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Broadhead Defensive Drone
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Scrasamax's comment on 2017-09-13 05:56 AM
Nice drone Go to Comment
Broadhead Defensive Drone
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Cheka Man's comment on 2017-09-13 12:37 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Broadhead Defensive Drone
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2017-09-23 08:04 AM
Feels like it occupies a bit of a strange spot between military and civilian - I would think the military could have better weapons, but it seems a bit too gory for civilian use. But it is a striking visual for sure. Go to Comment
Broadhead Defensive Drone
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axlerowes's comment on 2017-10-07 03:49 PM
Nice, I like the details, I found the opening paragraph and little confusing and wasn't sure how all the parts fit together. Go to Comment
Broadhead Defensive Drone
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valadaar's comment on 2017-09-13 02:05 PM
And of course, nothing stops modders from changing the payload....



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Projector Drone
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Scrasamax's comment on 2017-09-13 06:00 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Projector Drone
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2017-09-23 08:01 AM
I can imagine that hacking these types of drones (for pranks, increased or altered functionality, or espionage) would be pretty prevalent. I like it. Go to Comment
Projector Drone
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axlerowes's comment on 2017-10-07 03:46 PM
Not to be too gaming minded, but this a great write up for addition to a game world, you got stats, it is useful itean and an item that encourages player creativeity. I really like it.

Cooper and Jade though? Couldn't they use plastics or ceramics and keep the production costs down? ;) Go to Comment
Projector Drone
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valadaar's comment on 2017-09-13 01:50 PM
I love the technical details on this - though of course you have to assume that an image can be projected in this manner.

Would an illusion of empty air where it wasn't work? Can this provide limited stealth to hide things? Go to Comment
ZAP!Stop!
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Scrasamax's comment on 2017-09-08 06:47 AM
1995 gold pieces and it can be yours Go to Comment
ZAP!Stop!
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Cheka Man's comment on 2017-09-11 11:57 PM
Bulky but useful. 5/5 Go to Comment
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2017-09-08 08:32 PM
I kind of love the notion that having a lightning elemental around frizzing your hair is worth installing this huge, expensive lightning rod equivalent. It kind of makes me imagine a Ghostbusters-type organization devoted to battling renegade elementals. Go to Comment
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axlerowes's comment on 2017-10-07 03:42 PM
I like the voice and the detail, you did a very good job of describing a rather complex physical arrangment of objects.

On a side not, how do you go about mixing physics and modern scientific knowledge into your games? Would accept such things as lights that produce now heat, could you sufficate fire elementals by depriving them of oxygen, and do your fantasy characters even know what oxygen is?

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ZAP!Stop!
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valadaar's comment on 2017-09-07 10:41 PM
Love the detail on this one :) Go to Comment
How to be a better critic!
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Strolen's comment on 2006-01-10 12:25 PM
Good set of tips!

Will add some of my own when I get to that point.

Thanks for putting this together, hits the mark rather well! Going to have to use it on the new site with a link next to the comment box for easy access! Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2006-01-10 06:42 PM
Gotta put this in the Citadel Explained page along with Moon's Five Best Tips for Posting on Strolen's (and Other Places) Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2009-08-02 06:09 PM
You can do whatever you want! Sounds like a new submission wouldn't hurt at all if it is fleshed out enough. Then using the linkbacks would work perfect.

Ideas would be fine too if you just wanted to throw something out there, but if you are going to take it and spin it, I would do a separate submission and just link them together. Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2006-01-10 12:48 PM
Bonus for the necessity of the article. Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-01-10 12:27 PM
I don't think that Renee has found the front page submissions, has she? Go to Comment
How to be a better critic!
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-01-11 12:07 AM
This is a good critic guide because it hits on alot of good points as well as being brief. Go to Comment
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