Powers
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-29 05:22 PM
This is clearly written, well formatted and fun.

Are we thinking the pyro's just catalyze stuff to heat it up and catch it on fire, cause the way you seem to describe they are creating "fuelless" fires, which would suggest direct energy...something EMish. Does this mean they can create or channel energy? Could they make beams of light or gamma radiation? Go to Comment
Environmental Parapsychic Powers
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-29 05:23 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Environmental Parapsychic Powers
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-30 10:22 AM
In a sci-fi setting though people will ask what is that energy. Could these fuelless flames work in a vacuum? Go to Comment
Environmental Parapsychic Powers
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Morte's comment on 2013-01-30 04:28 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Gun Adept
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-23 12:02 PM
I like this idea - and I was sure I commented before. The combination of parapsychics powers with gunplay works well together.

This class could fit well in Rifts.


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Gun Adept
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
Ted's comment on 2013-01-26 03:20 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Gun Adept
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
Morte's comment on 2013-01-26 02:03 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Newarks
Society/ Organizations  (Artistic/Performance)   (World Wide)
Morte's comment on 2013-01-22 02:11 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2013-01-16 08:45 AM
I am writing a novel Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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Scrasamax's comment on 2013-01-16 10:27 PM
The main character, lol Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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Scrasamax's comment on 2013-01-16 11:08 PM
You are right, presenting this as a conversation, a round table between several people with different positions would be a more interesting and variegated submission. It also would likely end up in the forgotten wasteland of the In Work box.

The format isn't the best, but it's out there, and it's effectively done.

To answer the first part of your question: The things I have presented in the submission are demonstrable facts, and not biased in favor of, or against the Atlantic Federation.

It's unabashed militarism is present in it's foreign policy that is predominantly shoot first, worry about why later, it's large military, active propaganda, and an entertainment culture that is much more 1980s (pro-military GI Joe, A-Team, Airwolf, etc) than would be perceived as tolerable today. The proof of it's space exploration program is that the Atlantic Federation has cities on the Moon, Mars, Ganymede, as well as full size city habitats in Earth and Lunar orbit. It also has the largest space fleet of commercial, civilian, exploration, and military spacecraft. The Atlantic Federation designed and built the Arc reactor, which is the centerpiece of hypertechnology, as well as things like Battlemechs and so on. As for the CogNet, it's technology was developed primarily in the European side of the Federation, and the first node of the CogNet, the 0.0 location is in Switzerland, and the CogNet expanded from there. Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-16 10:21 PM
Who is the novel about? Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-16 10:37 PM
"The Federation is known for it's unabashed militarism, space exploration program and being the first NEG, the pioneer of hypertechnology, and the point of origin for the CogNet. "
Who know these things? Your fictional geo-political summaries would carry more verisimilitude for me if they were less demonstrative and more controvertible. It would be more telling I believe to have two or three informed citizens of Scras's mind sit around and discuss the Atlantic Federation than these primary school textbok style summations that have single point of few for millions of people.

Having the enemy subs having free reign of the ocean provides a great story telling leaver, I like the idea of being able to drop agents from foreign powers in with relative ease. Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-16 10:38 PM
Well played sir Go to Comment
Atlantic Federation
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benTM's comment on 2013-01-16 08:15 AM
You have again amazed me. Are you writing a novel or have you professionally written and gotten anything published? Go to Comment
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