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Kissing toad
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punkcasher's comment on 2009-03-16 03:58 PM
I agree with Valadaar, cool stuff.

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Kissing toad
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tinypoisonousfish's comment on 2009-11-24 08:23 PM
Very interesting. Nice unseemly element mixed with the supernatural/religious. It would be cool at times to leave out the oracle (such as times when there just isn't one present, say from one dying and not yet having been replaced.)

This lets an aspiring querant have to crawl through a slimy passageway (or some other unwholesome path), going through hardships, perhaps a loss of status, to get to the creature - but then there should be more upright alternatives, this last option kept as a last resort, especially if the toad's hallucinatory visions are known to be more accurate, if at first puzzling.

This way, the player goes through the whole sordid ordeal, and the GM gets to play with them a bit. Just a suggestion. Go to Comment
Kissing toad
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Peppe Pepis's comment on 2009-08-06 11:52 AM
Grotesque enough to appear in my games! Nice!! Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2008-06-30 05:21 AM
I don't know if I ever gave this proper attention. Marvelous. I do love Ylfharn. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-04-14 11:59 PM
Two paws up. Well constructed, very complete, has some really nice details. You could of broken all of these up into a couple of posts (would of been my prefered format, but all is good). I am linking this to the Order of Order codex for you. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Iain's comment on 2006-05-05 11:06 AM
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-05-05 12:35 PM
well...I feel remiss in not having commented or voted on this submission. I particularly enjoyed the styles of armor as presented and the incorporation of the luzeroint. This is really nice work Roack. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-05-05 08:43 AM
You really took a long time over this. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-04-13 06:51 PM
Okay, I must say I am impressed. This is a minutely detailed society, but still...
It needs the essential pillars of a society: How is it structured? Where do they meet?

So far we have a history, a set of rules and a set of equipment / fighting styles. We need to know ranks, where they live, impact on society, etc... Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Roack's comment on 2006-04-09 10:45 PM
That's how I got the names, and the concept, actually. I use a lot of persian, middle eastern, turkish, and greek names in the Ylfharn setting. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Roack's comment on 2006-05-06 12:07 AM
Thanks for all your comments guys, and as horribly cliche as it is, I couldn't have done it without all of you. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Pariah's comment on 2006-05-07 03:26 PM
Wow... A lot of work. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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TheSnakeRoselynAlexandra's comment on 2006-04-13 09:58 PM
I agree with AG. Keep going on this one! I love the story and the back ground and I shall not make my ruling on it till it is dun. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-08 02:24 PM
Cyrus and Darius? they are Persian? Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-14 08:33 PM
You worked hard on this I know. Your love for the knights is obvious and all the interesting details puts this over the top! The tiers were great and the different armor was a unique touch. That was my favorite. Well done!

I might be adding more comments as I re-read and fully digest the info. Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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axlerowes's comment on 2012-02-05 02:55 PM


God damn this is good. Yet even now though I can still see the gaps that AG was critizing back in 06.  For example what is Bahara’hara’raha or was the Queen actually undead?  At any rate, I don't think those need be weakness, I think great RPG fiction is a jumping of point of the readers ideas.  Great world building hints at depth and back story.  This does that so well, it makes me want to play and write. 



I really can't say enough good things about it.  


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The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Stephie's comment on 2008-06-29 08:55 PM
Excellent work! Go to Comment
The Knights of Mercy and Grace
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Kassy's comment on 2012-04-13 08:00 AM


I can't really say anything that hasn't already been said.



Well done.



4.5/5


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Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-02-14 05:48 PM
Love it.

4/5 Go to Comment
Bahara'hara'raha
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Roack's comment on 2006-02-14 12:30 AM
When seperated from the flock and certain nerves are pinched a Bahara'hara'raha will become nearly comatose. Also, as mentioned, they don't think to look up, and considering Ylfharn hunters attack from above.... Go to Comment
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