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Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2006-02-14 12:37 AM
i see. Can't look up (like my dog)...hunt from above. Now it's coming together for me Go to Comment
Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2006-02-14 12:20 AM
I especially like the journal!! Perfectly evokes distant exotic lands. One question- why are two meter piranha/gorilla hybrids with teeth that can cut through steel and rippling arms of muscle so weak and easy to kill individually? Go to Comment
Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2015-07-28 01:25 PM
Neat -a little confusing but the comments cleared it up a bit. Very Pulb feel here.
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Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-01-11 11:16 PM
While interesting I find it lacking in substance. As a lifeform I feel it should have a few things that should be standard among submissions. I am confused as to its purpose and the reason (no pun intended) behind an insatiable hunger for life not not have a desire to feed.

The concept itself of a emotionless etherial killer is nice, but it needs a purpose and a fulfilling nature. Which I understand are its desire for food. But why do they only desire that? WHy are the desired by mages? What is the purpose behind anyone wishing to own one or covet one so?

The Reason feeds off emotion, making its target, while far wiser, a cold, emotionless, and most likely insane shell.
In their feeding do they make the source more intellilgent. By reading this line it confused me. They feed off emotion yes, but what is the by product and how does it affect the source?

I think it has promise but I also feel it needs some fleshing out. Go to Comment
Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-07 06:52 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
TheSnakeRoselynAlexandra's comment on 2006-03-18 09:27 PM
I agree with Mourgrymn but to add to that you could do alot with this so keep on working on it! Go to Comment
Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-05 11:48 AM
Okay, though I am Go to Comment
Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Forganthus's comment on 2013-02-07 04:58 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-12-20 11:33 PM
Ummm... "Seclusive" is not a word... I think you mixed together "secretive" and "reclusive", right? Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Kassil's comment on 2008-05-07 05:18 AM
Man made solar sails, that Arebek could blow him away. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Nobody's comment on 2006-01-12 02:17 PM
Secluded is a word Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Roack's comment on 2006-01-07 12:09 PM
Perhaps, though I'll leave it in there as a portmanteau. Thank you, Captain. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-05 11:13 PM
yeesh, I'm working on it. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-05 11:14 PM
I think I'm going to create a scroll called "How many things involving Arebek can Muro think of?" Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Dozus's comment on 2006-08-15 12:38 PM
Man created raisins and Arebek savored them. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-13 06:12 PM
Man became tanned, and Arebek got annoyed.

Just joshing, while waiting for you to finish this one. Sounds grim! and by that I mean interesting. I like his chainmail and boots! Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 03:32 PM
would ya' finish one of these already! :P Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-04 02:16 PM
Man created sunglasses and Arebek seethed! Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-05 11:17 PM
Man developed skin cancer, and Arebek chortled with glee!
Man chose Ra, and Arebek screamed "No no no, ME!!"
Man moved to Florida and Arebek followed
Man invented sun screen and Arebek hollered! Go to Comment
Gods of the Wider realm
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Roack's comment on 2012-02-10 11:28 AM
I'm a little late in asking this, but I'd really like to know those reasons. I think I bastardized the name from Hittite mythology. Go to Comment
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