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Civilian Craft in the Cosmic Era
Items  (Transports)   (Campaign Defining)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-09-24 09:55 PM
Your submission deserves a vote on it. :) Go to Comment
Navarch Ariana Sterngood
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
EchoMirage's comment on 2014-10-08 01:52 PM
I think they don't even want to restore her, or to substitute the hormones. Why deal with puberty when you can have a perfectly stable kid general?

Possibly, I'd revisit what kind of body she chooses for herself; it might not be girlish teen androids. The gamer in her might choose a body that appears imposing, epic and still cool, an iconic over-the top sculpt that has nothing to do with how she might have looked if not for her sickness. Go to Comment
Navarch Ariana Sterngood
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Dozus's comment on 2014-10-02 09:32 AM
Interesting. Kind of an Ender Wiggin in a jar. Go to Comment
Navarch Ariana Sterngood
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-15 03:05 PM
Can I say, I feel bad for her? Which is a good thing. A somewhat tragic powerful presence, messed up in head, and a damn interesting character for a novel. I imagine you can go many ways with her...good, bad, other. The 27 pounds of brain and suspended viscera is a jolting image.

I'm going to have to look up what the heck an Ender Wiggin is now. Go to Comment
Navarch Ariana Sterngood
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-23 12:34 PM
I like this character - can serve as an antagonistic patron or enemy easily enough.
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The Singing Children
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-10-08 09:09 PM
I had a Lovecraftian unspeakable horror in mind, something that used the children as conduits. Go to Comment
The Singing Children
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
EchoMirage's comment on 2014-10-08 02:03 PM
I like; reminds me of some Steven King novels (Dreamcatcher comes to mind).
Just as a matter of interest, what is the explanation behind the phenomenon? Go to Comment
The Singing Children
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-09-16 12:15 PM
A nice new take on Zombies. Go to Comment
The Singing Children
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2014-09-29 08:21 PM


Red-rimmed eyes, red-rimmed mouth...Join the song!



I enjoyed this. Creepy and nicely written!

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Doctor Hugh Riot
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-09-16 08:12 PM
A dangerous person to mess with. Go to Comment
Doctor Hugh Riot
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-15 11:36 AM
This is a great villain. He feels worse than both Dr. Doom and Dr. Octopus.

A welcome addition to the Cosmic Era. Go to Comment
Doctor Hugh Riot
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
crucifiction's comment on 2014-10-10 07:26 AM
There were some grammatical issues here and there, but this is solid. I loved the mention of "plaid and polka dot" morality. I loved the fact that his single lingering testicle actually affects him mentally (and being that mental faculties seem to be what he is, that's quite a big deal).

I would really love to use him as a late-tier villain in my upcoming Powers for Good campaign. He's really great and he'd definitely fit in. Thanks to you, I now realise that I can use some of the villains of my own creation as submissions.

This is a truly wonderful post. It's definitely reminiscent of the four-colour days, but with a twinge of modern insensibilities. Well done. Go to Comment
Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-10-12 07:42 AM
Which sections would you like more detail in?
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Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
EchoMirage's comment on 2014-10-12 05:02 AM
I like the concept a lot, and think this is an excellent piece.
It's just, I sense that the creative force behind it made it stumble over itself in the effort to get written, and it feels hurried in places, and I'd welcome more detail in others.
(I'll change my vote to a higher one then)

(btw., Earth as both cradle and penal colony of humanity is rather funny) Go to Comment
Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
Dozus's comment on 2014-09-08 08:10 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Imbrian Culture
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Trans World)
valadaar's comment on 2014-09-08 10:23 AM
A very good writeup - lots of details and the tendency for these people to store stuff extradimensionally helps tie up the loose ends of where the heck are all the artifacts.

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Death in the Cosmic Era
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Gaming - Genre)
MCoorlim's comment on 2014-08-26 09:17 PM
I'm a sucker for well thought out science fiction essays. Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-08-21 10:58 PM
I'm glad, and thank you for the solid comment Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-08-22 10:16 PM
Handy, and describe most Shadowrun or Leverage groups quite well, (and supers teams to a certain extent) and can be a handy article to present to players when writing up characters to give everyone an idea of what role in the team they wish to fulfill and manage expectations. Go to Comment
7 Things about Team Building
Articles  (Fiction)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2014-08-30 05:40 AM
Adding this to my Handy/Tools list. Go to Comment
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