Feels like it occupies a bit of a strange spot between military and civilian - I would think the military could have better weapons, but it seems a bit too gory for civilian use. But it is a striking visual for sure. Go to Comment
I kind of love the notion that having a lightning elemental around frizzing your hair is worth installing this huge, expensive lightning rod equivalent. It kind of makes me imagine a Ghostbusters-type organization devoted to battling renegade elementals. Go to Comment
I like the voice and the detail, you did a very good job of describing a rather complex physical arrangment of objects.
On a side not, how do you go about mixing physics and modern scientific knowledge into your games? Would accept such things as lights that produce now heat, could you sufficate fire elementals by depriving them of oxygen, and do your fantasy characters even know what oxygen is?
A small group of men stares intensely at something. Coming nearer, you see puppies, obviously still young, as they are small and only learn to walk. Cute as they are, the men look serious and exchange a comment here and there, making their mother nervous. But one man keeps her somewhat calm, while looking with others on the little ones.
The puppies are a completely new dog breed. The breeder hopes for better characteristics, the other men are mostly hunters and other dog-fanciers, that were called or came from own interest. If all looks well, they will have business. But now, they are just watching.