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Ivory Men
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Roack's comment on 2007-04-14 01:51 AM
Yes, maybe, boiled, but I haven't quite decided; yes, and finally, can't you pass off ANY vegetable as health food? Go to Comment
Ivory Men
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-06 05:09 PM
FINISH them!! :D Its getting cold out here waiting on this Iceberg! Go to Comment
Ivory Men
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-09 07:18 PM
Scras that was my favotite part too!! The totems!! I love that concept!!

*Visualizing sailing the icy seas and seeing the totems in the distance, jutting from the ice like lonely beacons. The last testament of a bygone people and age*

Its haunting!! Go to Comment
Ivory Men
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Arminas's comment on 2006-04-09 08:59 PM
I really like this post, it wonderfully detailed and everything. I suppose the only thing I have to say is that the creation part bugs me a little, of course its probably something tied into an earlier post that I missed, lol. Anyways great post. Go to Comment
Ivory Men
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valadaar's comment on 2015-09-16 01:15 PM
Now this is a cool one, no pun intended. Nice and different and I like Arctic-flavored subs. Go to Comment
Ivory Men
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LordCoreon's comment on 2007-04-14 01:46 AM
Well my dear brother, I grudgingly complement you on your post. It's extremely inventive. I'm curious about these cabbage things. How are Uruspag's spread. how does the plant get the necessary nutrients it needs to grow. Do they taste salty? Is there different varieties of Uruspag? How is the vegetable prepared and consumed? Do you still owe me a game of magic? (yes you do). And finally could I pass an Uruspag off as health food? Go to Comment
Sirrush
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-12-05 12:09 PM
I like this to a point. I to am having trouble finding out what it looks like. Also the Tunneling Surrush, why is is called that if it is used for hauling wagons and searching for water? I was expecting an underground version that has an affinity for the earth and an ability to excavate quickly.

Over all it is a decent post, but it needs work to bring it above my 3.0 mark. I would have given it a 2.5 but it seems you have put forth some effort into it which makes it seem real to a point. Go to Comment
Sirrush
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Roack's comment on 2005-11-29 07:43 PM
Thank you for your comments Zylithian, personally I can't think of any way to describe it, and the Image you conjoured up is very similar to my own. I will probably revisit the description later or photoshop something for clarification. Go to Comment
Sirrush
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Roack's comment on 2005-12-07 06:21 PM
The Tunneling Sirrush digs for water, hence the name. Go to Comment
Sirrush
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Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-29 10:40 AM
Sometimes when one can picture something well in your mind one doesn't make a clear description. Based on your descriptions and writing style, I believe this is a good post, but I have a ton of trouble understanding what this creature looks like. I think it has four legs, because the third variant has uneven leg lengths, but that's the first time that became clear. They have smooth skin, but it is scaley - I guess snakes are smooth - is this what you meant? I don't understand what you mean by elongated scales from the shoulder blades - are they sticking out or lying on the skin? I'm picturing something like a short reptilian horse with a long (unproportional) neck and a dog's head, with smooth scales and a bumpy tail.

I like how you talk about different breeds - I think that's really good.
It would be interesting to know more about the temperment.

I think this post could be much better with a very small change in how you describe it... maybe I'm dense, but I don't understand. If you could explain better, I'd recomment/revote. Go to Comment
Sirrush
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Murometz's comment on 2015-09-16 11:57 AM
sirrush--google images Go to Comment
Sirrush
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valadaar's comment on 2015-09-16 09:05 AM
I like these critters - that they are between mammals and reptiles is a plus for me. I can almost see them in my minds eye.

Good job!

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Ylfharn
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Scrasamax's comment on 2008-10-12 01:21 AM
Nice, I like the colorful nature of the Ylfharn, and the jet black priestesses with third dragon eyes... that is just an impressive visual. I can see their clay armor being effective against thrusting weapons and arrows, but being less effective against things like clubs, hammers, and maces. Another downside is how do you fix pottery armor? Break it and you have to make a new set from scratch. Still, i get a great primitive tribal vibe from these folk. Go to Comment
Ylfharn
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TheSnakeRoselynAlexandra's comment on 2006-02-26 05:40 PM
I like where this is going. Keep it up! Go to Comment
Ylfharn
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axlerowes's comment on 2012-02-05 02:16 PM


When I read this the first time I was really frustrated and annoyed and as I started to formulate my response I realized what was frustrating me.  This idea and the write up is really awesome and I wanted more.  So I read it again and again and I realized how much crap (good crap) you have put into this piece.  I think this is a great intro to your world.  As Scrasamx said you gave us the vibe and it is a good vibe. I want to read more, give us some links. 


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Ylfharn
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valadaar's comment on 2013-04-10 11:39 AM
This feels like a teaser, as surely there is more to these folks then the intriguing picture currently presented.

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Domestic Magic
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-06 06:54 PM
This post needs to be broken down into a scroll. I will edit it and make it so. Go to Comment
Domestic Magic
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-17 12:53 PM
Updated: Updated to be a scroll Go to Comment
Domestic Magic
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-01-05 03:46 PM
The Sword of Fire, as posted here, could be a great domestic item.

http://www.strolen.com/content.php?node=2138 Go to Comment
Domestic Magic
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-01-15 11:46 AM
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