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Podvadom
Locations  (City)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2016-01-05 07:37 PM
Scras, was just reading about these things in a Nat Geo mag today, in an article called "remnants of a failed utopia" :) Apparently the soviets made these prototypes to use against US navy subs, but never mass produced them.

But of course they reminded me of this sub, so...

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Podvadom
Locations  (City)   (Water)
Alaknog's comment on 2016-01-04 01:59 PM
Interesting idea. I like Neo-Soviet's engineers skills.

But I have one question.
It's you world, you rules and you Neo-Soviet's.
But. Why MorePOLOZHINYE? I can't remember meaning of "polozhinye" suitable for this. Or I don' understand something important. Go to Comment
Podvadom
Locations  (City)   (Water)
Alaknog's comment on 2016-01-05 01:24 AM
Podvadom - great variant!
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The Cursed Cup of Immortality
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Scrasamax's comment on 2015-12-30 02:22 PM
Update: Not going to finish this one, but the basic premise was that the cup was actually a cursed relic that was found and used by villains and such as a trap. Those who drink from the cup are granted immortality, but only so long as they regularly use the cup, and while they cling to life, they lose their will to live, are overcome by ennui, melancholy, or otherwise eventually chose to end their own lives, but generally not before causing a good deal of carnage along the way. Go to Comment
The Cursed Cup of Immortality
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2016-03-27 09:57 PM
I think this as a whole is fine. I echo Moonlake only in that it has been done, but the thing I found most enjoyable is the fact it is written as you would find it in a source book of information. It gives perfect detail on what the players would find or know about said item on how well they either researched it or however the system or game your playing determines information checks.

I like it. And the fact it is simply a trap used by villains is a point winner for me. Go to Comment
The Cursed Cup of Immortality
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valadaar's comment on 2016-01-11 11:09 AM
Quite cool - would fit in quite well with the Conan universe...
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The Cursed Cup of Immortality
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-12-31 01:12 AM
To me, this is complete and probably can be used as-is in a game. I was never taken much for the idea of the Holy Grail and spin-offs but I'm giving this a score of 4 purely on the prose in this piece. Go to Comment
Scrasamax's comment on 2016-01-04 02:54 PM
It's not going to be finished, which it why it's been kicked out. Go to Comment
Scrasamax's comment on 2016-01-04 03:17 PM
Comment, vote, doesn't matter. There was too much with the two entries to delete it, and I was basically cleaning house on my in work box. Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2016-04-18 11:21 AM
The two are pretty darn cool - the vault could easily be the start of a campaign!
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Dossta's comment on 2016-01-04 01:02 PM
This isn't finished yet. Might be a very cool submission when all 7 entries are fleshed out, but I'm not going to vote on it until then. Go to Comment
Dossta's comment on 2016-01-04 03:02 PM
Ok. Do you want us to vote on it, or leave it alone then? Go to Comment
Alethia Goodchild
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-12-31 01:19 AM
This NPC has some promise- giving her a maternal urge is a nice touch to counterbalance her praying mantis/black widow side. But overall, this is a very snapshotish sub. If this is a character sheet, I might give it a higher score. Go to Comment
Alethia Goodchild
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Dossta's comment on 2016-01-04 01:00 PM
Squeaks by on the hook with Neal Goodchild -- I loved the concept of a being being genetically "coded" to just one other mate. Mass production implies that there might be more of her around (although not with her history or asylum), and therefore possibly more than one Neal Goodchild model for the party to encounter. Go to Comment
Goldenrod Autonics
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (World Wide)
Dossta's comment on 2016-01-04 12:54 PM
Ha, the Ferari of autons. Was going to bring up C-3PO, but you beat me to it. "Goldenrod" is a nice brand name.

However, this is basically the content from a stub or a single 30s entry, albeit beefed up a bit in word count. There's really not much here (appearance, luxury status, one or two traits). This might be a more useful article if it was a full list of auton manufacturers (or auton models), from the low-end to the high-end, including "custom" or "special" models. Go to Comment
Phenocladistics
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2016-01-04 12:03 PM
I'm open to suggestions because I'm not happy with the name, it is clunky, doesn't abbreviate well, and feels like something Apple would use to describe the design philosophy behind a light switch. Go to Comment
Phenocladistics
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Scrasamax's comment on 2016-01-04 02:53 PM
In the Cosmic Era I can see there being a blurry line between what is acceptable genetic modification, such as genefixing, or the outlandish but rather harmless stuff like making yourself look like a cat, elf, or dranaei? and what is making a weaponized human.

Most nations and organizations capable of genetic modification kinda crap all over the no supersoldiers edict from the Tycho convention, mostly because the conventions are kinda like the League of Nations, looks good on paper, but has no clout, no teeth, to enforce it's rulings. Go to Comment
Phenocladistics
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-04 11:01 AM
A good sub, though the name is a bit too different to grasp.

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Phenocladistics
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2016-01-04 03:14 PM
This comment of mine is somewhat ironic - I had the Zoimorphisits School of Magic which is not much less of a mouthful, but shares similar bio-modding, with magic of course.

Genomorphing? - This is already in use in a few places.

Clade is a word I literally learned yesterday when looking at wikipedia about how closely related puffins are to penguins (they are both birds, that's it..). It a nice technical word, but hardly common.

Biogenesis? - Creation of new types of life from other living things.
Transhumanics?





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Phenocladistics
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Dossta's comment on 2016-01-04 12:36 PM
Second val on the name, though I have no alternatives to suggest. Puts me in mind of that Star Trek character, Dr. Bashir -- a genetically enhanced superhuman. In that society, the penalty for genetic modification of any sort was that the child would not be allowed to practice medicine or join the military. Their parents would face prison time. The fear was that opening the door to any of this would lead to another war with Khan-like superhumans, and I can understand that position.

Yet how could we possibly justify NOT doing this? GeneFixing would be a miracle; we could cure everything from bad eyesight to Alzheimer's, and stop the Autism epidemic in its tracks. Some may call the product inhuman or superhuman (or mutant, if they wanted to be nasty), but I can see this becoming the eventual norm in society. Go to Comment
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