The item itself is well described, and the story behind it is well executed. I like the item though I think its powers are a bit off, I dont see where telekinesis would come into a water aspected weapon, but that is just me. I like the splash effect and critical damage ability. Go to Comment
This would be a great weapon for my Acqua world.Merpeople would love this weapon, but barkeeps would be angry as it's owner would soak their bars and leave a trail of water whereever he/she went. Romance would be difficult for the owner of this weapon. 5/5 Go to Comment
Nice mythological take-on. (Aside: to me, it doesn't seem necessary to precisely describe the exact 'recipe' to create the weapon, especially as no one will ever repeat it again, down to minutes. But gathering dust by a single particle, each night for two years, that shows some devotion to magic. Great detail that.) Go to Comment
A terrible affliction spreads through the land: A disease, highly contagious, which makes its victims mildly ill, but then permanently paralyzes the vocal cords. Dozens of reputed cures and protections are sold in the marketplaces, which gradually grow quieter and quieter...