I wan't thinking it would be, but I might expand on that later Go to Comment

I like this, a pretty oracle for an ugly frog. Go to Comment

My kind of sub. Twisted Roack, as everyone said, and right up my alley. Good one! Go to Comment

Yes, an excellent way to twist a fairy tale! Nice job! Go to Comment

Love the idea, reminds me of the warring dragons under the mount
Interesting connection to their god as well, the hooks seem tame except for #4 Go to Comment

I agree with Valadaar, cool stuff.

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Very interesting. Nice unseemly element mixed with the supernatural/religious. It would be cool at times to leave out the oracle (such as times when there just isn't one present, say from one dying and not yet having been replaced.)

This lets an aspiring querant have to crawl through a slimy passageway (or some other unwholesome path), going through hardships, perhaps a loss of status, to get to the creature - but then there should be more upright alternatives, this last option kept as a last resort, especially if the toad's hallucinatory visions are known to be more accurate, if at first puzzling.

This way, the player goes through the whole sordid ordeal, and the GM gets to play with them a bit. Just a suggestion. Go to Comment

Grotesque enough to appear in my games! Nice!! Go to Comment

Yeah, seriously, get on with it...
I want to see the psychedelic world that has these in it with Camscatae and Chhaya Go to Comment

Actually they've been shifted into a different world, now. Go to Comment

Green Chalice- YAH!!

"This forest is completely and utterly devoid of trees. In their stead grows an enormous mass of thickets, brambles and gigantic nettles"- YAH!! (forgot about nettles in chat hehe)

I am going to LOVE this sub!! You better keep going with MAXIMUM details!! Go to Comment

will you FINISH something pleeeeeeease! :P Go to Comment

I don't know if I ever gave this proper attention. Marvelous. I do love Ylfharn. Go to Comment

Two paws up. Well constructed, very complete, has some really nice details. You could of broken all of these up into a couple of posts (would of been my prefered format, but all is good). I am linking this to the Order of Order codex for you. Go to Comment

Superb Go to Comment

well...I feel remiss in not having commented or voted on this submission. I particularly enjoyed the styles of armor as presented and the incorporation of the luzeroint. This is really nice work Roack. Go to Comment

You really took a long time over this. Go to Comment

Okay, I must say I am impressed. This is a minutely detailed society, but still...
It needs the essential pillars of a society: How is it structured? Where do they meet?

So far we have a history, a set of rules and a set of equipment / fighting styles. We need to know ranks, where they live, impact on society, etc... Go to Comment

That's how I got the names, and the concept, actually. I use a lot of persian, middle eastern, turkish, and greek names in the Ylfharn setting. Go to Comment

Thanks for all your comments guys, and as horribly cliche as it is, I couldn't have done it without all of you. Go to Comment