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The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Stephie's comment on 2008-06-29 08:55 PM
Excellent work! Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Kassy's comment on 2012-04-13 08:00 AM


I can't really say anything that hasn't already been said.



Well done.



4.5/5


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Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-02-14 05:48 PM
Love it.

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Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-14 12:30 AM
When seperated from the flock and certain nerves are pinched a Bahara'hara'raha will become nearly comatose. Also, as mentioned, they don't think to look up, and considering Ylfharn hunters attack from above.... Go to Comment
Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Pariah's comment on 2006-01-07 08:01 PM
Pretty... Go to Comment
Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2006-02-14 12:37 AM
i see. Can't look up (like my dog)...hunt from above. Now it's coming together for me Go to Comment
Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2006-02-14 12:20 AM
I especially like the journal!! Perfectly evokes distant exotic lands. One question- why are two meter piranha/gorilla hybrids with teeth that can cut through steel and rippling arms of muscle so weak and easy to kill individually? Go to Comment
Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2015-07-28 01:25 PM
Neat -a little confusing but the comments cleared it up a bit. Very Pulb feel here.
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Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-01-11 11:16 PM
While interesting I find it lacking in substance. As a lifeform I feel it should have a few things that should be standard among submissions. I am confused as to its purpose and the reason (no pun intended) behind an insatiable hunger for life not not have a desire to feed.

The concept itself of a emotionless etherial killer is nice, but it needs a purpose and a fulfilling nature. Which I understand are its desire for food. But why do they only desire that? WHy are the desired by mages? What is the purpose behind anyone wishing to own one or covet one so?

The Reason feeds off emotion, making its target, while far wiser, a cold, emotionless, and most likely insane shell.
In their feeding do they make the source more intellilgent. By reading this line it confused me. They feed off emotion yes, but what is the by product and how does it affect the source?

I think it has promise but I also feel it needs some fleshing out. Go to Comment
Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-07 06:52 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
TheSnakeRoselynAlexandra's comment on 2006-03-18 09:27 PM
I agree with Mourgrymn but to add to that you could do alot with this so keep on working on it! Go to Comment
Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
axlerowes's comment on 2018-05-06 09:15 AM
This is a fantastic idea seed (with a cool title). One question, did you imagine the emotional drain being permanent? It is also interesting that see emotion as anathema to wisdom and discipline. (I personally tend to agree with you, but CBRs would create mental blind spots in their victims).


Anyway, good post there are no strong gaps or flaws in the idea but as an idea there is a lot of exploration left to do. Go to Comment
Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2014-05-05 11:48 AM
Okay, though I am Go to Comment
Cool Blue Reason
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Forganthus's comment on 2013-02-07 04:58 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-12-20 11:33 PM
Ummm... "Seclusive" is not a word... I think you mixed together "secretive" and "reclusive", right? Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Kassil's comment on 2008-05-07 05:18 AM
Man made solar sails, that Arebek could blow him away. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Nobody's comment on 2006-01-12 02:17 PM
Secluded is a word Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Roack's comment on 2006-01-07 12:09 PM
Perhaps, though I'll leave it in there as a portmanteau. Thank you, Captain. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-05 11:13 PM
yeesh, I'm working on it. Go to Comment
Arebek, The sun Crusher
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Roack's comment on 2006-04-05 11:14 PM
I think I'm going to create a scroll called "How many things involving Arebek can Muro think of?" Go to Comment
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Whale's Jaw

       By: Pieh

Whale's Jaw is a crumbling stone monument that was once in the form of a skeletal whale. Many years have past since the construction of Whale's Jaw and these days all that can be seen in the "jaw" jutting from the earth as if it is yearning for a final glimpse of sunlight before taking a plunge into the earth.

All around The Jaw are remains of oddly formed and weathered structures. They seem to have been smoothed and tumbled by severe rain or ocean currents. Most say it is just another Wonder of The World, a mystery we will never know the answer to, but some know differently... I know differently...

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