Very nice, and this submission should really get some more love from the citadel! Go to Comment

no comments or votes? Go to Comment

I voted but never commented. There are quite a few very interesting concepts here, along with a nice bit of originality. Nice job Rog! Go to Comment

no one wants to take time to read Go to Comment

An interesting sub, though some of the paragraphs seem a little long, at least for me.

Well described. Good job! Go to Comment

A bit too powerful to my tastes, but not bad. Go to Comment

They have said it all. Good backstory, well executed, keep on doing it. Go to Comment

The item itself is well described, and the story behind it is well executed. I like the item though I think its powers are a bit off, I dont see where telekinesis would come into a water aspected weapon, but that is just me. I like the splash effect and critical damage ability. Go to Comment

This could be one of the only weapons able to slay the God Ma-O. Go to Comment

This would be a great weapon for my Acqua world.Merpeople would love this weapon, but barkeeps would be angry as it's owner would soak their bars and leave a trail of water whereever he/she went. Romance would be difficult for the owner of this weapon. 5/5 Go to Comment

This is a good idea that has been executed neatly. A plesarure to read. Go to Comment

I think the backstory gave me the liking I have for this. The dramatic ending of the ritual made me pause I was was so interested in what was going to happen.

Thumbs up for a good one. Go to Comment

This seems like a heroic destiny type of weapon. Unable to get close to anyone. As soon as you weild it your fate is sealed kind of weapon. Go to Comment

I'd tone down the powers a bit, but otherwise some interesting imagery and the tale is a good one. Go to Comment

Telekinesis because the bearer is able to manipulate objects using the dense Vapor Field.

I agree, I did not accurately describe all of the powers in the weapon's history. Go to Comment

(Note: there are nasty special characters in here!) Go to Comment

What they said. :)

Nice mythological take-on. (Aside: to me, it doesn't seem necessary to precisely describe the exact 'recipe' to create the weapon, especially as no one will ever repeat it again, down to minutes. But gathering dust by a single particle, each night for two years, that shows some devotion to magic. Great detail that.) Go to Comment

Interesting mythology, but when it comes to the powers... Well... It's a bit "kool powerz" for me. But it's decent. Go to Comment

Nicely presented. For what it is, it is really well done. It is a bit too Uber Mythic for me, but my tastes run towards the mundane and low fantasy. However, it is a worthy piece. Go to Comment

I really liked the one true language that all others sprang from and how it eventually fell into disuse, as well as the usage of this power. I also like the collection of the various oddments that went into making the weapon. It gives the weapon a high mythic feel. Very nice work. Go to Comment