The item itself is well described, and the story behind it is well executed. I like the item though I think its powers are a bit off, I dont see where telekinesis would come into a water aspected weapon, but that is just me. I like the splash effect and critical damage ability. Go to Comment
This would be a great weapon for my Acqua world.Merpeople would love this weapon, but barkeeps would be angry as it's owner would soak their bars and leave a trail of water whereever he/she went. Romance would be difficult for the owner of this weapon. 5/5 Go to Comment
Nice mythological take-on. (Aside: to me, it doesn't seem necessary to precisely describe the exact 'recipe' to create the weapon, especially as no one will ever repeat it again, down to minutes. But gathering dust by a single particle, each night for two years, that shows some devotion to magic. Great detail that.) Go to Comment
A rumour of the knights of some powerful king that sleep until danger threatens the kingdom.
The truth is that they were rebels, trying to split the kingdom. Once captured they were put into an enchanted sleep, protected from age and harm, until their aims have been carried out by others in which case they will awaken.
There is a loophole in the spell in that trying to take one of their weapons will also awaken them.